JamesDavies

I don't know if this is something you guys favor in Scotland. But I'm not turned on by it, sorry.

A lot of your songs are very fast paced and chaotic. That's not a bad thing, fast and chaotic can be sweet, but i'd be interested to hear you slow a track down and keep the instrumental a little more basic (particularly the percussive aspects). Hearing a track from you using a looperman drum loop at about 90 bpm would be cool. just my thoughts.. in the end, keep havin fun bud :)

Whats up man. Def stick to rap and don't worry about singing. I think with alittle practice your going to be one of the best rappers on the loop. Your young so you got time. I am really impressed with what you put together for only being 13. Keep it up man!

As for most of your instrumentals. The beat does not flow, so it sounds choppy and unorganized.

Not too shabby :-) I'll check out more of your work soon.

Keep them coming

John

You remind me of a younger version off me. Always hustling I'm looking forward on how you improve.

Keep Hustling

Alcraine

P.S You always have that static fix that maybe compressors. OR cut frequencies off

Interesting concept. I didn't hear a bass line. Don't worry i had the same problem. Tune your drums down. Add some transitions. Nice try do. I alway respect the hustle

Keep Hustling

Alcraine

i thought i have heard bad instrumentals before...but this...THIS is bad.

i can't undertand a word ur saying and the piano and drums are a out of each other but keep em coming and keep improving

theFISHface

Drums don't fit very well and the keyboard is a little messy but i can still here are very messy version of dangerous

a good start though plenty of room for improvment.

keep practising
theFISHface

Redo the song over and then put it up

I recommend you get your drum tracks down first of all. Get very familiar with quantizing; it seems you may need to make quantization a very good friend. Try tapping out the tempo of one of your favorite commercial tracks. No one always keeps a perfect tempo or rhythm and that's fine. What you gotta do is find a groove for your music.

Solid beat from DollarMenunaire. Although the singing is shakey, you have an interesting style of rapping, which i enjoyed. Keep working at it man. You're young, i wish i got started when i was 13! I look forward to hearing your progress, just keep makin the music you love and it'll fall into place over time. All the best man,
Brent

did you use loops for this? sounds like loops without pattern structure..

Woah man, alotta problems on this. first off it's all off beat. the drumline sounds like it's glitched or something. and sounds like you added a bit much compression on the track, alot of frequencies are being cut out. and theres no yearn to even want to rap on this. it's too off beat. sorry man, not feeling it. nice attempt for what it's worth, maybe make it another genre, because it has a sort of glitch template to it. peace

Neobane

That quite "pow" noise coming from the mic is probably from either a bad mic, or your to close to the mic for how loud you're singing. If you move your head back a couple inches, it might help.

Please send mi your email so i can send you back something that i did with your acapella (Pourquoi On Rappe) take care my friend.

nah bad man.. really bad..

everything is off beat it seems... i dont get the change up either man... try to just make drum beats first... listen to one of your favorite hip hop tracks, figure out the BPM and try to recreate the drums.. JUST the drums.. then build from there! keep workin it will come

Bob Moog is spinning in his grave. Wait, he's not dead yet. Still a good knob spinning good time. Kool track.

hey J.

u need 2 learn about using kicks nd snares 2 define ur beat. I dont think this can quite fall undr hiphop z of yet. if u want i can email u some piano roll patterns of basic hiphop drum pattern + standard bassline patterns to help define ur beats more. Dont give up man, u got potential

Peace

please tell me this is a joke

This is amazing from someone so young!
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this is great ambient sound design - raw crunchy spicy electric food for thought - respect