DaMann

Perpetual Deliciousness

Somewhere, United States

Joined : 12th Apr 2008 - 18 years ago

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DaMann has posted 283 comments on other peoples tracks.

Comments 151 - 175 of 283

DaMann 2nd Nov 2008 07:04 - 17 years ago

on 19 Note Paradise by Zooloo75

19 Note Paradise, why do you call it this, are there only 19 different piano hits in the piano loops you are using? I love the hi hats you are using. There is too much background noise though, kind of makes the piano sound all wompyjogged.

Great job!

-DaMann

Zooloo75 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

The reason I called it 19 Note Paradise is because the main piano melody has 19 notes in it.
Thanks for the review.

DaMann 2nd Nov 2008 07:02 - 17 years ago

on I luv Drums by Krook

I love drums too! Nice use of the congas? No these are bongos? Am I right? The little vox sounds pretty good too. The bass is pretty good. The synth at 1:30 or so is good, but doesn't fit quite right.

Great job!

-DaMann

Krook replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Hi DaMann
Thanks for reviewing my track. yep you are right about the synth its a good sound but its coming in too quick. It was just a quick track I made up from a new CD I bought from loopmasters - Quantic House its got some real good sounds on it.
By the way Bongos and Congas Ha! Ha!
Thankyou
Krook

DaMann 2nd Nov 2008 07:01 - 17 years ago

on The NEED by highz

Jamming! The sidechainning is superb! The vocals blend nicely.
Favorite!

Great job!

-DaMann

DaMann 2nd Nov 2008 06:56 - 17 years ago

on K.o - Kid - R 'n' B by Shah2008

Those orchestral stabs are pretty tight. Then that wobbly synth is great! And the occasional other percussion instrument that sounds real unfiltered, I think it is a snare that sounds great. My only suggestion is make it more dynamic, it slowly adds on for the most part, I would say add on take off and add on then take off one last time but don't just peel them off and ease them on by fade in's and out's, use tension and make it more dramatic.

Great job!

-DaMann

DaMann 2nd Nov 2008 06:52 - 17 years ago

on Chemlab Remix by djbladerunner

Awesome! I love breakbeat, hell I love everything, glitch, you name it, and you combine a bunch of awesome sampling in this song awesomely in an awesome manner! That just awesome!

Great job!

-DaMann

DaMann 2nd Nov 2008 06:48 - 17 years ago

on You simple by DJVO

That synth sounds great with the kick together, the chords you are using however are way to commonly used in my opinion, they sound good, but who hasn't used them? I really enjoy the 1:00 mark or so where the other synth goes off on it's own. The other synth is really good that comes in later!

Ohhh... I see, I never really pay attention to titles.

Great job!

-DaMann

DJVO replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

why do you think my track is called You Simple... and thank you for your review

DaMann 31st Oct 2008 23:20 - 17 years ago

on CP DUB #3 (BAD MAN SONG) by DJCP1

Go Amen Break! I love jungle! The samples are pretty cool. The bass is really good! Sounds like the kick clips a bunch when everything comes in, but maybe I am just hearing things.

Great job!

-DaMann

DJCP1 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it. What you're hearing is distortion on one of the drum tracks.

DaMann 31st Oct 2008 23:14 - 17 years ago

on Lazyboy DarkHearted remix by lazyboy

AHHHH!!!! I had a page long review written and I accidentally pressed cancel... Well I will summarize... When the vocals say it's just one more... that is when I would bring in the beat. Then run the lead through a filter when they die down and use a cymbal or something to bring it back in. The lead is a little repetitive, but good. It holds the lowest part of the arp to long... it goes high lower loweeeeeeeeeeeeest, maybe you could go high lower lowest highest? Just some ideas, and maybe another lead, something echoey. You also need a bassline, and they are not hard to create. Take an analog synth use two saw waves and set them in octave 2 with high filter frequencies.

Just do something like this.
K=kick
B=bass

K-B-K-B-K-B-K-B-

Or my favorite...

KBBKBBKBBKBB

Tweak the velocities to get great sounds.

Good track!

-DaMann

lazyboy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

i have the ideas, but dunno how to make the sounds i want. had FL8 for a few days and ive created both k b b k b b

and k b k b k b type B lines.

ah give it a few weeks ill have it down.
thank u for ur time lads ;)

DaMann 31st Oct 2008 01:44 - 17 years ago

on Twang Thang by johnnygadget

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DaMann 31st Oct 2008 01:40 - 17 years ago

on deep of ocean by inPublic

Title suits it well, the side chain or whatever string with a synth is great. The kick and bass are great! This song is great, the synth sounds like Reachers of Civilization by York. My only complain is the acid synth that comes in about 1:00 is a little uncalled for and the end of that loops that goes dadaDADA(I'm trying here) sounds a little 80's which doesn't blend with the modern mood of the track.

Great job!

-DaMann

DaMann 31st Oct 2008 00:12 - 17 years ago

on Dream Gates by sensationdj

Nice drums. Don't think I have seen you here recently. This is old school trance, which was the best.

