I understand. Quality movie quotes are not around that much indeed.
What you might consider..
(if done already, please ignore the following helpful thought)
try audacity editing. Its noise reduction in combination with normalizing works pretty well. There are lots of tutorials about it and its very simple to do. If you however need any help, I can try it for you as well.
My 5 cents of feedback would be:
- Intro effect (pouring in a drink? haha Cheers!)
Lower the volume of it. Same at 0:17 for a split second, which might be cut from the very same effect.
- Outro, for me it stops a bit to suddenly. But this might be a matter of taste rather then it actually being 'good or bad'. Possibly fading it out but remaining the 'YEAH' volume might do the trick.
Nicely done man! No nonsense, right to the hard big room party vibe.
If I may be so free, i've got a minor bit of feedback.
- Intro
Make the intro effect a bit louder, but fade in the volume of the remainings for about the first 7seconds. (then the created loops seems to re-start again) Fade not from 0% to 100% but from for example 60/70% to 100%. So that the ears can adapt and its more of a intro instead of 'BOOM here I am, you need to dance now!' kind of idea
- 1:19, Delay the Chorus melody for a sec or 1-3 into the break. It makes it a smoother more professionally sounding harmony. Trust me.
- 2:07, a very short 1 sec white noise sweep, combined with already sounding effects can possibly lift it up. There are millions of it, I might have a good one that I can send over. Used it recently at a likewise section with big room.
Thanks a lot man! I'm definitly going to use your feedback.
Can you send me the White noise sweep? that would be really nice. My E-mail is iamVNTR@gmail.com
This is a splendid track! Dubstep is not something i'd choose from first hand as a liking, but I can certainly enjoy it time to time. This hypes me up so good, I can't sit still listening this :D
Some minor feedback:
1) I know its often in Dubstep, but for me the 0:30 and 2:19 spin comes in a bit to loud. It being unexpected is perfect tho. As well as the timing and all. I'd personally just swipe the volume of it down just a 10-20%.
2) 1:48 and 3:25, a delay/echo from the main chorus sounds for just a sec or 2 after its finished while going into the break adds a extra pro touch.
Overall its already extremely good! Just my 2 cents. Keep doing what you’re doing! Faved this bjoetie
I GREATLY appreciate your feedback! To quickly address your points:
1) I think you may be right, so in the future if I have similar types of noises in my tracks I'll make sure to give them a slightly longer volume sweep in. That way it won't spook people!
2) Good point, I would only worry about it muddying up the plucks that follow after, but if I were to end the track after a drop like that I will DEFINITELY follow that piece of advice.
Thanks a ton. The only way I can get better is with constructive criticism like this. It may not seem like a lot, but it really does make me a better producer!
1) NEVER give up
2) This is deff worth putting out here/there, don't be silly
3) I LOVE this remix, very well done. Transitions/Buildups are professionally and it is actually bringing a ode to avicii while not losing your own identity in it.
4) I do not even 'miss' the vocals, you managed it very good without.
3) Some minor feedback that I personally find suiting:
- intro, Fade everything except the sweep effect in for just a sec or 3/4. Not from o% to 100% but for example 60/70% to 100%. It gives the intro effect a bit more room without dominating entirely, while letting the ears adjust to whats coming instead of starting it right away quite loud.
Or, there are many ways, keep the volume, but maybe by using a filter/EQ cut that will slowly come in over a length of the first 17sec. Small detail but it gives a more professional touch since it is starting in right away now and makes me feel losing a bit of proper introduction.
- Outro: Cut off the last 4 empty seconds
Conclusion: splendid job!! Really :D
I hope the feedback is welcome and is seen as a helping matter.
Decently created. I did not knew Both of you and I think I felt as much in love with it as you did ^^
Only thought I have is to mix it a bit more together as one.The chorus parts at 1:28 and 3:12 seems to kick in a little to loud compared to the other parts.
Hey there, Nice track. The 1:23 really came in hard :D. The track got certainly potential! I love the 0:52 drummy part. It came kind of as a unexpected surprise.
