DaMann

You should put a description so we know what we are about to listen to or how you did it. Ok to the track, it's something different, I like it a lot. I like that vocal at 1:50 or so with all the reverb.

Great job!

-DaMann

The beginning is like hip hop, I love the vocals. Very trippy. If you were aiming to create a more trance like song it will need more energy, synth leads for example, this is trippy and relaxed.

Still Great Job

-DaMann

So evil sounding. I like the percs/high pitched snares/bells/whatever you use in the beginning.

Great job!

-DaMann

I love the beginning! It's my favorite part. I would change the kick drum if I were you, sounds to "default" if you know what I mean.

Great track!

-DaMann

I like it, but I am not liking the plucking sound at 1:30ish, I think it could work if you used a different sound but you can use the same notes.

Great job!

-DaMann

Great job! Not much else to say it was put together very well.

-DaMann

I love the plucked strings in the beginning. I also love how complex some of it is.

Great job!

-DaMann

Sounds a lot like DJ Tiesto, which is a good thing because I love him. Great job!

-DaMann

I like it, but the first and second synth that come in are from Basshunter I think. Where did you get that vocal from I think I have heard it before.

I just listened to DotA again, the synth does sound like it but it is a very basic synth line so I wouldn't be suprised if you created it without knowing who basshunter is.
Great job!

-DaMann

Delicious, this made me want to create a DnB track right now. That's exactly what I'm going to do.
Greatjob!

-DaMann

If you are into glitch you could check out my track Mary, sadly I am to lazy to post a link, but you should find it.

Too your track, I love the vocals, along with glitch, and IDM. A little slow for IDM, but this is a great first track, you don't want to hear mine.
Great job!

-DaMann

All I really have to say is great job. Nothing wrong with it, it sounds great.

Great job!

-DaMann

I remember when Mr. Robot used this in his track. You did good with the acapella. I like it hows its so suspenseful until about 2:25 then it just jumps into an acid sequence.
Great job!

-DaMann

It's too short. It upset me when it just ended that quick. Make it longer and you get a "Great job!" but as of now you get...
Very good job! I love the synth.

-DaMann

Very suspenseful and trippy. I can definitly see a scene in a movie in the middle east where this is playing and a guy is walking out of a building holding a shiny suitcase filled with money and hes strapped about to bite someones head off. But hey, that's just me. Great job!

-DaMann

Very chill dream trance. I'm sure shes happy with this song.

-DaMann

The impact sound at the beginning peaks a bunch, along with other things. I would turn a bunch of stuff down. Did you use Vanguard VST for this? I like this. Great job!

-DaMann

I understand why this makes you smile it's very happy, a very major sound. Also very dream like.

-DaMann

Sounds very industrial. I like it. Especially the drums.

-DaMann

Very dream like. Dream trance I guess. I love it.
Great job!

-DaMann

I like this a lot. It is really chill and somewhat hip hop like.

Great job!

-DaMann

I would say it's more a rap beat. Sorry but that's what I think. I like it. Good job!

-DaMann

I like it, it's not to often you here electronic and hip hop mixed like this. It is really good for being new at FL. Great Job!

-DaMann

At about 1:00 where you use an arpegiator or something it sounds good but the transition does not, it is kind of choppy.
Great Track!

-DaMann

I love it, how it's so evil sounding then just breaks out into that fast paced drum beat. Great job keep it up!