MisterBloodworth

The intro sounds so professional. So gentle, yet so hardcore in quality. The vocal is incredible, and the way it ends is a very nice touch. I'm looking forward to the full thing if you ever plan to release it, for sure!

~Ookami

There's alot going in this track. I'm curious, what is the BPM? This is something that is high paced and that fits well with a fight scene as someone has already mentioned before. I could possibly see this in a Matrix Movie. This is different, though. I like it!

~Ookami

This is amazing! The instruments chosen, the kicks, percussion, and everything else tie in together so well. The bass is very nice. The guitar licks in the various spots are very gentle which complements the track oh-so-well.

My favorite spot is probably 2:22. Around here, you had just decrescendo the volume gradually, then increased it, having that smooth come-back sound. The keys (I believe is what I'm hearing) is powerful and great. The guitar plucks also come in quietly but comes out gradually.

Such a great track! I wish you good luck on finding a vocalist!

~Ookami

The beginning remind me a bit of 8-bit sounds, because of the beginning bass. Overtime, it gradually began gaining my attention as the intro grew and became layered. Then when the guitar loop came, I started liking where it was going. The track is simple. Nice intro, pretty basic body, and a cool outro. I like how it ends similar to how it started. The fade out also adds alot. Nice!

~Ookami

I like the feeling of this track. The keys with the echo flows smoothly, and the beat is tight. The kick isn't too strong, or too little. It also have a trap feel. The synths are nice as well. Adding this to one of my favs for sure!

~Ookami

I love the keys in the beginning, then the instant smack of the percussion along with the strings around 0:16. The strings gradual increase of note pitch was also beautifully done. The cello (I assume that's the low stringed instrument) was powerful and constant. Made a great low end for the whole track. The higher strings went along with the cello amazingly.

The only thing that I was thinking about was the kicks. I feel they could be a bit more harder and/or bassier, but that is just personal taste. The kick's presence is a bit quiet but it's there.

Also, the ending is very abrupt. It's just an instant silent. I recommend having the strings and keys playing continually, and have a slow, gradual fade out, allowing the track to keep it's intense feel.

Great track, nevertheless!

~Ookami

I like how the house gradually changes from "older" form to the "newer" form of house. You did it in a way that was simple and nice.

The first part sounds like a simple, classic style house track, with its old school kicks and crashes.

Part two has nice vocals, which somewhat reminds me of pop and house together, closer to the modern era in music. Great flow in that one.

Part three has a more complex feel to it. It didn't catch my attention as the first two did, but it's still impressive to hear how it came out. Nevertheless, cheers!

~Ookami

I see and like what you did with your description and the title. This track does sound very silly and fun. It fits your title greatly. If tracks could actually have movements, this probably would indeed cause Looperman Errors. Hahaha! Cheers!

~Ookami

This song has some potential. The vocals are very good. The only thing that really got my attention was the kick. It maybe me, but it sounds as if it's a bit too strong. Nevertheless, great vocals, and nice instrumental layout.

~Ookami

Amazing work! The intro was capturing to me, for it was different. When everything comes together, a masterpiece happens. The bassline is very VERY gentle, which is a mystery to how that worked the way it did. This is a very soft and gentle track, which is incredible to me. Amazing work with the collab!

~Ookami

This is very chill and simple, man. I like it. It's not so complex, and simplicity is perfectly great. The beat flows and the low bass kick is like gentle thumps. It's not too much, or too little. Great work!

~Ookami

This is a nice track so far. As you said, it's not ready, but I think that if you continue how you started, and finished it, it'd be an absolute killer. I enjoyed it. I am looking forward to a more completed version. You can do it!

~Ookami

This is awesome, man! I like the intro as well as the rest of the track. It reminds me of a dark level in a video game. Great work! What type of program did you use?

~Ookami

I like the intro. It's a smooth introduction and the rap caught me off guard, but it flows so greatly. I like the bassline. It's very consistent throughout the track. Nice track, man.

~Ookami

I like this alot. DnB is always face pace, and this is a great example of it. I like how you have the deep low bass in the background which wobs perfectly along with the breakbeat. Sweet!

~Ookami

This is some fresh stuff right here. I like this alot. Your rhyming flow was absolutely crazy. The instrumentals are great as well. Keep this up man.

~Ookami

I like how you used that sample, which by the way went great with your vocals. You are very lyrical. All which I heard were very powerful. Great job!

~Ookami

I am a fan of dubstep, and this is a funky form of it. Im digging this. It's another non-traditional track, which is beautiful to my ears. Adding the piano in the middle of the track was a splendid idea. It's not common to hear keys in a dubstep track. You have such a high level of creativity. Fantastic!

~Ookami

This is incredible! The vocals are timed perfectly and the instrumentals are just immaculate. I am very happy I checked this track out. Great insrumentals of choice, Brotbackautomat. And amazing vocals, Patricia Edwards.

~Ookami

I like this. It's a traditional dance track with an interesting intro. Great track. Where did you get the vocals man? Is that you? :O

~Ookami

I'm felling this. I must say, this would be an amazing intro to a song. It's very abnormal, however that would catch lots of people off guard. It sounds great nevertheless. Are you planning to do more with this? If so, I'm looking forward to it, most def!

~Ookami

This is some high class funky stuff right here! Pee-yoo! Incredible work! I like how, I believe what it is, the tuba in certain parts of the track. That caught my attention, and made me chuckle, due to being in the marching band, so hearing a brass instrument like that on a track, REALLY made it appealing to me highly. Beautiful work, my friend!

~Ookami

This is a pretty energetic and fun track to listen to. Has a simple drum beat throughout. The guitars are powerful, and the bassline is constant. I can see how you thought of this from children's actions. I like the idea and creativity.

~Ookami

This is tight. The intro seems very quiet and mysterious. You know, something mischievous. The track is pretty simple, yet very flowing. Might I recommend some more to add to the track. Perhaps more instruments, or the main synths done at a lower octave in some parts, then back to the original at others? Nevertheless, I liked this track. Good work!

~Ookami