Love the piano work you did here. The beginning was almost a teaser, I was so getting into it and then it changed about midway through and I was so impressed with the direction you took it. Nice composition. Great use of the strings also. Very nice piece of music, enjoyed it very much!
Well done on the vocals, I don't know how people can do that throat growl singing but it an interesting change from the verse singing and was a little unexpected. On the mix end of things, I think with a little less compression you would hear more separation between the guitars, piano, vocals... especially when they are all playing loud. It's a great song idea and some nice changes, it's well written. Good luck with the new daw!
Cool track and great use of loops. It's well put together and has a dark heavy metal feel to it. A bit cinematic as I could hear this in a film sequence. The drums are powerful and effective. Well done!
Hi Wayne :)
thank you much much for the words .
i don't know much about differences of metal and rock
i thought this is rock because metal is faster and wilder toward this for me .
but as i see some people like you have called this Metal.
so i'm going to change the genre and put it in metal ....
thank you much much again.
Elena :)
The lyrics are too much, love 'em! The music is very cool, jazzy, latin, funky. You did a great job here putting a great music track to an interesting spoken word track, kudos!
The break at about 1:20 was fantastic and very unexpected considering the beginning was so upbeat. But it really works to get the feeling from the description.
I love that as musicians, we can represent our sentiments, thoughts and feelings through the music we write. You used a lot of loops very creatively to convey your intentions here. What can I say that others haven't said, great track Steve!
Thanks Wayne. I really enjoy trying to use music alone as a way to convey thought or emotion. I am glad you were able to see that in this song. Many thanks.
Steve
Love that change at around 1:30, nice. I used a squire for a couple years, as long as you add some compression and some effects they sound decent enough.
Is that a reverse reverbed hi hat hit on the intro, very cool? I like the chorus change, the guitar does it's job pretty good there. Cool track, great bass playing as usual!
Ah, yes. Fender Squiers. Bought a lefty for my lefty wife and the thing sits in my music room and stares at me. Sad, really.
My problem with the Squier(besides being a right handed individual), is how light a touch is required. Being a bass player, I'm used to squeezing the shit out of the strings. Do it with the Squier and it all gets a bit "wonkey". I tuned several times and deleted several goes on guitar because of squeezing it sharp.
Cool combination of sounds that are uplifting and positive sounding. Sounds like music for a commercial or a film. Interesting intro, like it. Well done, neat idea!
MichaelStokes has been reviewing my songs since day one and probably most people's tracks since the day he joined. He literally has thousands of reviews and most are uniquely thought out comments. I have downloaded more of his songs than anyone's tracks on the loop, to give you some indication of how much I like his music. Much respect for this track and to you as well Benham.
The track is hauntingly beautiful and painful at times. I listened to this a few times, it's emotional. I like the guitars, there is a certain tone to them I cannot recognize.
Everyone takes time off from the loop for one reason or another. One guy just came back here after spending a few years in jail. It's good that people are missed and recognized for their input and for the genuine character they are. Hope you both are able to rejoin us here at looperman at your full capacities soon!
Wayne dear , first of all many thnx for attention & I really hope Mike to read your nice analysis about him & totally we(me,U&the; others who have commented)can make Mike feel good
& know he is not forgotten (althoughT he doesn't need my or our supporT-but friendship is the same we're trying to do I think).
and by the way ...did U know U're nmost similar person to Mike in my eyes ?....throughbred & kind,gentle & like Mike very sensitive & with a special guitar sound & incredible skill...a bit younger but still maybe about 10 years 0older than me ( I'm almost the youngest musician between U my unseen friends ! what I never guessed before & when I hadn't talked with U & just had listened U !..unbelievable ).many thnx & best wishes.___B
Sorry I missed this one when it came out, must have been all those porters and whiskeys!
Keep up the singing, you keep getting more innovative and unique. The lyrics are well written and very cool and fun to read.
The music is well produced and with the vocals make a rather upbeat, quirky, fun, interesting, awesome.... Whatever you are doing, keep doing it. Great track and I will be dl'ing this one so thanks so much for sharing!
