Wobbin

Rhythm is a dancer and God is a DJ

Nijmegen, Netherlands

Joined : 11th Mar 2016 - 9 years ago

Last Online : 20th Jun 2024 - 1 year ago

Wobbin comments on tracks

Wobbin has posted 102 comments on other peoples tracks.

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Wobbin 17th Aug 2016 14:37 - 9 years ago

on the final conflict by wordybum

Hey there guys! After having quite some listens to both versions in comparison to give a better opionion i've come to the following :)

The mix DJ Stephskillie made deff is a nice new approach on this track. Chapeau!

However, if i may be so free, personally i do like the original voice of yours better then the slightly changed 'God part voice' used here. Theres an 2nd voice layer on the God part where i doubt if its needed for the full verse. Possibly it may sound better as in 'less is more' idea on some of the end wordings.

For example:
3:08 'Great Cannons'
3:11 'In just 1 week'
3:19 'They say god is greedy, god is cool'
Are perfect for the layer, but some parts in between may sound better without.

I hope i made myself clear atleast haha. As this genre is not my hometown, please dó read my comment as being from a average person instead of musician/producer/DJ/Artist for this genre.

To express myself maybe better, now its an solid 8 for me, with the change it could be a 9 for my ears.

I love the 'Devils voice vs God voice changes which is cool and i would suggest keeping in it.

Awesome production, keep it up!

wordybum replied 17th Aug 2016 - 9 years ago

this is AMAZING feedback and exactly what i was looking for. thank you so much for the feedback. i will re-edit this track to reflect your suggestions, as they are awesome.

thanks again!

Bless.

Wobbin 17th Aug 2016 00:00 - 9 years ago

on Return of the king by wordybum

Wauwawewaa! You're good man! Your voice reminds me of sounding close to Fort Minor. You reminded me in this on Fort Minor - Remember The Name

And i mean that as an compliment ;)

wordybum replied 17th Aug 2016 - 9 years ago

thanks so much for the listen and the great feedback! i get Mike Shinoda comparisons here and there, so i never take it as anything other than a compliment.

check out the rest of my tracks, feel free to DL all of it and spread the word.

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