Vocals are right out front, clear and understandable. They tell a story that the listener can relate to which is the main point of the lyrics. The music is nice, low key and wide open for vocals. Cool!
What a cool trip I went on as I listened. I loved all the effects/sounds you created and the atmosphere becomes dark and menacing. Seems like you have stepped slightly away from your expansive, beautiful creations you usually post. It's an interesting track, progresses nicely, cool dynamics. It starts off rather peaceful though, a little mother nature then some nice piano chords then it goes slightly awry. ;)
Yeah Wayne...I think it's healthy to step out of the usual
sometimes, and so I did...and I'm surely glad that you approve it...thank you most kindly my friend !:)
Muchas gracias amigo theHumps me alegra que te haya gustado, como ya comenté a LJmbbremen es la banda sonora de un vídeo que tengo en Youtube, si te apetece echarle un vistazo el enlace esta en el ultimo comentario, también el hijo de mi amiga Rita tiene un vídeo con el mismo nombre en su comentario por si quieres echarle también un vistazo, esta muy conseguido, te lo recomiendo.
This is cool! I like the space in the song, there's plenty going on but it's wide open in the mix. Lyrics/singing are interesting, giving the song a darker theme.
Great job turning a poem into music, i think it captures the idea Hardy had perfectly.
Lots of cool vibes in the track, music has that summer, reggae, hot feel to it. It's a more electronic take on reggae but with the same result. I like the vocals, fun and they work well with the music. The backups are cool too.
Nothing like an acoustic git and a singer. Singer/songwriter music is my passion. It makes the performer vulnerable and exposed and the ability of that person to write now becomes very important as the song needs to hold it's weight with so little going on.
I think it sounds fine, the acoustic has some nice reverb on it. I usually always record the instruments and singing separately, for mixing purposes, it's easier I think. You did a great job for recording and playing all at once. Dig the lyrics too!
yeah a bit like finding yourself naked in public eh! Separate would definitely be easier for mixing etc but then when u sing you've got to work out where the words are supposed to go and i find that hard, specially like in this one with no real steady beat. guess its a trade off in spontaneity and other things. Anyways, i appreciate your time and comments, thanks.
Brought me back to those days of piling up and burning disco records in large stadiums in the US, lol. I can appreciate it more these days, especially there were some really great musicians in those r n b and funk bands. It did bring me back to the 70's, has that Cool and the Gang feel.
hey thx ...it must have been one guy who started the burning...i have a feeling that it all started after the stones released emotional rescue....lololol
You created a nice atmosphere right from the beginning. Chillin' out music after dinner, sitting on the deck relaxing. The bass is singing like Barry White, he.
This is pretty cool! Some slick guitar riffs in there. I like the raw feel of it, almost has an early punk vibe going on. Vocals would be a nice addition. Rock on!
Dark and ominous. I like how the vocals aren't straight out in your face, makes them more mysterious. The listener has to listen more closely and isn't that what we want as music producers? Cool track.
Hey, Wayne! Thank you so much for listening and your comments. I hope we can move forward, Divady hasn't been logged in as of yet, so the ball is in his court. Fingers crossed!
The real Space Jam! Well done fellas, such a cool blend of sounds and effects, live guitars, synths, pads, drums and the kitchen sink. Intro was fantastic and the journey after that was fun, a kaleidoscope for the ears.
You're right, the pella is damn good! I like the "in your face" mix, this song needs that impact. There's good dynamics in the song, some nice changes that build up and bring down the song. And great intro/ending too!
I have no problem with the sitar, hell, George Harrison played them on Beatles albums. I like the track, puts me somewhere in my mind. Nice composition, lots of space in the song, nice breaks. Great percussion and a lot going on, had to give it a few listens to soak it all up.
They sell an electric 6 stringed guitar that sounds like a sitar I've always wanted to buy, someday.
Man, I smiled through the whole song! You fill the whole soundscape with textures and sounds with great effects on them so well, it's always a treat for my ears. Classic strat guitar sound, always loved the rhythm guitar in the r n b and dance tracks from the 70's.
You commented on how simple my song was the other day, this one is so much more complicated with all thats going on, almost the exact opposite, ha! It's all good!! Great job Micky!
Oh, I'm sorry, but this is no Strat but an Epiphone Sheraton – the one that Gallagher used with Oasis. I play just everything with this wonderful thing. You know I need a better wah pedal – my old one is no use. I always wanted a Maestro Boomerang - that's the one Melvin Ragin used. But they're so rare and if you find one you can't afford. I'm sure I can find a modern alternative now that's a bit cheaper.
Your 'simple' song – yeah I'd say simple songs are the royal class. I think in writing music there's nothing more difficult than a simple song. I mean one that's simple YET striking. You come pretty close to that!
Very cool, I've always loves acoustic guitar with a latin flair to it. I agree with Terry, many styles of singing, scatting, spoken word.... would work well with this.
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Much appreciated, your kind words and time
Thanks again
-CAP
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Take care Leon!
Wayne
sometimes, and so I did...and I'm surely glad that you approve it...thank you most kindly my friend !:)
With much appreciation____Leon
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Great job turning a poem into music, i think it captures the idea Hardy had perfectly.
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LovePeace&Light,
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What sort of vocals are you looking for specifically?
Wayne
As for the vocals, I have no idea yet! Lol! I'm just testing out stuff to see what fits.
-Memphis
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I think it sounds fine, the acoustic has some nice reverb on it. I usually always record the instruments and singing separately, for mixing purposes, it's easier I think. You did a great job for recording and playing all at once. Dig the lyrics too!
Wayne
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Brought me back to those days of piling up and burning disco records in large stadiums in the US, lol. I can appreciate it more these days, especially there were some really great musicians in those r n b and funk bands. It did bring me back to the 70's, has that Cool and the Gang feel.
Wayne
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But if you overlaid someone like Martin Luther King or Thich Nhat Hanh on top of the music weather it would have the same emotional response.
The instrument selection in some odd way reminds me of the Cars, Moving in Stereo song.
Wayne
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LovePeace&Light,
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Very cool!
Wayne
Thank you for listening!
Julio
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They sell an electric 6 stringed guitar that sounds like a sitar I've always wanted to buy, someday.
Wayne
It is just the tones you get from one, must be in my DNA somewhere! I do love a good curry too...........
Thank you for taking the time to listen and comment.
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You commented on how simple my song was the other day, this one is so much more complicated with all thats going on, almost the exact opposite, ha! It's all good!! Great job Micky!
Wayne
Your 'simple' song – yeah I'd say simple songs are the royal class. I think in writing music there's nothing more difficult than a simple song. I mean one that's simple YET striking. You come pretty close to that!
Thank you for the friendly comment,
Micky
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