Hey buddy, thanks for listening and commenting! I appreciate the compliments on the singing, means a lot to me! Interesting that you you found it quirky and fun... that's part of what I like about industrial stuff, it's open to interpretation. I've got more ideas, so there will be more to come! Thanks for Dl'ing! Hope all is well!
Great job doing a rock track my friend! I like the guitar sound and the vocals, they work pretty good together. There are times it gets a little trippy like when the guitar lead rolls and the song quiets down and the girl sings. Reminds me a bit of the Doors Robbie Krieger guitar in the song The End at times.
I like the open feel of the song, lots of space. There is a cool bluesy feel going on here with nice changes throughout. Working with vocals opens up some new challenges as far as mixing. I know you have used vocal samples before but mixing in a whole track is different. Listened on my headphones and the vocals sounded good in the mix.
Dig the track dude! Keep challenging yourself, you will never know what you can do unless you try. Look forward to hearing some new songs!
Thank you for the feedback and the review, must say did enjoy doing this one, while taking a short break from trance, currently working on a acoustic type of rock track, it is more laid back then this one, more like a chill out track, plus also start a few different styles...Thought working with vocals would be a bit hard but found them fairly straight forward, suppose if you have the right vocals makes it easier...Thank for the fav too mate...Peace n Respect...Mosaic....Listening to your piece I reviewed other day...Still stand by what I said about it being my fav of yours...Excellent track....
Always loved this song and this band. I like your version, a bit more to the jazz/lounge side of things but I love lounge music. I thought about singing and found the lyrics and tried to sing along but there are too many high spots I can't hit. They had great singing and harmonies on their songs. I hope you find someone, I'm sure someone will jump on this.
Have you ever been a dj or done any dj'ing? Just wondering because of the mixing different beats you do. The transitions are well done and each part sounds a bit different from one another but there seems to be an underlying feel to it all. Were you able to get those synths running on your comp?
I find if you delete a handful at a time it's easier rather than 1 at a time. Either that or upload 500 loops this week and get some bonus tracks. hehe
Never been a DJ. Used to hang around with a lot of them in my 20's but i was always much more interested in creating the tracks.
I guess i should take it up really as all i seem to do these days is muck about with loops.
I did get those synths running in the end and they're really bloody good (But i only used one right at the end of this track, the rest was all loops and one shots)
Yeah, i should upload some loops really. I did plenty as Nick Q but FreeRadical has so far contributed a grand total of zero.
I might even make some right now.
Cheers for dropping in.
FR
Kinda trippy and laid back blues. Lots of effects. The first few seconds of the intro reminds me of a Godfathers intro on one of there tracks but I can't think of which one off hand. What make of bass and electric guitar do you use?
To me some of the best guitar solos are ones that feel the music and play to the groove. An old timer musician once said to me "play the music". He didn't mean just play your part, he meant play along side the music, feel it out and add to it rather than over play and showcase your talents on every part you play. I think you did that here and most of the time for that matter.
I like it, shorter always works for me but in this case I am looking forward to hearing more. Like the splashes of the resonator guitar, damn that's such a cool sound.
Greetings. Very laid back blues and first proper deep shuffle blues I've done.
Not really that many effects. Not sure if you mean on guitar. Mostly just delay, reverb, a little distortion - nothing unusual.
Not sure who Godfathers are. A band, I guess.
My bass is a Vintage 5-string (can't remember the model) though I rarely play it so I'm not very good anymore. Used to be much better in teen years when that's mostly all I played. Little practice these days means no stamina in left or right hand and picking fingers get blisters so easily.
But there's some nice bas guitar in this track.
Main guitar is still the first I ever bought (in 1996) and it's small and light and comfortable and cheap. It's the Epiphone Les Paul Special II (Vintage Sunburst). I also use a Variax but don't like it much and find it hard to play but it still pops up in my tracks.
Main resonator is the Ozark 3515bte and other one (that I don't like) is a Republic Resolian Steel Antique Brass.