If I may be so free to give some minor thoughts:
- 0:45 put a reversed sweep. Maybe even the one for the uprise simply reversed might sound pretty good. The one at 2:01 seems ok also.
- 2:01 a bassdrop effect would do miracles
Just some minor things that already take this up to another level.
If I may be so free, I have a few thoughts which could lift this up quite a bit.
- At first the mixing could be a little more on point. Using mixing in general, fl EQ2 and the fl limiter would bring it all more smoothly together. The track is overkilled which is sad of the all the work you've put in which doesnt come out as it should
- Use of effects like sweeps, bassdrops and lifters will deff create a better overal listen as it can make perfect transitions.
Why can't I hit that download button? *sadface* lol
Splendid exciting track. I notice the buildups SheenSheep mentioned as well but I assume that its exactly meant as it sounds, since theres is pretty sure someone who begs to rap on this awesome track. The pluckies on the end are a very nice add.
least but not last, the intro and outro are done correctly. You may think 'duuuh' but it often gets forgotten or slammed to hard into things.
This track reminds me of the Step up 1 soundtrack btw. :D
I'm planning on getting a lot of over-arching, reverb-saturated vocal harmonies and a smooth, steady lead vocal to create a more relaxed, thoughtful sense of emotion. Thanks for the listen!
Btw, I've listened it with cheap MP3 in ear thingies as well as a quality studio headphone. Maybe I should have done the cheap in-ears first, and then the headphone. But i've noticed no differences as my reply above except the simple audio quality of my hardware. :)
At first, I was like, 'Wait, wut, does the icecream man drives by?' I had to adjust to it for a moment but that is more caused of me switching from my hard house project to this all of a sudden.
This track is SICK! It really brought me in a inner chillax state of peace and hormony. Kept listening it 6/7 times in a row!
This track sounds in perfect harmony. The instrumental and vocals make love together. There is a little crackling, best noticeable at the beginning. But I think thats part of the nice vintage kind of sound? I don't know how to say it in a better word but I think you'll understand haha. I had to get comfortable with it at first but actually its very nice.
Further feedback, the drums are all good.
At 1:08/1:14/1:120/1:23/2:16 etc. there comes a sound in which I cannot directly name. Sort of trumpet one but not like the awesome 1:16 trumpet/trombone a-like sound. That does seems to compress the vocals and bit of the rest at those few moments. (only SLIGHTLY) That being said, its only a innie minnie thing. Without that, or maybe turning it a tick more down does potentially the trick.
i'll download this
Excellent work Wordybum and Dj StephSkilled!! (lol)
It has definitely a nice swing in it! Kind of trancy progressive house with drums as a leading sound instead of supportive my ears tell me. I've never heard of Gqomu before. Thanks for introducing ;)
If I may be so free and add a little advice, the track does is relatively long for the fact its a lot of the same sounds. Possibly shortening it, or adding a little meer buildup/drop/extra sound might be an idea to considder. Just a thought tho
Hey Buddy, thank you! It seems that you had a different name when this comment went to my email. It's good to make the connection for real now. It's been enjoyable to do some work with other people's songs lately... it always seems to help me think in new ways and experiment, and it's been a while. Hoping to get some real work done on my own stuff now, since the nearby meth lab is no longer taking my voice and health. I'm happy with how this mix turned out, and I'm hoping that the originator digs it as well! Thanks for listening and leaving a comment!
That rise is very good created man! With a simple different sweep i.c.w. a deeper base drop applied at the break and maybe a tiny delayed start off, this would be an awesome produced track! Keep it comming ^^
on DJ Frest - Moon by DJFrest
Nice re-make tho ;)
on Shady Matrix by Darknives
What you might consider..
(if done already, please ignore the following helpful thought)
try audacity editing. Its noise reduction in combination with normalizing works pretty well. There are lots of tutorials about it and its very simple to do. If you however need any help, I can try it for you as well.
