I think the vocals are loud in places but the music is very well done. You should sing them in your own language, make it it easy on yourself. Plus I think vocals sound good in Spanish and will sound good here. Give this another remix and see if you can lower the vocals a bit and you will have a great track!
Dang this is cool, loved the intro to death. The bass synth sounds like my stomach after eating too much chinese food, haha, just kiddin Spiv, this is very Spivkurlish! Keep up the great work my friend, you always make music interesting to listen to!
Sweet track, I really like the pace of this one. Nice percussion and minimal drums, it really opens up the track. This is really nice, thanks for sharing this gem!
On the baseball side of things, is that pitcher slower than the Red Sox's knuckleballer Tim Wakefield? lol!
Sojobeast took the words right out of my mouth, "allergic to cardinals ?" haha! I do like how you used an everyday event for the title.
Hey K, this is cool, no complaints here. I'm sure if you rework it you could tidy things up but overall it is a very good song idea with some nice dynamics, well done!
This is nice, so sweet and beautiful! I could almost hear the heavenly voice of Karen Carpenter in my head as I listened, ha! I use CE as well, it's nice to hear such good music made in that daw, great job, impressive!
I loved this track from the first time I heard it, great dynamics. I also think you have a knack for writing great lyrics, they tell an interesting story. Once again it was fun working with you and being patient with me, the pleasure was all mine my friend, thank you!
Thank you. There is nothing I enjoy more than writing lyrics, and also when I can sum up a good story that someone told me ... is still better. A pleasure to work with you because you "read" well you know my music and give the right environment. I am very proud to have you as a companion.
Cool, too cool! You have a great approach to singing and a distinctive voice that really adds to the music you've created. Nice effects at the beginning and end. You really hit the mark with this one, this one speake to me. So beautiful Minnette, the music is great too! ;)
Maybe a little more volume on this one. Good idea, cool acoustic guitar and singing. The idea is there, just needs some more production added to it. Hope you finish this one up, it has the potential to be a really good track. If you want any help mastering or in the production of this let me know, would be willing to help out.
This is working for me, I like the glitchiness of the drum pattern and Elaines voice is great with all the effects added to it. I had to give it a second listen because I liked it so much.
Is the cracklin sound I'm hearing at the beginning something that you added, giving it a record sound or is it just noise from the original track? I have some awesome noise reduction plugins in Audition that can remove almost any noise without damaging the desired input. If you ever need help with that just give me a shout. I've worked with several people here with noise reduction issues and I am throwing it out there so don't be afraid to ask, ok!
Great track, uplifting and well mixed, too cool, nice one PBJ! Think I'm gonna fav this one, would dl this if available, thanks!
thanks brother....yeah... I added it in because elaine original was so clean I thought it needed that extra edge right from the start... thanks for taking the time brother... make sure you listen to the original the drum track is great... thanks once again..
I've always love the vocal choir when it's added to a track and to start the track and to have it continue right through really impressed me from an arrangement point of view. Beautiful and touching knowing it is for such a good cause. Great work WaPer!
Hey Wayne!
Sorry for late reply man, i didn't get the notification about your visit to my page and for your review of this tune.
Man I'm so glad you like it. You know, what happened to Japanese people these days, i was in shock and whole thing was hit me badly, because everyone on this planet is no safe of bad power of nature... so this track is my only way to support them. poor people... in one moment they had everything, in another nothing.
Thanks for your kind comment my friend
This works for me cuz I love latin flavoured songs. The beat is perfect, the vocals were perfectly added and the instruments and percussion was great! Love it, fav and dl, thanks!
Hey Simon, nice to see you back and uploading great tracks like this one. I also hear an Enya influence in there, not a bad thing, imo. A bit of mystery and darkness combined with hope and illumination, it works though!
Nice one, very enjoyable, loved the percussion, congas and such.
Thanks Wayne, yeh just trying to quietly feel my way back into the Loop. This one was one of the tracks I had posted before just been remixed and mastered.
Thanks for the kind words and being the Humps.....
I believe in my country we are regenerated every 40 years. I hope for the best.
Anyway, this is not the country that we wanted to leave to younger people. Everyone must contribute their bit to not to commit fatal errors. I can only express my opinion and remember parts of the story that my country has forgotten. A great man in my country said: The people who do not remember history are condemned to repeat it. "I hope it does not happen that way.