You confused me by saying you enjoyed the resonator on here as there is none! The splashes you heard must be the sitar bits during the second half solo. Can't think what else you could mistake for resonator. I almost always say I track description if its in the track.
I do my best to feel the music and play to the groove rather than just widdle about all over the place. This is a wonderful groove for laidback playing and even more so in the later parts (that you haven't heard) when it appears to pick up pace and get more insistent.
I could do blues playing over this type of groove all day. Comes very naturally.
I hope you noticed that the drums are mostly just the EZ Americana kit. If not, you will now!
Good to hear you want to hear more. These 4 mins are really just an intro..
A pepper mill.... I like it, creative for sure. There is something about a vocal and an acoustic guitar that works for me, especially when it is as beautiful as this song. Gave this one a few listens, love the lyrics. The chorus is great, nice change. Simple and beautiful, thanks, glad to have you back!
Hi Wayne and thx a lot for your warm review on that humble cover.
I discovered Woodkid recently (they're French :p) and was so moved by their video clip that I tried the song. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KQu8FOjJXdI
"Today I will tell you the story of a man who drowned in the cold waters of the ocean after losing the one he loved. This is the story of a man who died twice." is the translation of the priest's words in Russian.
There are songs that become unforgettable and will always convey a special feeling or memory.
Although awkward, I put a lot of heart in that cover and I'm very glad you liked it, Wayne.
Merci for your time and attention,
Peace
I am usually not a fan of long intros but it really was a great one. You have been writing some pretty awesome music. The guitars sound great and so does the mix. Nice pads to finish it out, nice touch. What a way to start my day!
Thanks Wayne,
every Time i listen to this Track it´s getting a little better. For me ,I think ,i recover a new (old)Passion making Rockmusic. As i was a Man Age 20, I played Heavy Metal Guitar in a Trash Metal Band,those Times were gone, but the Spirit of wicked Guitars and the Sound of evil Power is not a Desease,its inherent and awaits a coming out like a wild Animal.
Nice to know that you like it.
DRO
Well done, cool build up then the drums kicked in. I liked the piano, nice progression. The synth is a little weird sounding but different. Keep up the good work, you have a lot of potential!
I've never had a psychogenic sammich until now but it was tasty! It has the signature Spivkurl sound but it sounds like something you are releasing on your new disc, your new sound so to speak. It is a little dark and almost cinematic, a bit angry and confused at times. Guess that's where the psychogenic part comes in, lol. It's a crap shoot what genre to put this in, maybe industrial or maybe you are right with fusion. Either way it wasn't the usual music my ears are used to hearing.
Thank you for being the first to listen! I always appreciate your reviews! I didn't even think about cinematic, I guess you have a point there. The psychogenic part was kind of funny, as the word just popped into my head, I didn't remember where I had heard it before, but I looked it up and it seemed to fit... something which is manifested by the mind, and not physiological. The sammich is between me and Spivkurl...heh. Interesting that you hear industrial with this, I guess I just can't avoid industrial ha ha. Thanks again my friend!
I like music like this, a bit whimsical and fun. The short breaths or effect that sounds like that starts around 25 seconds is cool. Maybe for some additional vocals you could do some more vocal sounds like that. Maybe some scat type sounds, short vocal noises or phrases rather than singing full lines. Just my 2 cents.
Cool vocal samples, energy galore, pounding drums, I am now officially awake! I like it man, the effects and panning you used make it interesting to listen to on my headphones. It's fun and it gets me pumped up. Cool bass, very cool bass!
Thanks man. I'm actually really p***ed off because i've updated this track but for some reason the site wont let me replace this version.
Never had this problem before but anyway thanks as always for listening Wayne.
FR
Trippy rock but with driving Stuart Copeland drums. I must say the drums are outstanding. Damn man, you are a freekin' good guitar player, it's got a meaty tone and great attack. Real cool changes, as expected.
Wait a minute...holding it in.....exhale, cough,cough, lol. What a cool psychedelic trip, goes good so close to earth day and all.