- Wobbin
on Ice - Future Bass by Yoboya
Decent production. Nice transitions. Nice chilling vibes.
My 5 cents of feedback would be:
- Intro effect (pouring in a drink? haha Cheers!)
Lower the volume of it. Same at 0:17 for a split second, which might be cut from the very same effect.
- Outro, for me it stops a bit to suddenly. But this might be a matter of taste rather then it actually being 'good or bad'. Possibly fading it out but remaining the 'YEAH' volume might do the trick.
Keep it up!
-Wobbin
on Shady Matrix by Darknives
Nice rhythm changes at 1:52. Nice transition also! The outro is also remarkably good.
Only small feedback that I could find is the crackling background noise during the first vocals.
Keep it up :)
- Wobbin
on VNTR - Titans by N3KA
If I may be so free, i've got a minor bit of feedback.
- Intro
Make the intro effect a bit louder, but fade in the volume of the remainings for about the first 7seconds. (then the created loops seems to re-start again) Fade not from 0% to 100% but from for example 60/70% to 100%. So that the ears can adapt and its more of a intro instead of 'BOOM here I am, you need to dance now!' kind of idea
- 1:19, Delay the Chorus melody for a sec or 1-3 into the break. It makes it a smoother more professionally sounding harmony. Trust me.
- 2:07, a very short 1 sec white noise sweep, combined with already sounding effects can possibly lift it up. There are millions of it, I might have a good one that I can send over. Used it recently at a likewise section with big room.
Nice job, keep it up! :)
- Wobbin
Can you send me the White noise sweep? that would be really nice. My E-mail is iamVNTR@gmail.com
on Running Out of Time by Tevysound2
Nice production! I like the fact you dare to fuse styles.
If I may be so free to give a bit of feedback:
- A fade-in intro or filter slowly opening through automation makes it nice
Best regards,
Wobbin
on Rare Commonalities by CorruptionEDM
This is a splendid track! Dubstep is not something i'd choose from first hand as a liking, but I can certainly enjoy it time to time. This hypes me up so good, I can't sit still listening this :D
Some minor feedback:
1) I know its often in Dubstep, but for me the 0:30 and 2:19 spin comes in a bit to loud. It being unexpected is perfect tho. As well as the timing and all. I'd personally just swipe the volume of it down just a 10-20%.
2) 1:48 and 3:25, a delay/echo from the main chorus sounds for just a sec or 2 after its finished while going into the break adds a extra pro touch.
Overall its already extremely good! Just my 2 cents. Keep doing what you’re doing! Faved this bjoetie
- Wobbin
1) I think you may be right, so in the future if I have similar types of noises in my tracks I'll make sure to give them a slightly longer volume sweep in. That way it won't spook people!
2) Good point, I would only worry about it muddying up the plucks that follow after, but if I were to end the track after a drop like that I will DEFINITELY follow that piece of advice.
Thanks a ton. The only way I can get better is with constructive criticism like this. It may not seem like a lot, but it really does make me a better producer!
on Avicii - Waiting For Love -SleeplezZ Remix- by DoctorPyro
1) NEVER give up
2) This is deff worth putting out here/there, don't be silly
3) I LOVE this remix, very well done. Transitions/Buildups are professionally and it is actually bringing a ode to avicii while not losing your own identity in it.
4) I do not even 'miss' the vocals, you managed it very good without.
3) Some minor feedback that I personally find suiting:
- intro, Fade everything except the sweep effect in for just a sec or 3/4. Not from o% to 100% but for example 60/70% to 100%. It gives the intro effect a bit more room without dominating entirely, while letting the ears adjust to whats coming instead of starting it right away quite loud.
Or, there are many ways, keep the volume, but maybe by using a filter/EQ cut that will slowly come in over a length of the first 17sec. Small detail but it gives a more professional touch since it is starting in right away now and makes me feel losing a bit of proper introduction.
- Outro: Cut off the last 4 empty seconds
Conclusion: splendid job!! Really :D
I hope the feedback is welcome and is seen as a helping matter.
