theHumps

I like the song. The vocals and backups are cool and the musical treatment works great with them to set a tense and maybe mysterious atmosphere.

I would try to get the track a bit louder, if you compare the size of your waveform to other songs it's a bit small. Also try to clip off the minute and a half dead space at the end. :)

Wayne

Totally dig the piano! Impactful piece.

Wayne

This is cool! A bit mysterious and dark. Great job with mixing in the vocals, they sit nicely in the mix. To me this song has many of the basic ingredients that DePeche Mode use to create their hits, basic and cool drumming, neat vocals and lyrics and just enough electronic sounds to fill the space and create atmosphere.

Well done!

Wayne

She def has a vocal that can hold her own like in that intro. You created a nice musical bed for them to sit in. Nice sounding snare. :)

Cool change at the end with a neat ending to the track. I would call this a very efficient track, nothing in there that isn't needed as well as not being overproduced, well done Michael!

Wyane

Vocals sound a bit like Melanie Safka, which is cool. A sullen song, a bit melancholic but it's a neat song. Hope all is well!

Wayne

A lament, sad expression. Cool idea, well done! Maybe a little on the cinematic side.

Wayne

This is pretty cool. Dream like production, mellow and chilled out. The vocals work fine in this piece, well mixed!

Wayne

Sorry to hear about our arm Bill, hope you recover with newfound skills!

This is nice, always liked this song. Great rendition, the Santana sound works well in this context. Singer has a great voice for this tune.

This song reminds me how much I miss live music, nice mix!

Wayne

pjb perhaps?

I have sleep issues as well, sucks, too many concussions.

At times the song sounds like the constant ticking of a clock, a death march for the sleepless. And water, especially water dripping, can cause the mad to loose their minds. At least I hope so, lol.

Whale-ish in nature, cool underwater clicks , pops and the calls of nature are a nice touch.

I just watched the classic Moby ##### this morning, coincidence?

Wayne

Edgy, glitchy sounds can set an atmosphere of tension but the background sounds so peaceful and soft. A nice dichotomy of sounds. Nice ambient piece!

Wayne

I like the rawness of this, vocals are right there in your face. A different sound, kinda unique thing here. I like different, this works for me!

Cool!

Wayne

To me this has an old time feel, smokey jazz club, late at night. The drums are updated and there is some nice stuff going on in the background to keep me listening closely. Love that muted horn sound!

Wayne

Sorry but I'm not much up on the trance genre, don't listen to much of it. I can say I did enjoy the track though. Driving beat, catchy arpeggiated/delayed melodies spread throughout the track. Nice mix, I can hear all the elements clearly.

Wayne

This is some cool, long haired, hard rock band #####! The wah wah pedal is a great one, a classic! Metallica, Black Sabbath come to mind as I listen. Would love me some Hetfield or Osbourne vox on this.

Wayne

Pretty interesting track, like the concept! So that's the author reciting it? The music is impactful, goes well with the topic. Sax was a cool addition.

"And an invisible chicken in every pot", ha, great line!

Wayne

Pretty cool listen! Sounds like something that should be in the movie The Nightmare Before Christmas. I like the effects on the vocals.

Wayne

You forgot the word catchy in your description!

I would work on some of the levels of the backup singing, the first half seems a little soft and the 2nd half seems a bit loud. You can see the difference in the waveform. Just a suggestion.

Wayne

Well that was different! Text to voice synth? Interesting. The voice sounds like something from star wars. The words were cool and with that effect on them it really went well with the sounds and effects you created.

I've come to expect a "no holds barred" type of approach to your music, which always makes a listen an experience. Thanks!

Wayne

The drum track jut meanders along, doing it's own little jazzy thing. I like the way the bass and keys work together. Interesting vocals/spoken word track.

If you go back into this, the one adjustment I would make is to add just a bit more reverb to the vox and lower the volume a bit to make them sit in the mix a little better, to me they stick out front a wee bit. I have issues with getting the volume right on my vocals all the time, it's hard.

Cool track, nice vibe!

Wayne

You're not trying to "steal my sunshine", are you? lol

Always loved that song, such a summery feel to it.

Fun!

Wayne

Cool, dark themed track. Reminiscent of some metal around when Sabbath was king. I hope you get some vocals from dimestop! Some awesome git loops in there.

Wayne

I like mixes that sound like the person is performing the song rather than it sounding like an overly produced studio recording. The singing reminds me of someone but the name escapes me. Cool, I like it!

Wayne

Sorry, I'm late to the party.

Cool composition and mix! Loved the vocal parts, wished there were more. To me it has that late 80's, early 90's progressive/alt rock feel to it. I liked the toms/drum parts, impactful during a change in the song. Well done, quality work!

Wayne

Although this is cool on it's own, I agree with others, a proper vocal track would be the next level for this track, great! Guitar sounds fine. Fake it till you make it!

Wayne

Cool twist from the original. The vocals and horn match up so well with the reggae part, great mashup! Not much about this I didn't like.

Funny how things work out sometimes.

Wayne