Description : ok, this is the first time i rap on trap so i wasn't so sure about this one. i understand the quality still isn't top but anyway, please give any constructive criticism. hopefully this will be on a first mixtape i'm working on: Electric Fish ^^
comments are warmly welcome :)
got lyrics to it...
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No the beat is perfect,i like the sample.This your first time and gotta say you did it justice.Well u can always improve from here,especially in delivery.But i like your writing skills.good job.
No the beat is perfect,i like the sample.This your first time and gotta say you did it justice.Well u can always improve from here,especially in delivery.But i like your writing skills.good job.
hey JamesDavies I've composed since I don't know if this young colleague of ours in this avatar of yours has been born or not,buT I'm not sure if I can compose this music or noT!
everything is very welldone,lyrix and main idea are lovely .
is that a male voice which has changed to sound as a girl?
it's cool ! and totally no criticism .just I think singer can wait sometimes and doesn't sing all the monets and let the music talks too.best wishes.___Behnam
No, probably not :D I've been composing for like 4-5 years, and I didn't start with rap. just one thing: i didn't make the instrumental (it was made by Freiherr Von Braun), all I've added was the rap with lyrics I've wrote. The instrumental samples "The Story Of Our Lives" by Alex Dimou which is more electronic type music. Just to say that I downloaded the instrumental with the singer's voice already on so I couldn't really take it off, though I agree with you sometimes it could be better without that voice on ! Anyway, thanx for passing by, listening and spending time to comment :)
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everything is very welldone,lyrix and main idea are lovely .
is that a male voice which has changed to sound as a girl?
it's cool ! and totally no criticism .just I think singer can wait sometimes and doesn't sing all the monets and let the music talks too.best wishes.___Behnam