Are you using a resonator guitar here? Sounds like one with some effects on it. I may have to ask you for a track or two sometime, I love the sound of them.
I must say it's well put together and interesting. Always a pleasure!
Yo. I'm a big fan of Stewart Copeland, but mostly for his playing in The Police (great band). I'm aware of his TV and film and other work but haven't heard much of it.
I'm surprised by the comparison as I didn't think he played this loud or with as much double kick. Or with blastbeats.
Killer drumming in this is mostly thanks to Superior Drummer and the excellent kits and great performance MIDI files. My skill is in arranging those drum parts and layering them and choosing kits and when playing moves from one to the next to provide the drum variety I like to have in most, if not all, of my tracks.
I'm a good and slightly unusual guitarist but only add the 'freekin' good' through careful editing together of the best takes in my loop recording guitar jam sessions.
See my reply to Extraball for more details on my guitar cheating. Not as good a player as I sound on record!
"goes good so close to earth day and all"
That's odd. Not sure what this might have to do with that environmental protection celebration day. But cool if it trips you out. Maybe 'psychedelic grunge' is the best simple genre name for this.
Yes, slide resonator guitar is kind of my speciality and it features a lot on my many tracks. I'll play it over metal, blues, electro, funk, whatever. Lots of shorter touches of it here to provide unusual variety (clean guitar sounds over heavy ones is odd) but no proper solo. There isn't a proper solo in this - it's just riff, riff and strange textures all the way.
Lots of slide in my track Debt Black Hole, which is a favourite of yours.
That was certainly different. But at the same time it was interestingly creative. I thought the vocals were done to fit the song pretty good, I was expecting something not as well executed but it all worked fine. Well done!
I had to give this another listen. It still has the same effect on me when I first heard this a few years ago. I still dig that accordion. The spacial feel to the drums is great, you really filled up the entire stereo field.
It's good to go back and listen to some older tracks and be amazed at how great they still sound. Hope all is well!
Cool track, the mix is outstanding1 Nice dynamics throughout the song. Singing is well done and I'm a sucker for an acoustic guitar. Enjoyed it very much!
on Of darkness and stars by johnnyproducing
Thanks for sharing as I will dl this!
Cheers!
Wayne
Feel flattered by your kind comment ;)
Enjoy your download haha
on 15 Minutes Isnt All We Can Have by MOONLYTE
Wayne
on regret buss by ElenaSatine
Wayne
thank you much much for the words .
i don't know much about differences of metal and rock
i thought this is rock because metal is faster and wilder toward this for me .
but as i see some people like you have called this Metal.
so i'm going to change the genre and put it in metal ....
thank you much much again.
Elena :)
on love is strong in a women by adamms
Wayne
on Dancing To The War Drums by crucethus
I love that as musicians, we can represent our sentiments, thoughts and feelings through the music we write. You used a lot of loops very creatively to convey your intentions here. What can I say that others haven't said, great track Steve!
Wayne
Steve
on The Overcasters by Evisma
Is that a reverse reverbed hi hat hit on the intro, very cool? I like the chorus change, the guitar does it's job pretty good there. Cool track, great bass playing as usual!
Wayne
My problem with the Squier(besides being a right handed individual), is how light a touch is required. Being a bass player, I'm used to squeezing the shit out of the strings. Do it with the Squier and it all gets a bit "wonkey". I tuned several times and deleted several goes on guitar because of squeezing it sharp.
Hey, there's a band name.
Squeezin It Sharp
Take care
Evan
on Modnex - Mr Flippers by Modnex
Wayne
Thanks for stopping by, have a good one :)
on 1981 featuring MStokes by deciBel
The track is hauntingly beautiful and painful at times. I listened to this a few times, it's emotional. I like the guitars, there is a certain tone to them I cannot recognize.
Everyone takes time off from the loop for one reason or another. One guy just came back here after spending a few years in jail. It's good that people are missed and recognized for their input and for the genuine character they are. Hope you both are able to rejoin us here at looperman at your full capacities soon!
