ForDiana - UnconciousPilot

10th Aug 2008 17:27 - 18 years ago
Description : This is a track I created for my girlfriend, a beautiful Polish woman named Diana. I was trying to capture how gorgeous she truley is in this song, but I don't think a song can truley do her justice! It took me about 9 hours to completely finish but it was well worth it, I really like this track and I hope you all do too! It is not completely finished but I really appreciate any constructive critiscism, do not be shy please, this is one of the only ways I can improve. Im not positive the first break at about 57s is good? Let me know!
Thanks and enjoy!!
U.P
EDIT: [Stuck another synth in and tweaked the delay effects]

Thanks for the advice! My next thing is to try to make this feel "Bigger" more "Epic" by adding another lead. Keep the good input coming! :)

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give UnconciousPilot some feedback.

RonGallagher
RonGallagher 15th Aug 2008 09:33 - 18 years ago
Very nice work.
Honest, sincere.
Heart and soul expression.
Voltage
DaMann
DaMann 13th Aug 2008 17:54 - 18 years ago
Very chill dream trance. I'm sure shes happy with this song.

-DaMann
Planetjazzbass
Planetjazzbass 11th Aug 2008 17:35 - 18 years ago
Hey man this is the first track I've heard of yours.....a great breathing melody line..when you've got a vision in your head and you extrapolate it into music..well that's what it's all about isn't it!...a very emotive sound..well tempered and rich...I really enjoyed this especially as it's dedicated to a lady...cheers planet :)
UnconciousPilot
UnconciousPilot replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
I'm glad you enjoyed the first one you heard! This is generally speaking not my style, but I did enjoy it.. I'm still learning how to make music period so I do not limit myself to one type. Whatever sounds good and is fun to work on! Thanks again Planet!
ToxicVoltage
ToxicVoltage 11th Aug 2008 11:16 - 18 years ago
This is really hot
Diana would be glad to know that
A)Someone made a song for her
and
B)The song is great
-bri
UnconciousPilot
UnconciousPilot replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks Bri!
skyrider
skyrider 11th Aug 2008 06:07 - 18 years ago
I think Diana should be very pleased with this musical gift.. the tracks beauty is its simplicity. never too over crowded very nice mik
UnconciousPilot
UnconciousPilot replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you!
Reverse1984
Reverse1984 11th Aug 2008 00:40 - 18 years ago
I really dig the mellow vibe of this track!!
UnconciousPilot
UnconciousPilot replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
I actually just updated it about 4seconds after your reply, check it out again if you don't mind :)
cyco
cyco 10th Aug 2008 19:13 - 18 years ago
i like that it is simple in composition. But i really think it would benifit with a complicated mixture to give it some more atmosphere. like an intricate apps to accompany the main melody. And ofcourse don't forget the echo on the key melody to make it seem like it doubles the tempo. Yeah that would be nice.
UnconciousPilot
UnconciousPilot replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Appreciated! I have been toying with an echo effect on the keyboard if thats what you mean. Have not quite figured out how to get it to work correctly (I tried Reverb and Line Delay) I'll keep playing with it and yes, I was also trying to come up with another synth. Thanks for your advice it is much appreciated!!

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