Wobbin

All Hail Hallows Funk
Nice swinging binging banging track with a spooky edge!

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Lol, what even happend to Corsten? I never heard from him anymore for years.

The track is a bit to busy for me as in to high bpm, i'm honestly afraid that that is the case for more people. But never say never.

I got some good old warehouse techno coming up in a few weeks if you're interested. Within the theme of Halloween.

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Wicked mate!
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Nice track! It has a bit of a dreamy techno effect on me. The sounds you’ve chosen go very well together into detail. Rhythms are good and the overall mixing is quite good as well. Your intro and outro are very strong also. That might sound as a ‘duuuuh’ but a lot of fellow looper artists do not even have them, or not always nicely worked out IMO. Well done, this is certainly a 8/10 for me.

I always try to take some time to give people feedback whenever I’m able. And I found a few points I’d like to share. I hope you are open-minded for that and see it as an encouraging matter:

- The mastering is not superb. The waveform already tells a lot. Headroom gets lost and its too loud (for me). I cannot play this at a loud volume and still enjoy this as result of that. So it kinda works the opposite of how it was meant to be mastered.
- Intro FX may be louder/more noticeable. Or combined with another FX maybe.
- I am not a big fan of what I call the Hardwell plucks or whatever they are in the chorus at 2:09 and further . But you may ignore that its my opinion and not objective. I personally find those more of a intro/outro/break/buildup sound and actually taking the energy away from the chorus which should have the highest energy level of the track.

Overall very good job, keep it up bro!!
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Interesting hypnotic touch!
Its a bit repetitive but for sure something to space on (I mean listening in hypnotic vibe)

Nice work!
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nicely done!
Nothing more to add besides EDMoney

Looking forward to the end result :)
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Nice one man! I love the Arabic touch to it.

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such a chill vibe, I LOVE it! The reggae vibes really make this going strong.

The only feedback I could think of is the break being without the melody or with another sound or something to make it actually more of a 'break'. Maybe a bit longer and a bit sooner in the track also.

Faved!
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BANGER!
Very nice man, gets me boppin in my chair :D

I read you're still working on it, so I have no idea where you at now. But this would be my feedback if you don't mind:
- 0:23, the claps that come in are fastly 'drown' by the overwhelming volume of the rest.
- 0:38, i would personally let the trumpet synth(?) be likewise to the drum role OR, you could fade it out towards 0:38 and let it bust in at 0:46 again. This creates also a more professional and awesome vibe. Maybe is this 2nd option better because taking away the melody/synth creates the urge to have it back for listeners. They will crave for it. For now its very much at almost every second in this preview making him 'less valuable'.
- Some more things that i've noticed just like the claps that have to do a lot with mixing. The track is so loud at the moment that it presses a lot of instruments away in presence of the kick and synth(s) and keeps only very headroom. I'm not sure where you'll go with it but if I may do a suggestion: Don't make this a loudness war kind of track. Compare it with other hard sounding tracks e.g. Hardwell and KSHMR who seems to have some of the loudest tracks out there in this genre. This is certainly meant to play loud, but there is loud and there is loud ;).

Nice job! Curious to the end result :)
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I like the style you went with it! I could fully enjoy this and had to switch to full objective mode in order to give you proper feedback. Otherwise I just kept enjoying LOL

I agree with the gentlemen below. In addition:
- 0:50/2:10 The bass-drop effect into those parts is evenly loud while the acapella has a double layer at the 1:50 and is thereby louder/stronger. I would personalize the drop effect in volume and turn the first one a bit down.
- On the other hand. Hearing the break transitions at 0:30/1:50, they sound a bit nude. There seems to be a sweep far on the background. Maybe pulling it more to the front might already do the trick. Otherwise a tiny soft impact/sweep/fx might work.

Very nice work man, faved! :D
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Good to see you again man, I hope all is well! :)
Nice smooth track. I like it!
If I may, the only feedback I could find is that the vocals do not seem exactly on point throughout the track. I think moving them around will solve most, maybe all of it into a more harmonic song as one.

