The song sounds good (to me) but it has a terrible accustic. Not the voice, just the complete rest of the track sounds like playing two times with much to much reverb and echos.
But i realy like the song that is behind all this or maybe more under all.
Maybe you should do a more clear master :)
But hey! dont mind at all, cause who am i to told you any about a clean mix? :) - right! nobody!
Itz a cool groovy reggea and the voice of Angela Fleming fits very well.
This was the kind of suggestion i was looking for,i have always loved the delay and the reverb effect but perhaps too much hehe, i'll try to clean this a bit.
I am into a little project around the dark and in that case i produced a band - the thinking zombies - and i believe that this track would realy fit for them, for a rap on - bad humans -
Thanks for stopping by Joe. I'm glad you are liking it. trying to think how I can effect the zombie voice a little to sustain interest. same with the meows. Anyway, i tried twice this morning to upload new version without success. It seems i will need to do a new upload for the revision. Thanks again for your comment. Regards - Dan
Sounds like "middleage music in a new style" to me, not realy like jazz.
Nice soundscape for me ears. Maybe the bass is a little to freaky for my opinion but thats not important.
It´s nice calm and relaxed, just right for a little daydream.
But who the heck is "the person", "the guy", "this guy"?
Sounds a bit like - it´s not allowed ta say his name -
Is he Lord Voldemort?????
If he´s so important for this track, why you dont tell us who he is?
Hello Joe. Appreciate your comment. As other loopers have named other genres the track could be, I decided to go with Fusion. As for my collab partner, I didn't post his name or anything because I wasn't sure if he wanted to be publicly named. But I fixed that, for he confirmed he indeed didn't mind. I appreciate you bringing that to my attention. Most people wouldn't care to question about this other "guy" for he could have been some big time record producer. Anyhow, I appreciate your words! And I'm sure Rosen would too.
All fits good. The music works great to the story that Shamoozey tells/sings.
I love the trompets and all this much sounds you used. And the choir is so fine.
The grove is so cool and the story makes all so extreme sad - exelent.
Hi Musicante.
I am not realy into jazz but this track is for me a nice one.
It is very funky and grooves cool. I listen to it twice and that means a lot for me for a jazz track :)
Thank you Joe for enjoying! I try to give people a story instead of just a regular song that they would hear on the radio or whatever. It allows them to experience something that would trip them out or inspire or expand their own perceptions and thoughts. Glad you like the glitch style and this song! Much Respect for enjoying.
I like the sound of this track. Very powerfull and much things/sounds happend ..... mostly all are said by the others ... cool work. I enjoyed the listen.
This reminds me on someting but i dont get it right now.
Nice voice on nice sounds. Good work i would say. Very powerfull.
You ask for something that you could do maybe better.
Ok, the music is cool, much sounds. But maybe sometimes too much ..... the voice could get just a little reverb ..... the end needs a rework or a fadeout with music and voice.
-dont mind to much, cause it is only my opinion and i am not realy good in mastering at all-
Thank you Joe for the kind comment! I had fun listening to your progression in the mixing and mastering of this song as well. I've been trying to focus on doing the best that I can based on the time I allow myself, and then leaving things just as is, hence no updates to the mix after uploading. I guess in this case that was good enough. Also been working on getting good wide mixes that are mono compatible, and listening to music in the mornings on mono headphones. I modified the headphones I use in the studio with a switch that can easily change from stereo to mono as well. I try to keep in mind that a lot of people still listen in mono on phones and portable speakers etc, so it's good to keep in mind. You also did some great work, and I appreciate you giving good feedback! Thanks again!
My own version sounds a bit diffrent but thats just because i am a stupid beginner in mastering at all. I can hear here that you know what you do and i just done and listen and think then about good or not :) ......
I love the groove you give to the track. Good work!
Thanks joe!! cool pic you have.. I listened to some of your stuff, I like your raps.. sounds cool.. :) dont kno what your sayin but I can feel your energy..
I listen to your masteredup version of this song after i did my own versions.
This is a diffrent version of the SBM track and it was a intresting idea with this pichedup piano. But it makes the track in my ears/eys a bit too shiny.But maybe it isnt realy the piano.......