Another great man of your country said: "I sing this song, what can you do?"
Thanks for your review, it is always well received.
Fresh intro, this is sweet Jamie! I've been trying to embrace midi technology more recently and every time I hear a new one by you it always inspires me as to what us guitar and bass players can put down now. This is a keeper, loved the choo choo!
I was having internet connection problems this past week when I played this track so I never got a chance to hear it or comment. Now that I get a chance to listen I can say that this is impressive, I've listened to this several times already and enjoying it each time! Ya, really DV, make this one longer!!! Great idea, the cello in the middle was demanding my attention and the percussion and the high strings were holding it all together. Gonna dl and fav, sweet one!
That stinks bud, were you able to figure out what was causing the probs? As for the track, I was thinkin along the lines of Dropkick Murphys meets KMFDM or something. Will def expand on this in a few days. Glad ya dug it. Later on!
This is a cool interpretation of dnb, liked your approach here! Liked all the percussive instruments you used. I think the vocals could use a bit of mixing towards the end but I think this is very good on so many levels. I'm gonna dl and fav this! Thanks Felix!
The drums sound great, clear, low thumpy kick. I hope someone uses this for something. Dnb isn't my genre of choice but those who do produce it should give this a go. Nice one DV!
Prech that mate. Only downside to it is that I mixed it with headphones so when I relistened to it the next day I found that the mix was a little too hot. Anyways, glad ya dug it. Later on!
I must say it was a pleasure to work with you again. Paul did a great job writing the song and I think this one is a favorite of mine. Thanks again for letting me be a part of this track!
Paul's music is wonderful (all he has done so). But I really just finished the lyrics, I thought Wayne is missing here. When two great musicians like you get together the result is great music. I have the honor of having worked with you a few times and have always done that my songs were better. I think we have a great musician and companion in Looperman: TheHumps.
Thanks.
Too cool!! Thanks for the heads up on this one, it's certainly something I dig with the folk music feel to it. Mix sounds good, new mic? It has a Decemberists feel to it. The melodica is great and I like the percussion, it adds a lot.
Good luck with the new project, you are off to a great start!
Hi my friend!
Yeah,I borrowed my son's melodica for this one and I like the sound of it.It's still my old mic but I changed the settings.
Speak to ya soon
StÃÂphane
Great feel to this one all the way through but what is to be expected from a "super group" like the one you compiled here. Quite a reaction to this track after one day being up, just amazing how very cool this track is. What can I say that hasn't been said already. Great job everyone!!
Hey Wayne..thanks buddy,it was a blast working on this track,it just shoehorned together so smoothly...hopefully we'll be able to get a few more under our belts before too long...cheers from all the guys. Dave :)
Thick and heavy guitars, nice! I use Cool Edit as well. It's a great straight forward daw.
Another way to do what Mahloo suggests is to have two guitar rhythm tracks, pan one left and one right abou 50% to start. Then zoom in to the beginning of the first note and just slightly drag one of the tracks to the right just a small amount, offsetting the tracks by just a tiny bit. This will give a thicker and a bit delayed guitar sound, much fuller sound.
You can also use the effects rack and try the chorus plugin. Turn all the moduation sliders on the top of the plugin to the left so they don't have any effect to the track except for the spread slider. Then by using the 3 sliders on the bottom of the pugin, the stereo widening and effects wet and dry sider you can widen a track. I do that with a lot of my tracks.
Good luck and have fun! Cool track and any questions just ask!
right on thank you. I tried what you both suggested and mahaloo13 was dead on the money. im going to post the results in a bit. If you guys have tracks you would like to use me on let me know. I am always down with making music.
Hey Slap, imagine if we had this technology when we were kids just getting into music....... Sounds like the apple hasn't fallen far from the tree, way to go guys, sounds great. You never seem to disappoint!!
Hi Wayne, I wonder how far technology will have advanced when Alexander reaches my age! Ipad is an awesome piece of kit which can cater for all interests due to it's extensive apps. I would have loved to have one of these when I was younger, but alas I had to make do with Pacman! lol...
Very cool FF!! Love the latin feel and especially the horns. I agree with Fani, I think if you add some percussion like timbali and some other latin percussion instruments here and there it would help. Kinda a crossover latin/techno genre, run with it, great idea!!
on On My Own by Silvestre
Take care!
Wayne
Thank you for the advise I will attempt to sing in spanish.
