Hi mate, what a beautiful track you have here, chilled yet uplifting from start to finish. My only, and this is my personal opinion nothing more, observation or comment is that the drum track could be a little stronger or more upfront. This is only my opinion, the track itself is outstanding. Thanks for sharing.
Oh wow... about drums, you're not the only argueing upfront or strenght... well, first edit had "phantom weight", then i add a stronger and deeper kick on the original "real" drum... i listen final result with the i-phone earphones, which has the best quality audio... and, despite you warn that they are not very powerful, in that earphones sounds a tiny tiny distortion.... About attack, i try to get the kick early but the result was not consistent with the original idea I had in mind... anyway, i'm glad you like it,
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Truly original! This is what my mind sounds like when I cant sleep! ha ha! Every bar has a new story! Nice work mate, hope you were able to sleep after making this!!
Hey Wayne, what a track! Its not really something I'd listen to normally, but 11/10 for content and production, its just perfect for that style of music, very well done to you and your crew sir!
I dont really listen to much hip hop, this is a really stand out piece though. Really well produced and mixed. The vocal and spoken words fit the track well, and its chilled and laid back! Very well done.
Hi mate, you really cant beat a lovely Rhodes for some nice mellow relaxing house/ lounge / chillout music. 1:20 really does it for me!! Ha ha. Nice work mate.
Hi mate, yes it sounds like it has some deep/bass house elements there, it definitely has potential. Gets going around 0.55 then? You might want too keep that kick at the same 4/4 throughout the track? I like the bass though, what did you use?
Keep at it anyway!
Redneck hip hop!! I love it! Have you invented a new genre?? Seriously I listened to this all the way through so Im probably going to have nightmares now! This would make an excellent soundtrack to a scary movie! Very haunting indeed! You have worked the vocals (round the track??) very well and the production is spot on! Very nice work here my friend!
The world definitely needs some new genres. I dread scrolling through the list and having to pick one; my stuff never seems to fit anywhere, and hey maybe that's the problem. The absolutely hilarious thing is that I never ever thought I was doing something scary. But now that I listen back to it, it's like, Duh. So you gave me insight into my own work, my friend. Maybe that's why I have a hard time with genre - I don't know what the hell I'm doing. Oh well, it's still fun. Thank you for your kind comments. The one about the production makes me happy cuz I always struggle with Audacity to get the mix right, tweak after tweak. Sorry about the nightmares!
Hi mate, nice work here. You have done well with the vocals, is this your first attempt? Its sounds excellent as good as Ive heard on here! and the production is tight. Very 'pop' indeed. Keep up the good work!
Joy as ever! Nice little groover here mate, nice and deep and funky.Loving those organ? stabs, and the vocal shouts blend beautifully over the track! I hope this is a little taste of summer!
Very catchy bass line here. This would have sounded as good as an instrumental, with some little tweeks here and there as Spudsy has mentioned. Definately has potential! Nice work here anyways!
thanks for your feedback smallpaul its much appreciated,its the tweeks to perfection which i need to learn to advance the quality,im trying as much as pos to learn from youtube vids as i only know basics so far except for a few things like reversing a sample by bouncing in place and tasks alike. i will reach perfection in good time im sure i know ive just got to keep trying and learning... thanks :)
Hi Mykael, wow what a big production! This is real quality from start to finish and your vocals really compliment the track. So glad to see you're still hard at work recording, keep up the good work my friend, best regards Paul.
Loving this track mate, so electronic 80s! Your voice is so suited to this type of electronica! If I had one suggestion purely from my selfish taste, I would love to hear it with double time bass with a phaser or something on it, otherwise its classic 80s! Very well done my friend!!
Ha ha nice work here my friend, I think it sounds like a cross between super mario and I think someone mentioned Devo? Anyway if that was what you were aiming for you nailed it! I love the 80's, Where I did most of my growing up! I have a massive collection on my ipod, the 80s was really diverse with everything from 2tone to new wave/ nu romantics and indie 80s hair metal and later on rave and dance culture! Love them all!!!!
Thanks, Paul. Definitely some Devo in there I think. Not so sure about Super Mario! :) Was kind of fun to create this track, testing out different "characters" for the vocals. I can't sing worth a damn, unlike you. But, I keep thinking that there must be some character voice that will be passable. I've been playing around with combining a vocoder track doubled with a heavily processed straight vocal track, plus auto-tune to mitigate the worst instances of my inability to keep any note on pitch. Still trying to find the magic combination. Would be better I think to just find some good vocalists to collab with. :).
Hi mate, excellent track. I love a bit of drum and bass now and then, usually of the liquid/ atmospheric variety. This is a really good example of Drum and Bass! Any potential D&B producers please take note! Nice work my friend.
Excellent track here my friend! Nice flow and smooth production. Beautiful dreamy Rhodes in the background over a solid beat laying down a musical canvas for the main message! I dont really listen to much Hip Hop but tracks like this really are a breath of fresh sonic air! The video on you tube was good as well! Well done sir!
Just beautiful! Very haunting and thought provoking! You cant help but be taken in and swallowed up by the depth in this piece, and thats just with my ear buds in! A master class in ambient I think!
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