- Wobbin
on Steven Universe - Both Of You SadGhoster87 Remix by acesmith
Its just that the more quiet parts either or to quiet, or the louder parts are to loud. There could be a better harmony.
on Steven Universe - Both Of You SadGhoster87 Remix by acesmith
Only thought I have is to mix it a bit more together as one.The chorus parts at 1:28 and 3:12 seems to kick in a little to loud compared to the other parts.
on Stardust CONTACT ME VOCALISTS by DoctorPyro
on High Velocity by jimmycat117
If I may be so free to give some minor thoughts:
- 0:45 put a reversed sweep. Maybe even the one for the uprise simply reversed might sound pretty good. The one at 2:01 seems ok also.
- 2:01 a bassdrop effect would do miracles
Just some minor things that already take this up to another level.
Keep it going!! Awesome job
on Treeferlove - WOOD GRAIN by milesatdenver
If I may be so free, I have a few thoughts which could lift this up quite a bit.
- At first the mixing could be a little more on point. Using mixing in general, fl EQ2 and the fl limiter would bring it all more smoothly together. The track is overkilled which is sad of the all the work you've put in which doesnt come out as it should
- Use of effects like sweeps, bassdrops and lifters will deff create a better overal listen as it can make perfect transitions.
Keep it going :)
on Nemesis by srob1234
Why can't I hit that download button? *sadface* lol
Splendid exciting track. I notice the buildups SheenSheep mentioned as well but I assume that its exactly meant as it sounds, since theres is pretty sure someone who begs to rap on this awesome track. The pluckies on the end are a very nice add.
least but not last, the intro and outro are done correctly. You may think 'duuuh' but it often gets forgotten or slammed to hard into things.
This track reminds me of the Step up 1 soundtrack btw. :D
on Dare - Instrumental - Vocal Ready by BradoSanz
This track is perfectly made in all its simplicity. And I mean simplicity as in a good way! People often do it exactly the other way round lol
May I ask if you could describe your POW on the wish for vocals on this? Pure for my curiosity of how it possibly may end up sounding :D
I'm planning on getting a lot of over-arching, reverb-saturated vocal harmonies and a smooth, steady lead vocal to create a more relaxed, thoughtful sense of emotion. Thanks for the listen!
Brado
on Im on my grind by wordybum
on Im on my grind by wordybum
This track is SICK! It really brought me in a inner chillax state of peace and hormony. Kept listening it 6/7 times in a row!
This track sounds in perfect harmony. The instrumental and vocals make love together. There is a little crackling, best noticeable at the beginning. But I think thats part of the nice vintage kind of sound? I don't know how to say it in a better word but I think you'll understand haha. I had to get comfortable with it at first but actually its very nice.
Further feedback, the drums are all good.
At 1:08/1:14/1:120/1:23/2:16 etc. there comes a sound in which I cannot directly name. Sort of trumpet one but not like the awesome 1:16 trumpet/trombone a-like sound. That does seems to compress the vocals and bit of the rest at those few moments. (only SLIGHTLY) That being said, its only a innie minnie thing. Without that, or maybe turning it a tick more down does potentially the trick.
i'll download this
Excellent work Wordybum and Dj StephSkilled!! (lol)
10/10
on Subversive by EazyBeatz
Not realy my taste, but the 'weird' kinda draw my attention. Spacy deep beats. Nicely composed
on 02 - Respect Gqomu by SenzoClive
Please bare in mind, as said, I've never heard of Gqomu before so it could be the actual reason for it. Just go as you think it sounds/feels right!
on 02 - Respect Gqomu by SenzoClive
If I may be so free and add a little advice, the track does is relatively long for the fact its a lot of the same sounds. Possibly shortening it, or adding a little meer buildup/drop/extra sound might be an idea to considder. Just a thought tho
on Midnights Travel Ololiuqui Mix by Spivkurl
on Midnights Travel Original Mix by GoldenOokami
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