Wobbin

Hey man!

1) NEVER give up
2) This is deff worth putting out here/there, don't be silly
3) I LOVE this remix, very well done. Transitions/Buildups are professionally and it is actually bringing a ode to avicii while not losing your own identity in it.
4) I do not even 'miss' the vocals, you managed it very good without.
3) Some minor feedback that I personally find suiting:

- intro, Fade everything except the sweep effect in for just a sec or 3/4. Not from o% to 100% but for example 60/70% to 100%. It gives the intro effect a bit more room without dominating entirely, while letting the ears adjust to whats coming instead of starting it right away quite loud.

Or, there are many ways, keep the volume, but maybe by using a filter/EQ cut that will slowly come in over a length of the first 17sec. Small detail but it gives a more professional touch since it is starting in right away now and makes me feel losing a bit of proper introduction.

- Outro: Cut off the last 4 empty seconds

Conclusion: splendid job!! Really :D
I hope the feedback is welcome and is seen as a helping matter.

- Wobbin

The entire part of 1:28 - 2:00 and 3:12 - 3:47. The kick seems all good. I used that word pure as a saying, my bad.

Its just that the more quiet parts either or to quiet, or the louder parts are to loud. There could be a better harmony.

Decently created. I did not knew Both of you and I think I felt as much in love with it as you did ^^

Only thought I have is to mix it a bit more together as one.The chorus parts at 1:28 and 3:12 seems to kick in a little to loud compared to the other parts.

Hey there,

If I may be so free, I have a few thoughts which could lift this up quite a bit.

- At first the mixing could be a little more on point. Using mixing in general, fl EQ2 and the fl limiter would bring it all more smoothly together. The track is overkilled which is sad of the all the work you've put in which doesnt come out as it should


- Use of effects like sweeps, bassdrops and lifters will deff create a better overal listen as it can make perfect transitions.

Keep it going :)

BOOM!

Why can't I hit that download button? *sadface* lol

Splendid exciting track. I notice the buildups SheenSheep mentioned as well but I assume that its exactly meant as it sounds, since theres is pretty sure someone who begs to rap on this awesome track. The pluckies on the end are a very nice add.

least but not last, the intro and outro are done correctly. You may think 'duuuh' but it often gets forgotten or slammed to hard into things.

This track reminds me of the Step up 1 soundtrack btw. :D

Hey there,

This track is perfectly made in all its simplicity. And I mean simplicity as in a good way! People often do it exactly the other way round lol

May I ask if you could describe your POW on the wish for vocals on this? Pure for my curiosity of how it possibly may end up sounding :D

Btw, I've listened it with cheap MP3 in ear thingies as well as a quality studio headphone. Maybe I should have done the cheap in-ears first, and then the headphone. But i've noticed no differences as my reply above except the simple audio quality of my hardware. :)

At first, I was like, 'Wait, wut, does the icecream man drives by?' I had to adjust to it for a moment but that is more caused of me switching from my hard house project to this all of a sudden.

This track is SICK! It really brought me in a inner chillax state of peace and hormony. Kept listening it 6/7 times in a row!

This track sounds in perfect harmony. The instrumental and vocals make love together. There is a little crackling, best noticeable at the beginning. But I think thats part of the nice vintage kind of sound? I don't know how to say it in a better word but I think you'll understand haha. I had to get comfortable with it at first but actually its very nice.

Further feedback, the drums are all good.

At 1:08/1:14/1:120/1:23/2:16 etc. there comes a sound in which I cannot directly name. Sort of trumpet one but not like the awesome 1:16 trumpet/trombone a-like sound. That does seems to compress the vocals and bit of the rest at those few moments. (only SLIGHTLY) That being said, its only a innie minnie thing. Without that, or maybe turning it a tick more down does potentially the trick.

i'll download this
Excellent work Wordybum and Dj StephSkilled!! (lol)

10/10

Glad I did not listen this through my woofers, think I would blew 'em up haha!

Not realy my taste, but the 'weird' kinda draw my attention. Spacy deep beats. Nicely composed

welcome then!

Please bare in mind, as said, I've never heard of Gqomu before so it could be the actual reason for it. Just go as you think it sounds/feels right!

It has definitely a nice swing in it! Kind of trancy progressive house with drums as a leading sound instead of supportive my ears tell me. I've never heard of Gqomu before. Thanks for introducing ;)

If I may be so free and add a little advice, the track does is relatively long for the fact its a lot of the same sounds. Possibly shortening it, or adding a little meer buildup/drop/extra sound might be an idea to considder. Just a thought tho

Vibrrrrrrrrrrrrations! Very good job on the remix :)

Pretty darn good! Know that this is deff not the genre i'd normally choose, however you made it interesting for sure for this fella! ;)

Bravely made! ;)

That rise is very good created man! With a simple different sweep i.c.w. a deeper base drop applied at the break and maybe a tiny delayed start off, this would be an awesome produced track! Keep it comming ^^

Quite nice tho. It can possibly turn out to a mayor banger. Let me know when the full track is dropped!

Hey there guys! After having quite some listens to both versions in comparison to give a better opionion i've come to the following :)

The mix DJ Stephskillie made deff is a nice new approach on this track. Chapeau!

However, if i may be so free, personally i do like the original voice of yours better then the slightly changed 'God part voice' used here. Theres an 2nd voice layer on the God part where i doubt if its needed for the full verse. Possibly it may sound better as in 'less is more' idea on some of the end wordings.

For example:
3:08 'Great Cannons'
3:11 'In just 1 week'
3:19 'They say god is greedy, god is cool'
Are perfect for the layer, but some parts in between may sound better without.

I hope i made myself clear atleast haha. As this genre is not my hometown, please dó read my comment as being from a average person instead of musician/producer/DJ/Artist for this genre.

To express myself maybe better, now its an solid 8 for me, with the change it could be a 9 for my ears.

I love the 'Devils voice vs God voice changes which is cool and i would suggest keeping in it.

Awesome production, keep it up!

Wauwawewaa! You're good man! Your voice reminds me of sounding close to Fort Minor. You reminded me in this on Fort Minor - Remember The Name

And i mean that as an compliment ;)