What i realy love is the drum part. The bassdrum comes very nice.
Thanks for your comment. I work a lot with house music and reverse reverb is a very common way of introducing new sounds into the mix - it is pretty cool trick though huh? :D
The drum intro that you hear on the 3rd part was a mistake of mine. I got lazy in some parts and applied a high pass filter to the mixer track and filtered out things I shouldn't have - I didn't realise until I listened to other people's mixes lol.
I think I will go back and start again on the whole thing and this time be more adventurous :)
I like it a lot. You did a good work with the vocals.
but :)
Music is realy to low. And i would let a female sing the refrain with changed words - thas why i leave, now i´m gone
Hey, i dont know why but this extreme cool track reminds me on the movie "Fritz the cat". Maybe cause it´s so freaky funky and or all of this horny girls and horns .....
on surreal ambiences ft DanceDemagogue by promenade2239
stay tuned
joe
Glad you enjoyed the track!
Best to you, Alex
on Wide open ft Angela Fleming by kykex
The song sounds good (to me) but it has a terrible accustic. Not the voice, just the complete rest of the track sounds like playing two times with much to much reverb and echos.
But i realy like the song that is behind all this or maybe more under all.
Maybe you should do a more clear master :)
But hey! dont mind at all, cause who am i to told you any about a clean mix? :) - right! nobody!
Itz a cool groovy reggea and the voice of Angela Fleming fits very well.
stay tuned
joe
This was the kind of suggestion i was looking for,i have always loved the delay and the reverb effect but perhaps too much hehe, i'll try to clean this a bit.
Thank you!
on HALLOWEEN HIP HOP INSTRUMENTAL BEAT by DeLaBeatz
Cool one!
I am into a little project around the dark and in that case i produced a band - the thinking zombies - and i believe that this track would realy fit for them, for a rap on - bad humans -
Would it be ok if i used your track?
stay tuned
joe
on cat and zombie ft SPIVKURL PHATKATZ by DanGoldstein
Cool one! I will listen to the next version for sure.
But i cant play guitar :)
i realy enjoyed the listen.
stay tuned
joe
on Mojave Sunrise by Orlando51
It has something from a movie. Or maybe it´s for a movie. Sounds like watching a great landcape. Very impressive pictures needed for this track.
Cool work, nice sounds you created.
stay tuned
joe
Yes, cinematic and ambient stuff is what I do the most in these days...thanks alot for a positive feedback.:)
With appreciation_____Orlando
on The Golden Princess by GoldenOokami
Sounds like "middleage music in a new style" to me, not realy like jazz.
Nice soundscape for me ears. Maybe the bass is a little to freaky for my opinion but thats not important.
It´s nice calm and relaxed, just right for a little daydream.
But who the heck is "the person", "the guy", "this guy"?
Sounds a bit like - it´s not allowed ta say his name -
Is he Lord Voldemort?????
If he´s so important for this track, why you dont tell us who he is?
stay tuned
joe
~Ookami
on Trance Hard House And Techno by FreeRadical
You always make me moving. Thats cool!
Waiting for the next 10 minutes :)
I enjoyed the listen - joe
Thanks for dropping by and leaving comments.
on Hip Hop Pop Dance Instrumental by DeLaBeatz
I enjoyed the listen. You done a good work - respect
Stay tuned
joe
on Waltzing Matilda - Deep House mix by KBone147
All fits good. The music works great to the story that Shamoozey tells/sings.
I love the trompets and all this much sounds you used. And the choir is so fine.
The grove is so cool and the story makes all so extreme sad - exelent.
A fav for that!
stay tuned
joe
on Zombie Apocalypse hits Chicago by RenzWilde
All is nice dark and dangerous and the apocalypse is on it way.
I done also one. but it is only a quick made one. I think you invest a little more work.
If you wanna check it out, go there:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/160468
stay tuned
joe
on Fleur de mai by Musicante
I am not realy into jazz but this track is for me a nice one.
