Almost expected to hear some Pet Shop Boy's vocals on it. Don't know why but I do, ha! To me it has the mid 90's alt rock feel to it, The The, Tom Tom Club....
you know that didnt occur to me in the making, but jesus, i guess i owe more to the pet shop boys than i realized!! thanks buddy hope things are holding up for you!
Hey Bill! So what did you get for a new git? I recently purchased a 2023 "inspired by Gibson" Epiphone Les Paul Standard(smokehouse burst) and a newly re released Marshall Guv'nor pedal, unbelievable sound for the money, couldn't be happier. My guess, you bought a PRS.
Nice track, dark, metal song. Overused the tremolo? Can't be done, impossible, he. Vocals work great with the music!
Heya Wayne. You guessed right another PRS guitar. A custom 24 with a Floyd Rose on it. The Les Paul sounds like you are having a blast with it. I have heard lots about the Gov'nor pedals, giving you that tubey Marshall sound. I hope you are having fun with your new rig !
To me the threshold is too high on the compression on the track, too loud and things are competing in the mix, my 2 cents. The waveform shows that block look which is telling. Nothing wrong with the song, very peppy, upbeat, you always bring something cool to the table.
I have had Logic Pro for many years, some nice sounds and instruments in the package. I found it a bit difficult to use and not as easy a workflow compared to Ableton but it definitely is a step up from garageband. Make sure when you bounce down a track to check in the wav/mp3 settings when bouncing down to turn off the normalize. For a while I missed that when making mp3s and my tracks sounded too hot and not the way I mixed them.
Hello Wayne, how are you? Glad you liked the song. Yes, and thank you for the helpful tips. I tend to be a little loud - I guess it comes from my youth... hehe. I already knew the normalization button and used it on this track too. I think I'll grow into Logic - since it looks like Garage Band, I'm already sold on it.
Cheers
Ambitious production Paul. In some way it reminds me of the Style Council. Music is light, has its standout moments. It's def your style, well done with the lyrics as well.
hi Wayne thanks for the feedback, wow there as got to be something in your comment for sure, i may of mentioned before Paul Weller was one of my idols growing up i loved the Jam he was a political artist so the comparison is a great honour for me, he must have rubbed off on me :))
Very nice track Mos! The vocal effects are what I notice first, they work well with the music. Someone mentioned floating in their description, good way to put it. The music just floats along while the vocal bits sit it them bringing them more into the focus.
The side chaining effect is fine with me. Each song needs it's points of interest and you used this effect. I'm ok with it, maybe you don't use it again for months. It stands out here because it's prominent but it works fine here. I certainly don't know all the elements of house music but if it sounds nice, I'm down with it!
Greetings my friend
Thank you Wayne for review and feedback, made a couple adjusts to this one. Tidy up a few levels in this version after your feedback from draft send to you. Happy you enjoyed mate,much Respect n Peace mosaic
Great intro, the build up was perfect for this track. Lots of good energy here, just in time for my morning coffee, it's getting me moving. So good to see you again, keep posting these gems.
Hey matey, thank you for the listen n feedback much appreciated, I have more trance also Pop House n maybe a few other genres currently on the go, they will poss find their way up here over next few weeks, glad got your morning off to a great start, haven't got around to email yet Wayne, will try n get to it next few days sorry, much respect to you my friend mos.
If i were to go out on a limb I would say this is your style of electronic American native styled music. I'm not sure if you've heard Native American music before but it, in some way, made me think of that.
Thanks Wayne. I've never heard Native American music... But the track is really inspired by reading books about Indians. And I think this is a good reason to get acquainted with their music...
I'm so glad you add vocals to your tracks, so many people here that make "electronic" music never attempt to try to do this. To me it adds another dimension to a track, a huge one. They def add to the track. Solid track, has some cool guitar in it, lead was neat!
Very professional sounding track. There is a nice cohesion of all the elements of the song, sounds full, great mix! The acapellas work great with the music.
I certainly don't know much about witch house but I'll take your word that this is representative of the genre. Has a scary, dark, cinematic feel.
Menacing vocals help to give it a more personal feel as opposed to just an instrumental which to me you are looking in from the outside. Vox help to bring you in as part of the song more, you feel the person's pain, happiness, anguish.... more.
The intro was interesting but the bass line is what caught my ear. Some cool changes and there is no shortage of energy here. Fun, creative and got me going as I have my first coffee of the day.
Paul Simon!! Yes that's absolutely it and that's also an amazing compliment because that's probably one of the most amazing poets of the previous century.
Setup: well, I moved from a cramped apartment with no real space (via some (mis)adventures) to a place where I can have a study - which is also my man cave and has the space to really set up all my instruments in a more or less permanent setting, so I can start drumming, playing guitar or keys, or singing at just about any time (barring company time of course) ;)
It's amazing and liberating and just about perfect!
