GO DEMO VERSION - Timmons2

11th Feb 2014 01:05 - 12 years ago
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Description : The artist is Nenah. Keep in mind, this is only a rough draft.

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give Timmons2 some feedback.

clindsay
clindsay 12th Feb 2014 00:04 - 12 years ago
Like it - it catches you immediately.

It's a little too wall of sound to my ear - I think the vocals should rise above the groove.

Might want to consider using the outro from 3:19 on as a bridge but also using it as an outro in shortened form. Lots of good parts to this.

Definitely has great potential - thanks for sharing.
-clindsay
Timmons2
Timmons2 replied 13th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago
Thank you for reviewing the record and thanks for the input. I did not intend for the outro to be that long. I didn't have the time to shorten it. I do understand that there are still mix issues, I'll get to them in due time.
benjizo
benjizo 11th Feb 2014 20:23 - 12 years ago
Nenah is a good vocalist.So much potential on this track.You can always change one or two things to make it perfect and i know you will do it since its just a rough mix.Good one.
Timmons2
Timmons2 replied 13th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks again for your input on the song. Soon enough I'll get around to fixing everything. Appreciate the comment.
MisterBloodworth
MisterBloodworth 11th Feb 2014 12:38 - 12 years ago
This song has some potential. The vocals are very good. The only thing that really got my attention was the kick. It maybe me, but it sounds as if it's a bit too strong. Nevertheless, great vocals, and nice instrumental layout.

~Ookami
Timmons2
Timmons2 replied 13th Feb 2014 - 12 years ago
Thank you for the comment. As far as the kick goes, I do like to make it stand out because there's nothing I hate more than that a great melody is presented and then ruined by weak drums. But thank you for your input.

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