I agree with PJT, your mixes are sounding nice Mark. I like the laid back country rock feel to this. The sliding vocals are cool. Lots to like here, well done!
Very cool piece, emotional, soothing. Nice piano work and sound. I like the dissonant sounds to make the listener say what the hell was that and why was it in there. Creates tension I suppose. Enjoyed listening!
This one slipped through the crack somehow, I know I missed it when it came out, sorry man. This is a very well constructed song. Many facets to admire, snappy drums, great guitar and some awesome vocals. There is a nice vibe to this, a chilled out and uplifting track. Well done Richie and Patricia, lovely track!
Thanks for your comments - much appreciated. New material soon - it's been busy moving back to UK and sorting out a house. Studio finished and ready to go.
I like all the space you left in this track yet there are many instruments and changes. Mix sounded pretty good in my headphones, the hand clap seemed a bit loud in the middle. There were spaces where the song lost that Japanese influence and I liked the parts that had the Asian instruments in them. I guess with an eight minute song you can do that, wander a bit. I liked it, well done, very creative!
Thnx a lot for taking the time to listen and the feedback of course, this means a lot to me.
Funny you mention the space in the track. I did this on purpose. I'll tell you why.
Just imagine a huuge sumo wrestler waking up and preparing himself for his match.When the claps starting he's warming up and when the ''dance-part'' comes in, the match has started and finishes when the slower part starts again. Btw, he won the match..lol. At the end he's tired and falss asleep again. The life of a sumo wrestler here in Japan.
Thnx again for the feedback!
Very beautiful track, wonderful piano and amazing singing. You are very talented. This song reminds me of Samson by Regina Spektor. If you are not familiar with her please look her up. I will be dl'ing this so thank you for sharing!
Pretty darn good for a first attempt. Nice smooth beat and effective vocals here and there. It has a very chilled vibe, like it. Keep up the good work!
Well done, this totally rocks Paulo! I hope you find someone to put some vocals down, it's cool the way it is but that would be the cherry on top. Guitars sound awesome, nice tone. Well done, the title deceived me a bit, thought it might be a little more subtle but no, it's in your face, hehe. The little breaks you added are solace enough.
Hey Sean, good to see you popping in here once in a while again. So glad you posted something new, you always seem to make my mind work overtime when I listen. jahknow's Dub Guild, damn, that brings back some good memories from a few years ago on the loop. I see Arkey once in a while here and we ALL miss jahknow's input and presence here.
Are you still using Ableton? I made the switch just over a year ago, worth it in my opinion. The track has moments of psychedelic flashbacks(make it stop) and lots of cool dubby things happening. Sorry for all the technical terms,lol. I listened in my headphones, nice use of the stereo field. The mix sounds pretty clear, well done to both of you.
Hope the radio station gig works out for you. I've stopped in and listened a few times but I haven't caught your show at all. I will have to make it a point to stop over and chat. Hope everyone is fine at home, take care Sean.
I'll have to share the story of the Dub Guild resurrection sometime - pure cosmic convergence episode. Simmerdown even popped up out of the woodwork feeling the pull one afternoon - so weird, that. We're trying to do what jahknow originally planned, which is a collective of like minded artists sharing resources and making available each other's work for remixing purposes. Some really awesome remixes have come out of this in the last few weeks. I'm still using Live 8 with my APC-40 and Axiom-25 keyboard, and can't imagine really working with any other DAW at this stage. My radio show tends to be Dub themed on most weeks, but I'm also doing "peregrinations" where I spend 2 hours just playing music from Africa or inspired by African musical traditions, as well as Asian peregrinations. I've played your "Lost Caravan" on one such peregrination show all ready (fit great for my stop in North Africa)! I'm on Tuesdays at 2PM EST should you find yourself able to swing by sometime. So glad to see you're still around and making awesome music, Wayne. Still look forward to sitting down with you sometime over dungeness crab and comparing life notes!
Great story behind the song. I love when being faced with a challenge to prove others that I can do something. Being able to express it in a song is an awesome way to let it out. Some of the best songs are about personal issues, it makes them real and people can relate to them on a personal level.
Martin's loops are nice. Not sure if this is punk but it was cool to listen to!
Certainly well worth listening to. Great build up to some energy then a great transition to the second half of the song, like a metamorphosis. Well done, this was constructed nicely and the production is fantastic! Fav and dl for sure, thanks for sharing!
Very nice! I like all that you did here, great use of the loops. There are some nice changes in this one that really switch it and give the song a different flavor.
Nice atmosphere, very relaxed feel you have created here. My first track of the day for me and this is a nice way to get things going. The music is cool and the vocals work pretty good. Maybe some reverb on the mans vocals in the middle of the song just to soften them a bit. I think you put together a cool track, well done.
immense art the grattitude for the time taken of listen and smooth review..also many thanx for the audio pointer, as please try another listen if you will to see how this updated version flows. indeed many thanx again, as in the day many realms of thought will venture one into many trials to pitt against stress, pains, agitations and insanity as in my book of views a note of music can truly calm the soul and turn a day of mental combat into one of joyous peace ...may peace be at your beckon .....chill!!!!!
This is a cool unexpected collab. I think the music rocks and is very cool industrial sounding track by itself. I must say Pat that your vocals are great here. I liked the backups, cool delay you used. Cool effects on all the vocals and they work great with the music.
Thanks so much Wayne! It's always good to get a review from you! I respect the fact that you are open to just about any sort of music, it's important especially being a musician yourself. I'm trying to become much more spontaneous with my song creation and my vocals, and the vocals on this were a bit of a transition I guess. I'm glad they sounded okay anyway. Thanks again!
I like that funky guitar in my left ear. Some cool changes, lot's of space but lot's going on. Sounds like a '70's movie soundtrack, I like it! Sounds great in my headphones!
