Well hello Sixfinger, I haven't seen Barcasa in a while. Everything is just jamming, I love funk! Are you from Mount Pleasant Texas? That sax or woodwind or whatever break is pretty cool, but maybe it should keep an element from the original song while it goes on, maybe just drums, maybe guitar, but I think it needs something. But I haven't heard Barcasa's song.
You just couldn't wait to get into the chorus? I think you need a good intro if you want a great song, don't get me wrong, this song is really good, but just needs an intro.
Those sweeping pads are cool, but sound a bit overused in the beginning. When the drums are coming in that is awesome. The bass sounds a little too powerful though in the beginning, just needs to be toned down a bit. When everything is going it is awesome!
That synth comes in really unexpected, you need to find a way to work it in, and I would turn up your kick and make your bassline a little more dynamic.
That lead synth is awesome! I would try to introduce the drums in another way besides fading them in, just doesn't work in this tracks, works in some but not all.
What is that? A supersaw, yay! I LOVE supersaw pads.
I like the stabby synth. The kick in the beginning sounds almost hardstyle, just not fast enough. Then those little bell thingies add a lot to the atmosphere.
Some parts feel a little wide to me if you know what I mean, but I am by far no expert on mastering. As for a name....................
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I feel like an island for some reason when listening to one, like a Utopia.
The Island
Electronic Utopia
Electronic Island
I don't know... but great track, a little repetitive but still good.
The intro is really cool, but the guitar/stringed thing is a little too subtle for the bass you use, not the kick, the distorted bass. I would say keep that bass in the later parts of the song just not the beginning, but you use it a bit too much, and it distorts other things. The drums are awesome!
I wonder, i have used other base before with a different acid with no distorts, but this is the most suitable bass and I also canselled out alot of clipping with the bass, its a win win situation. But ure right there is a bit conflict.
Those vocal sounds sound awesome, but I hear something that sounds out of tune, just for a second in the beginning. The lead is awesome, even though it consists of like two notes. The piano is really good too. But at one point on one of the scales you created it sounds a little too high. I don't like the kick roll, you can use them but it gets to a way higher frequency. The ending is really cool, sounds like an intro to a new song, maybe you should make it longer to accommodate that insane ending?
In the beginning sounds like house music, very 909'ish. Maybe fade in the snare roll a bit more. The synth that comes in at 0:40 or so, doesn't fit to well, it's a good synth line, but not for this peace really, maybe something slower. With a little work this could be great!
That pad is awesome. Great job for a first DnB song. The samples are very well placed. You have quite a kick drum in there, it sounds like it is clipping at parts.
I like how you filter those snaps/claps, it's the little things like that that make a song great for me. You might want to turn the bass up a bit, not the kick, the other bass.
Very acidy, I think if some of the synths were a bit harder sounding it could make it better. The sounds sound a little default if you know what I mean.
thanks man, glad you liked it. Your absolutly right, it does sounds off key sometimes, funny tho, but i will fix it, glad you liked it. stay tuned for my final and original mix of this song, cheers!
On the synth line in the beginning it sounds really out of tune. But I am tonedef, I really can't distinguish notes.
The drums are awesome though, this is really good for one of your first tracks.
You DaMann...
Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment. Cool fun here on Looperman. The Barry Morgan Guitar Challenge inspired this track. Hope to participate in more stuff like this in the Looperman community.
Any reason for inspiration is a good thing. Thank you providing some inspiration as well DaMann. Much appreciated. Voltage
I love this song, though I don't like the way the synth fades in really, maybe if you used a filter to fade it in instead of the mixer it would sound better. But when you get to the chorus it's awesome!
I love this song. Definitely a fav. Has a hardcore feel to it. The panning on those snare drums is awesome, I have to use something like that sometime.
The arp at the beginning is really cool, but sounds real 80's-ish. There is no real prominent kick with some "umph" you just have a subbass kick. Then there is no ending. I think you can keep the arp but change the sound, then make other changed like the kick and create an ending and it will be great.
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I feel like an island for some reason when listening to one, like a Utopia.
The Island
Electronic Utopia
Electronic Island
I don't know... but great track, a little repetitive but still good.
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Any reason for inspiration is a good thing. Thank you providing some inspiration as well DaMann. Much appreciated. Voltage
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