Sly.
on Brandywine by Spivkurl
Wayne
on Betancourt by yampaja
On the baseball side of things, is that pitcher slower than the Red Sox's knuckleballer Tim Wakefield? lol!
Wayne
The drums definitely drove this one.
Yea, Wakefield is really slow too.
j.a.
on Alergic To Cardinals by Koukotsu
Hey K, this is cool, no complaints here. I'm sure if you rework it you could tidy things up but overall it is a very good song idea with some nice dynamics, well done!
Wayne
I've been tweaking it a bit in my spare time today, but mixing this one is like trying to cram and elephant into a shoebox, lol.
Thanks for the review, I'll be visiting your profile real soon!
on pensivBreeze by bbedford48
Wayne
best wishes Bob
on Echevarria -Collab TheHumps- by Vicen
Wayne
on Black remix by vortexsurfer
Wayne
Thanks for the review and for listening
on A Real Man (Demo) by minette
Wayne
on Alone In My Head by SteveDro
Wayne
on More (Phyruis Glitch Remix) - Elaine Sharp by Phyruis
Is the cracklin sound I'm hearing at the beginning something that you added, giving it a record sound or is it just noise from the original track? I have some awesome noise reduction plugins in Audition that can remove almost any noise without damaging the desired input. If you ever need help with that just give me a shout. I've worked with several people here with noise reduction issues and I am throwing it out there so don't be afraid to ask, ok!
Great track, uplifting and well mixed, too cool, nice one PBJ! Think I'm gonna fav this one, would dl this if available, thanks!
Wayne
on Choral Choirs by WaPer
Wayne
Sorry for late reply man, i didn't get the notification about your visit to my page and for your review of this tune.
Man I'm so glad you like it. You know, what happened to Japanese people these days, i was in shock and whole thing was hit me badly, because everyone on this planet is no safe of bad power of nature... so this track is my only way to support them. poor people... in one moment they had everything, in another nothing.
Thanks for your kind comment my friend
Cheers!
on Todo Tienen su Final by MaxJC
Wayne
on Voices by Ensam
Nice one, very enjoyable, loved the percussion, congas and such.
Wayne
Thanks for the kind words and being the Humps.....
on Cartas desde el Exilio by Vicen
Keep up the good work.
Wasyne
Anyway, this is not the country that we wanted to leave to younger people. Everyone must contribute their bit to not to commit fatal errors. I can only express my opinion and remember parts of the story that my country has forgotten. A great man in my country said: The people who do not remember history are condemned to repeat it. "I hope it does not happen that way.
Another great man of your country said: "I sing this song, what can you do?"
Thanks for your review, it is always well received.
on Banjul Express by jfw
Wayne
Jamie.
on Morning Dew rmx by DonnieVyros
Wayne
on Terminal 1 by FelixMillar
Wayne
yea they do need a bit mixing
thx
on DEF DV EYE DRUMS for collab by DonnieVyros
Wayne
on Me equivoco cuando toco la Verdad -Collab TheHumps by Vicen
Wayne
Thanks.
on Green rainy cats by FrenchKid18
Good luck with the new project, you are off to a great start!
Wayne
Yeah,I borrowed my son's melodica for this one and I like the sound of it.It's still my old mic but I changed the settings.
Speak to ya soon
StÃÂphane
on THE DISTANCE by Planetjazzbass
Wayne
on Fur Elise HaruTune Remake Remix by HaruTune
Wayne
on illregulare by MLTPjames
Another way to do what Mahloo suggests is to have two guitar rhythm tracks, pan one left and one right abou 50% to start. Then zoom in to the beginning of the first note and just slightly drag one of the tracks to the right just a small amount, offsetting the tracks by just a tiny bit. This will give a thicker and a bit delayed guitar sound, much fuller sound.
You can also use the effects rack and try the chorus plugin. Turn all the moduation sliders on the top of the plugin to the left so they don't have any effect to the track except for the spread slider. Then by using the 3 sliders on the bottom of the pugin, the stereo widening and effects wet and dry sider you can widen a track. I do that with a lot of my tracks.
Good luck and have fun! Cool track and any questions just ask!
Wayne
on itech Saxobones by SLAPJOHNSON
Cheers, Slap...
on FUNKLATIN by theFISHface
Gonna dl and fav, thanks!
Wayne
Appreciate the review
theFISHface