It is very funky and grooves cool. I listen to it twice and that means a lot for me for a jazz track :)
stay tuned
joe
M.
on The Signal by Snow1983
This is music in a style that realy is not standart. And its for sure music that dont sucks.
wow. This little piece of glitch (i realy dont know what glitch is but that is a diffrent stroy) let me believe that glitch is something real cool :)
Realy enjoy this cool mixing of sounds in this hypno style.
Respect!
stay tuned
joe
on ShortBusMusic - Proximal Vicinity - DaveDaG mix by DaveDaG
In a way very close to the original and in a way very diffrent to it - cool
For my ears it sounds all wonderfull bright, clear and exelent.
Verry smoth thing. I enjoyed the listen.
stay tuned
joe
on AZZYKO - GALAXY by AZZYKO
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joe
on The Sting by DJSYNTHO
This reminds me on someting but i dont get it right now.
Nice voice on nice sounds. Good work i would say. Very powerfull.
You ask for something that you could do maybe better.
Ok, the music is cool, much sounds. But maybe sometimes too much ..... the voice could get just a little reverb ..... the end needs a rework or a fadeout with music and voice.
-dont mind to much, cause it is only my opinion and i am not realy good in mastering at all-
But overall i like your work
stay tuned
joe
on Proximal Vicinity Spivkurl Mix 13B Master B by Spivkurl
This is the best master i heard so far.
(Ok, maybe just same good them my own :))
Very good work with the sounds of the samples and its all so nice wide in a way and this guitars and ......
like i sayed - best master for my opinion.
wait for my next last version. the final final master mix.
stay tuned
joe
on REDONE Here I Go Again Ft KronStudios by SeriouslyJoking
I love this kind of spacey music real much.
And i think its a kind of break beat.
You sayed that you still working on it, so would say
- cool workversion
dont take to much reverb away :)
stay tuned
joe
on PROXIMAL VICINITY by strscottT
My own version sounds a bit diffrent but thats just because i am a stupid beginner in mastering at all. I can hear here that you know what you do and i just done and listen and think then about good or not :) ......
I love the groove you give to the track. Good work!
stay tuned
joe
on Proximal Vicinity- Short Bus mixing comp by Ensam
This is a diffrent version of the SBM track and it was a intresting idea with this pichedup piano. But it makes the track in my ears/eys a bit too shiny.But maybe it isnt realy the piano.......
What i realy love is the drum part. The bassdrum comes very nice.
Cool work
stay tuned
joe
on Proximal Vicinity - ShortBusMusic Mix Comp by WongKiShoo
You done the best incomming of the synt at the beginning!
That is realy cool and i am not sure what i will do now :)
You asked for any probs in the mix - for my opinion, this intro drums to the 3.rd part are much to low.
This master is real close to the SBM version but sounds much better and the timing is very cool.
Real good work George.
stay tuned
joe
Thanks for your comment. I work a lot with house music and reverse reverb is a very common way of introducing new sounds into the mix - it is pretty cool trick though huh? :D
The drum intro that you hear on the 3rd part was a mistake of mine. I got lazy in some parts and applied a high pass filter to the mixer track and filtered out things I shouldn't have - I didn't realise until I listened to other people's mixes lol.
I think I will go back and start again on the whole thing and this time be more adventurous :)
Thanks for listening!
George
on Chiptune Folk Waltz by Geophase
I think you should mix the middle part a bit down, cause it sounds like a distortion efect right now.
This is for sure cool for a kind of a run and jump game.
Its so jumpy this walz
stay tuned
joe
on Tet Tetris Ris by glados666
And its in a way i love it,
200 levels in 2 minutes :) with all the high and lows.
Very funy, ceative and dynamic.
respect
stay tuned
joe
on darkness 719 by bmxjimmy
I listen to it and raped a little free style
(more in my mind then real) and it worked great. :)
If a day had a little more hour´s and a week a few more days, then i would say now - i will do some vocals.
but .......
I realy enjoyed this 2 minutes
good work
stay tuned
joe
on Why did you leave by ArtfulOne
I like it a lot. You did a good work with the vocals.
but :)
Music is realy to low. And i would let a female sing the refrain with changed words - thas why i leave, now i´m gone
Real good work
stay tuned
joe
on Take Your Time by Nightingale
Cool thing
Great work you all did - respect
stay tuned
joe