well firstly, im not hearing much continuity here..has the sound of a few loops just stuck together without much regard to matching them...it's ok i guess but still got a long way to go before it actually sounds like a track. I think it would be safe to say you absolutely murdered a perfectly good vocal loop. sorry if it sounds harsh but just saying it as it is.
As a first try, it's pretty good. I'd just recommend to look up more about dubstep. Probably a good way to start is by reading all this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dubstep
Also listening to dubstep other people make should help a lot.
Keep it up!
P.S. Keep in mind, that you should listen to older dubstep too...
good sounds just try fixing up the drums and add some kick to it.check out my new track called shawty i care.i also got a music video for it on youtube
...um, it sounds a little confusing. you didn't really stick to anything long enough to get a feel for what you were trying to accomplish. i think i'm trying to say you have quite a bit going on, so its hard to distinguish a pattern here.
i'd def be interested in hearing your ideas on the pellas for this. good effort though.
I think you can have a more consistent track if you order the ideas around try to work with a intro-verse-chorus module and go from there... And most important don't stop making music!
I just saw you are only 13? Good for you. Keep going and experimenting, the more sounds you make the more sense will come of it.
I would try having some order to laying your tracks try the rhythm track first then add sounds to that beat. you have some interesting melodies going on but it just needs to be less confusing.
As an experiment why not choose a song you like and listen to the way its put together and then try to copy the styles for verse, chorus etc.
Any way good luck with it James.
J
Kind of hard to keep time on this 1. I hear alot of elements but I can not hear any direction. Try it again but build around the guitar and hit parts. It sounds like you have not quantized anything. Even the smallest percent of quantize, 40-70% will tighten your parts and not have them sound computerish. Otherwise, solid effort and congrats on the upload. Tight work. Only 1 way but up!
Messy, syncopated and childish. Strange, annoying and weird. I have to say that you will have to feel the music, sorry, dont be sad but personally I prefer to hear the truth. My truth isnt universal but is evident in this case. Try to make first a melody, then make a track, if you know what I mean. Again, sorry.
I enjoyed the variety. Good job having multiple parts. I would like to hear you expand the different sections a bit more, avoiding the loop feel. Loud. Keep up the good work. Only 1 way but up!
Sup James. I'm really feeling your synth work here. The melodies are pretty good. I agree with Spivkurl on the drum bit. To me it sounds off, but I need to hear how your vocals will go, maybe it might turn the drums in a different feel. But so far pretty good. I can hear some rap on this piece. Keep at it man, you'll get in sounding best in no time. Thanks for sharing. Have a good one. Peace!
The synths on this are really awesome! I think the drums could be a little more on beat, but I could see them being good as a backing for some rapping. This is a very original style, I like it!
Hey James, i'd agree this is probly your best track yet, you've turned down some of the chaos and seem to be pulling things together a little better. There could but a little more variation to spice up the track, but it's a step in the right direction. Keep workin bro :)
Hi James. I like your ideas behind this track and I look forward to hearing more of your future works.
I think there have been some very encouraging words and sound advice offered to you regarding the arrangement and mix of your tracks, which if you take on board, will help you massively as you continue with your art (I know it certainly helps me and I find the advice invaluable).
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good track.
Looking forward to some more dubstep from you.
Regards
Dj malook.
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Also listening to dubstep other people make should help a lot.
Keep it up!
P.S. Keep in mind, that you should listen to older dubstep too...
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i'd def be interested in hearing your ideas on the pellas for this. good effort though.
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cheers
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I would try having some order to laying your tracks try the rhythm track first then add sounds to that beat. you have some interesting melodies going on but it just needs to be less confusing.
As an experiment why not choose a song you like and listen to the way its put together and then try to copy the styles for verse, chorus etc.
Any way good luck with it James.
J
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keep it up
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I think there have been some very encouraging words and sound advice offered to you regarding the arrangement and mix of your tracks, which if you take on board, will help you massively as you continue with your art (I know it certainly helps me and I find the advice invaluable).
Good work and keep it going :-)
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And I'd say yes Hip Hop is the right genre.
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