Well done both of you!
Wayne
& know he is not forgotten (althoughT he doesn't need my or our supporT-but friendship is the same we're trying to do I think).
and by the way ...did U know U're nmost similar person to Mike in my eyes ?....throughbred & kind,gentle & like Mike very sensitive & with a special guitar sound & incredible skill...a bit younger but still maybe about 10 years 0older than me ( I'm almost the youngest musician between U my unseen friends ! what I never guessed before & when I hadn't talked with U & just had listened U !..unbelievable ).many thnx & best wishes.___B
on Aerosol by Spivkurl
Keep up the singing, you keep getting more innovative and unique. The lyrics are well written and very cool and fun to read.
The music is well produced and with the vocals make a rather upbeat, quirky, fun, interesting, awesome.... Whatever you are doing, keep doing it. Great track and I will be dl'ing this one so thanks so much for sharing!
Wayne
on Sweetest Sin by Mosaic
I like the open feel of the song, lots of space. There is a cool bluesy feel going on here with nice changes throughout. Working with vocals opens up some new challenges as far as mixing. I know you have used vocal samples before but mixing in a whole track is different. Listened on my headphones and the vocals sounded good in the mix.
Dig the track dude! Keep challenging yourself, you will never know what you can do unless you try. Look forward to hearing some new songs!
Wayne
Thank you for the feedback and the review, must say did enjoy doing this one, while taking a short break from trance, currently working on a acoustic type of rock track, it is more laid back then this one, more like a chill out track, plus also start a few different styles...Thought working with vocals would be a bit hard but found them fairly straight forward, suppose if you have the right vocals makes it easier...Thank for the fav too mate...Peace n Respect...Mosaic....Listening to your piece I reviewed other day...Still stand by what I said about it being my fav of yours...Excellent track....
on Reminiscing - Little River Band cover by ScottFranco
Nice one!
Wayne
Sorry it's a bit high for you. Would have liked to have you aboard. Usually vocal requests are unsuccessful, so doubt we'll get any takers.
Cheers,
Scott
on Track 50 by FreeRadical
I find if you delete a handful at a time it's easier rather than 1 at a time. Either that or upload 500 loops this week and get some bonus tracks. hehe
Well done!
Wayne
I guess i should take it up really as all i seem to do these days is muck about with loops.
I did get those synths running in the end and they're really bloody good (But i only used one right at the end of this track, the rest was all loops and one shots)
Yeah, i should upload some loops really. I did plenty as Nick Q but FreeRadical has so far contributed a grand total of zero.
I might even make some right now.
Cheers for dropping in.
FR
on The Imposible II by CinematicSquad
Wayne
on Random Acts Of Human Kindness by StaticNomad
To me some of the best guitar solos are ones that feel the music and play to the groove. An old timer musician once said to me "play the music". He didn't mean just play your part, he meant play along side the music, feel it out and add to it rather than over play and showcase your talents on every part you play. I think you did that here and most of the time for that matter.
I like it, shorter always works for me but in this case I am looking forward to hearing more. Like the splashes of the resonator guitar, damn that's such a cool sound.
Wayne
Not really that many effects. Not sure if you mean on guitar. Mostly just delay, reverb, a little distortion - nothing unusual.
Not sure who Godfathers are. A band, I guess.
My bass is a Vintage 5-string (can't remember the model) though I rarely play it so I'm not very good anymore. Used to be much better in teen years when that's mostly all I played. Little practice these days means no stamina in left or right hand and picking fingers get blisters so easily.
But there's some nice bas guitar in this track.
Main guitar is still the first I ever bought (in 1996) and it's small and light and comfortable and cheap. It's the Epiphone Les Paul Special II (Vintage Sunburst). I also use a Variax but don't like it much and find it hard to play but it still pops up in my tracks.
Main resonator is the Ozark 3515bte and other one (that I don't like) is a Republic Resolian Steel Antique Brass.
You confused me by saying you enjoyed the resonator on here as there is none! The splashes you heard must be the sitar bits during the second half solo. Can't think what else you could mistake for resonator. I almost always say I track description if its in the track.