Great job!

-DaMann

DaMann 30th Oct 2008 01:50 - 17 years ago

on Lazyboy - No Saving Grace by lazyboy

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DaMann 30th Oct 2008 01:46 - 17 years ago

on S.U.B.A - you by SUBA

What are the voxes saying? I like ambient house a lot, especially at night. The thing I think it needs is a little more progression, it progresses very smoothly, but too slow I think. Kind of goes like this

.....,,,,,eeeeee|||||eeeee,,,,,.....

If that makes any sence it it just kind of stating how it slowly builds into one point of explosion, well not much of an explosion in ambient house, but the most energetic part I guess, I think there needs to be multiple plays of the chorus, with slight variations.

Still a great track, just trying to help.

Great job!

-DaMann

SUBA replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

HY!!Thank you for reviewing!!And many thx for helping !!!

SUBA

DaMann 29th Oct 2008 21:23 - 17 years ago

on New Dawn Destiny by KDLproject

Wow, it's really great, this needs to be in a movie. That's all I have to say.

Great job!

-DaMann

DaMann 29th Oct 2008 01:00 - 17 years ago

on angels and misfits by RadiumX

The synth is a little too hard, but still great, just maybe turn the shaper drive down. The percussion is awesome with the vox. I really don't think it needs any vocals.

Amazing track!

-DaMann

RadiumX replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

on the Original version of this song which is 5:05
the synth is more level.but because i had to edit
to about 1:30 out or so,to get it at 4mb,because it
is at 320kbps at 11.5mb's so i think also when you
upload a song here it gets re-encoded for bandwith
and compression.and again thanks for the review.

Charles MIcheal Douglas
aka-Radium X

DaMann 28th Oct 2008 02:30 - 17 years ago

on Build On Devodale by Devodale

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DaMann 28th Oct 2008 02:28 - 17 years ago

on China Butterfly by Devodale

I love classic synth sounds especially when in ambient. Isn't recorded with cassettes fun? Me and my brother had a project a few years ago with a 6 track yamaha, we still use it when he's in town. Wasn't there for the 80's but seemed like a missed a bunch... like the Stark Club in Dallas.... that sounded like the good ol' days.

Well Great Job!

-DaMann

DaMann 27th Oct 2008 23:09 - 17 years ago

on Machine by scratchrabbitt

That bassline is sick, the one complaint I have is take the reverb off the kick, just let it be a dirty kick.

Great job!

-DaMann

DaMann 27th Oct 2008 01:50 - 17 years ago

on Louie Who??? (With Sixfinger's attached) by Sixfingermusic

Well hello Sixfinger, I haven't seen Barcasa in a while. Everything is just jamming, I love funk! Are you from Mount Pleasant Texas? That sax or woodwind or whatever break is pretty cool, but maybe it should keep an element from the original song while it goes on, maybe just drums, maybe guitar, but I think it needs something. But I haven't heard Barcasa's song.

Great job!

-DaMann

DaMann 27th Oct 2008 01:40 - 17 years ago

on Bass Raver (Updated) by Niclas199

You just couldn't wait to get into the chorus? I think you need a good intro if you want a great song, don't get me wrong, this song is really good, but just needs an intro.

Great job!

-DaMann

Niclas199 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Thx man :D

DaMann 26th Oct 2008 06:06 - 17 years ago

on dusk by aka31seconds

Those sweeping pads are cool, but sound a bit overused in the beginning. When the drums are coming in that is awesome. The bass sounds a little too powerful though in the beginning, just needs to be toned down a bit. When everything is going it is awesome!

Great job!

-DaMann

DaMann 25th Oct 2008 01:58 - 17 years ago

on House Of Mind by disciple2jah

That synth comes in really unexpected, you need to find a way to work it in, and I would turn up your kick and make your bassline a little more dynamic.

Great job!

-DaMann

DaMann 14th Oct 2008 05:27 - 17 years ago

on Rave_5(madebyjannsen-Trance) by jannsen

That lead synth is awesome! I would try to introduce the drums in another way besides fading them in, just doesn't work in this tracks, works in some but not all.

What is that? A supersaw, yay! I LOVE supersaw pads.

Great job!

-DaMann

DaMann 14th Oct 2008 05:25 - 17 years ago

on DJ VcLorn The Extraterestrial - Black Drops by VcLorn

I like the stabby synth. The kick in the beginning sounds almost hardstyle, just not fast enough. Then those little bell thingies add a lot to the atmosphere.

Great job!

-DaMann

DaMann 11th Oct 2008 02:25 - 18 years ago

on Any idea's about name? by Niclas199

Some parts feel a little wide to me if you know what I mean, but I am by far no expert on mastering. As for a name....................
................

I feel like an island for some reason when listening to one, like a Utopia.

The Island
Electronic Utopia
Electronic Island

I don't know... but great track, a little repetitive but still good.

-DaMann

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