Examples:
-0:08 / 0:32 / around 0:51, they seem to come in like a plit second late.
- 1:03, I would maybe have started her slightly before the music comes back in.

Maybe that is what NateJMusic was referring to as well. I'm not sure. Just some food for thought in a helpfull manor. Nice chill production! :D
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Hey man :)

Some glitchy sounds! I have to admit in all honesty, I had to get into the groove for the first 10 sec or so, but it sounds good! Unique even comes to mind. Nice additions in the vocals throughout the song. It def keeps things interesting with all the changes and variation.

I know it might most likely be my crazy mind, but it gives me a slight medieval feeling. Maybe that's caused by your deep voice haha. One of those songs sung with a jar in the hand at a wooden table in the tavern. :D

Hell yeah this is a nice banger indeed! :D
Deff music i'd listen often. Its just to short lol

One thought that I would like to share, i'd suggest adding another instrument at 0:30. A hat or drum will do or using some filter work on the synth since there are no drums or hats involved untill 0:59. It does not sounds wrong now but i'm missing something because you're entire track progress is nicely structered (0:15sec, 0:15-0:45 sec etc) and then there is 30sec like that.

Opening up the filter might even be the nicest add, because opening up creates a slow increase of higher frequences which gives the psychological effect of the drop being harder as people have the urge for lower freqs.

Keep it up!
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Hi there,
Nice track. I like the friendly approach of it :)
if I may be so free, I found a few feedback points:
- 1:49, maybe spent a bit more time on the transitions. Its not bad, but could be better I think. Maybe is rising the volume of the effect you have there already enough, maybe a small sweep installment will do.
- 2:23 / 3:31 there are 2 notes that do not feel nice within the flow for me. The melody itself is awesome tho.

Keep it up man. Nice track. Just some things to considder which are very minor :)
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For the remix contest of this track, my house remix can be found here:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/179763

Hey man!
I don't have much to contribute as feedback other then whats mentioned already. Just wanted to let you know that its an amazing track that certainly has potential when fixed in mixing.

Keep it up!
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Perfect track to wake up too. Seeing the sun coming through, hearing the birdies outside and this coming out of my system. :)

The instrumental is quite minimalistic but it def works! This gave me a feeling of 'soul meets reggae' in some kind of way. Beautiful voice and also a well done for Rakia!

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LOOOOL funny as fk and yet so true. Nice hard track tho! :)

I like it! Certainly potential man

If I may, i have a bit of feedback to share. I hope you are open to that and see it as a helping matter rather then a judging one.
- 0:45, I would add a FX like a drop or impact there. There is a small one but its more of a percussion to me. Which seems missing power. When people listen and do not look at the waveform (that is how we should review a track IMO), then it sounds like a exciting buildup but without an actual drop following up. It feels a bit like if your girlfriends makes you exciting for some sexy time and then leaves all in a sudden for a ladies night with her girlfriends. LOL
- 4:01, Is that another kick popping up? Or is the kick's volume or gain through a plugin that is rising? Not 100% what is it but I do notice that the kick is being flattened in the track at most parts. A side-chain would work.
- Personally, but that is of course up to you, I do honestly not feel a great match between the actual lead and the rest of the track as it is now. I think the reason might be that it is (made) to wide and the reverb on it also helps with that. Just a extra thought I wanted to share.

Keep it up man. This is deff a nice track already!
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KILL EVERYONE HERE. lol Love the vocals, very well produced instrumental with it. Awesome variation. Nothing really to give feedback on, sounds proper!

I think this is the best track i've heard from you! Or its just the one I prefer most, anyways, both good ;)
Faved!
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Nice instrumental! This can def become big man
I have nothing to add as actual feedback, all very smooth and good for me :)
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Awesome banger!
Reminds me of W&W, in a good way :D
keep it up bro
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Quite nice!
I would personally added a path or choir at the intro, on the background. But that is only a matter of taste.

The outro does sound a bit weird, I am not sure if that was your intention
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Awesome track! Such a banger :D
Big screeny on the high end indeed.
Faved!
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Who let tha duck out?! (At 1:00) LOL
Nice deep beats.