I do my best to feel the music and play to the groove rather than just widdle about all over the place. This is a wonderful groove for laidback playing and even more so in the later parts (that you haven't heard) when it appears to pick up pace and get more insistent.
I could do blues playing over this type of groove all day. Comes very naturally.
I hope you noticed that the drums are mostly just the EZ Americana kit. If not, you will now!
Good to hear you want to hear more. These 4 mins are really just an intro..
on I love you-woodkid-home made cover by janis71
Wayne
I discovered Woodkid recently (they're French :p) and was so moved by their video clip that I tried the song.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KQu8FOjJXdI
"Today I will tell you the story of a man who drowned in the cold waters of the ocean after losing the one he loved. This is the story of a man who died twice." is the translation of the priest's words in Russian.
There are songs that become unforgettable and will always convey a special feeling or memory.
Although awkward, I put a lot of heart in that cover and I'm very glad you liked it, Wayne.
Merci for your time and attention,
Peace
on Winds of Change by XmafaX
Wayne
Paulo
on Guitar Love by DESTERO
Wayne
every Time i listen to this Track it´s getting a little better. For me ,I think ,i recover a new (old)Passion making Rockmusic. As i was a Man Age 20, I played Heavy Metal Guitar in a Trash Metal Band,those Times were gone, but the Spirit of wicked Guitars and the Sound of evil Power is not a Desease,its inherent and awaits a coming out like a wild Animal.
Nice to know that you like it.
DRO
on Death Of Me ft TristanVocals by RealProblemShuckers
Wayne
on Psychogenic Sammich by Spivkurl
Well done Spiv!
Wayne
on Just Another Day by Cestevens1783
Wayne
on Bad Boy Sound by FreeRadical
Wayne
Never had this problem before but anyway thanks as always for listening Wayne.
FR
on The Bigger The Fatter The Better by StaticNomad
Wait a minute...holding it in.....exhale, cough,cough, lol. What a cool psychedelic trip, goes good so close to earth day and all.
Are you using a resonator guitar here? Sounds like one with some effects on it. I may have to ask you for a track or two sometime, I love the sound of them.
I must say it's well put together and interesting. Always a pleasure!
Wayne
I'm surprised by the comparison as I didn't think he played this loud or with as much double kick. Or with blastbeats.
Killer drumming in this is mostly thanks to Superior Drummer and the excellent kits and great performance MIDI files. My skill is in arranging those drum parts and layering them and choosing kits and when playing moves from one to the next to provide the drum variety I like to have in most, if not all, of my tracks.
I'm a good and slightly unusual guitarist but only add the 'freekin' good' through careful editing together of the best takes in my loop recording guitar jam sessions.
See my reply to Extraball for more details on my guitar cheating. Not as good a player as I sound on record!
"goes good so close to earth day and all"
That's odd. Not sure what this might have to do with that environmental protection celebration day. But cool if it trips you out. Maybe 'psychedelic grunge' is the best simple genre name for this.
Yes, slide resonator guitar is kind of my speciality and it features a lot on my many tracks. I'll play it over metal, blues, electro, funk, whatever. Lots of shorter touches of it here to provide unusual variety (clean guitar sounds over heavy ones is odd) but no proper solo. There isn't a proper solo in this - it's just riff, riff and strange textures all the way.
Lots of slide in my track Debt Black Hole, which is a favourite of yours.
My greatest chillout blues slide resonator track:
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/103943
Slide jazz. The main bassline is slide resonator and there are other slide bits at various points.
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/152913
Electro slide blues.
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/147997
Cutup slide blues drone grunge weirdness.
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/148414
Psychedelic slide dub blues.
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/153422
Thanks for the feedback!
on Forks And Knives by RealProblemShuckers
Wayne
on Hybridity - a Subversive Dance by n0mad23
It's good to go back and listen to some older tracks and be amazed at how great they still sound. Hope all is well!
Wayne
on Indefatigable by EDRAAK
Wayne