Thanks allot, Wayne. I'm glad you find the sound quality ok. I finished writing my description, but you pretty much nailed what was going on in my head. When I do these retro tracks, I also like to use that aggressive panning like they did back in the day.
I like the pace and relaxed vibe going on here. For an older recording, it sounds pretty good, no complaints here. The Middle Eastern sounding parts fit well with the rest of the song. Compliments on putting this together, very cool man!
As I've written elsewhere, this sounds way better than other stuff I was doing back in 2001. Not necessarily better ideas or playing - just a cleaner, more powerful sound that still sounds good on crap laptop speakers with no bass. I'm actually still trying to figure out quite why it all sounds so good.
But one definite criticism I have is of that main drum loop (the first one you hear, out of which I could make 10,000 tracks). It's a bit too bright and loud in the mix. But I guess that's OK - not everything has to be perfect (whatever that exactly is) and this gives the track a bit of crunch and a bit of an edge.
Because of the slightly odd, eclectic and lazy way I work with my instruments and parts, my stuff always retains some rough edges and character rather than all being too clean and smooth. That's probably a good thing though I do work hard to get everything as neat as I can. But some of the roughness is in the playing, layering and effecting. I do like some little rough edges and a bit of grit. But no too much - I'm certainly no lo-fi kind of guy.
"The Middle Eastern sounding parts fit well with the rest of the song"
Yes - it's a hardly a full-on Middle Eastern track but I never do that as I don't know how. It's just one of the many flavours I add to my stuff when it manages to come out as I'm fiddling about on instruments and with synth sounds.
Thanks for checking it out. As already said - it may well be my best ever track though I'm more than happy for other people to have alternate favourites (I have a lot of stuff).
I like the staccato and single hits to intro the song. It caught me a bit off guard when the guitars kicked in. I liked the transition, really made the track interesting. I was getting into it and it stopped, wished it was longer. I will hit play again, thanks for sharing.
Cool groove, funky and upbeat. I would really like to hear some more vocals through the song, the way it is composed opens up that possibility. I thought the vocal parts you added worked pretty good though, fun ending. Nice use of the loops.
It's funny how songs come together sometimes, each song has a story. To me that is the fun in making music, the surprise in how it all comes together.
Good to see you back man! This is crazy, I now know why you put this under weird. The child's giggle was cute at the beginning and a bit possessed at the end, hehe.
Never heard of that daw, will have to check it out.
I liked the build up at the beginning and the different parts to the song. You don't hear monks throat chanting often but I think it worked good with the music. Cool track!
Glad you liked it! It took forever to decide on the monks, I tried several other vocal loops but that one seemed to fit the most with the eery feel I was going for
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TY man. Always a pleasure.
Mark.
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Thanks for your comments - much appreciated. New material soon - it's been busy moving back to UK and sorting out a house. Studio finished and ready to go.
Good to hear from you.
Richie
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Funny you mention the space in the track. I did this on purpose. I'll tell you why.
Just imagine a huuge sumo wrestler waking up and preparing himself for his match.When the claps starting he's warming up and when the ''dance-part'' comes in, the match has started and finishes when the slower part starts again. Btw, he won the match..lol. At the end he's tired and falss asleep again. The life of a sumo wrestler here in Japan.
Thnx again for the feedback!
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Are you still using Ableton? I made the switch just over a year ago, worth it in my opinion. The track has moments of psychedelic flashbacks(make it stop) and lots of cool dubby things happening. Sorry for all the technical terms,lol. I listened in my headphones, nice use of the stereo field. The mix sounds pretty clear, well done to both of you.
Hope the radio station gig works out for you. I've stopped in and listened a few times but I haven't caught your show at all. I will have to make it a point to stop over and chat. Hope everyone is fine at home, take care Sean.
Wayne
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Martin's loops are nice. Not sure if this is punk but it was cool to listen to!
Keep up the good work!
Wayne
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Well done!
Wayne
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Wayne
Thank you, I really appreciate your time in listening and commenting, pleased you liked it.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
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Well done both of you, very cool collab!
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Cheers,
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"For an older recording, it sounds pretty good"
As I've written elsewhere, this sounds way better than other stuff I was doing back in 2001. Not necessarily better ideas or playing - just a cleaner, more powerful sound that still sounds good on crap laptop speakers with no bass. I'm actually still trying to figure out quite why it all sounds so good.
But one definite criticism I have is of that main drum loop (the first one you hear, out of which I could make 10,000 tracks). It's a bit too bright and loud in the mix. But I guess that's OK - not everything has to be perfect (whatever that exactly is) and this gives the track a bit of crunch and a bit of an edge.
Because of the slightly odd, eclectic and lazy way I work with my instruments and parts, my stuff always retains some rough edges and character rather than all being too clean and smooth. That's probably a good thing though I do work hard to get everything as neat as I can. But some of the roughness is in the playing, layering and effecting. I do like some little rough edges and a bit of grit. But no too much - I'm certainly no lo-fi kind of guy.
"The Middle Eastern sounding parts fit well with the rest of the song"
Yes - it's a hardly a full-on Middle Eastern track but I never do that as I don't know how. It's just one of the many flavours I add to my stuff when it manages to come out as I'm fiddling about on instruments and with synth sounds.
Thanks for checking it out. As already said - it may well be my best ever track though I'm more than happy for other people to have alternate favourites (I have a lot of stuff).
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I am glad you like it
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It's funny how songs come together sometimes, each song has a story. To me that is the fun in making music, the surprise in how it all comes together.
Wayne
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Never heard of that daw, will have to check it out.
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Keep up the good work!
Wayne
I definitely agree that sometimes less is more.
This is one of my favorite tracks that I've made.
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