Lovely track despite some of the sadder lyrics! The vocals are cool, I like the tone and timbre of his voice. The git lead was cool, nice tone! Totally enjoyed this!
Thanks Wayne! To clarify, the vocals are mine, as is the rest - it's just not based on something that happened to me.
The guitar tone is nice, yes - this is a temp setup but I actually like how it turned out.
Very cinematic piece to me. Industrial is a good description. I think of the movie Blade Runner as I listen. The vocals work well with the music, good effects on them!
Certainly an interesting track. What genre? I think fusion maybe, so many different sounds and influences going on, all genres wrapped up in one. An earful for sure, crazy little trip you took me on!
Cool intro first of all. There are so many great sounds that all layer nicely, you must use a lot of tracks while constructing these ideas of yours. Quality mix. Takes me back to the 70's. Another fine track Micky!
Hello Wayne, nice to hear from you. Yes, 44 tracks and by the time I had knitted them all together I really couldn't listen to the track anymore. I have no idea how I finally got it finished enough that it was worth uploading to me. I've also thought it might be a lot easier to make stripped down, thrifty tracks, but I've found that it's not one iota easier...quite the opposite. Your benevolent, encouraging comment means all the more to me. Thanks very much.
There is plenty to listen to, some neat things going on, synths and pads are cool for sure. Has a NIN feel to it, Head Like a Hole goodness! Driving song? Could be dangerous listening to this and driving, he, some songs do make you hit the pedal a little harder.
Hey Paul, 2 thumbs up!! So many layered vocals, how many tracks are you up to now in your daw per song? Bet it's been increasing lately. Cool ending as well!!
thanks so much Wayne, ive been doing far more on the production side.
had 3 vocal cuts on this in three different keys and i side chained my fx's in and routed everything through bus channels. you know the proper way, i now feel i understand what im doing and trying to achieve. less of me just winging it,
when i first started it was a couple of tracks, music on one, vocal on one, and fx on side slots, there was 22 layers on this :))
thanks again for your support as always mate
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Nice track, dark, metal song. Overused the tremolo? Can't be done, impossible, he. Vocals work great with the music!
Take care!
Wayne
on No Turning Back by Micky
I have had Logic Pro for many years, some nice sounds and instruments in the package. I found it a bit difficult to use and not as easy a workflow compared to Ableton but it definitely is a step up from garageband. Make sure when you bounce down a track to check in the wav/mp3 settings when bouncing down to turn off the normalize. For a while I missed that when making mp3s and my tracks sounded too hot and not the way I mixed them.
Always a pleasure Mickey!
Wayne
Cheers
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Hope all is well!
wayne
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The side chaining effect is fine with me. Each song needs it's points of interest and you used this effect. I'm ok with it, maybe you don't use it again for months. It stands out here because it's prominent but it works fine here. I certainly don't know all the elements of house music but if it sounds nice, I'm down with it!
Cheers!
Wayne
Thank you Wayne for review and feedback, made a couple adjusts to this one. Tidy up a few levels in this version after your feedback from draft send to you. Happy you enjoyed mate,much Respect n Peace mosaic
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Well done! I like the mix and the vox are well mixed and performed. Great, catchy beat.
Wayne
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Great intro, the build up was perfect for this track. Lots of good energy here, just in time for my morning coffee, it's getting me moving. So good to see you again, keep posting these gems.
Take care!
Wayne
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Well done krotan!
Wayne
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Well done, again!
Wayne
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Well done fellas!
Wayne
Appreciation and many thanx for your comments ...
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Menacing vocals help to give it a more personal feel as opposed to just an instrumental which to me you are looking in from the outside. Vox help to bring you in as part of the song more, you feel the person's pain, happiness, anguish.... more.
Good stuff!
Wayne
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Great track!
Wayne
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The quicker and simpler the song comes together, the better the song, that's what I find happens.
What did you do with the new setup?
Wayne
Setup: well, I moved from a cramped apartment with no real space (via some (mis)adventures) to a place where I can have a study - which is also my man cave and has the space to really set up all my instruments in a more or less permanent setting, so I can start drumming, playing guitar or keys, or singing at just about any time (barring company time of course) ;)
It's amazing and liberating and just about perfect!
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Wayne
The guitar tone is nice, yes - this is a temp setup but I actually like how it turned out.
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Wayne
Thanks for stopping by and giving
This track a listen. You've always
given me encouragement to continue
with my musical maddness.
PEACE from the East...
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Wayne
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I'm the king of stupid jokes, love 'em!
Wayne
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Wayne
had 3 vocal cuts on this in three different keys and i side chained my fx's in and routed everything through bus channels. you know the proper way, i now feel i understand what im doing and trying to achieve. less of me just winging it,
when i first started it was a couple of tracks, music on one, vocal on one, and fx on side slots, there was 22 layers on this :))
thanks again for your support as always mate