hi, your song seems to sound quite different than the 'original' ShortBMusic-version I've listened the other day... I think its because the bassline from 2:01 is simply too loud in here. Also the low 'cinematic' effect (1:13) generates some a bit strange frequences (for me). But still a very nice attempt to put all this samples together into a song - my observations are still very subiective...hope they are useful somehow.
Maybe I'll change my mind and try to 'mix' this competition song.
Thanks for your version and greetings,
Alex
Hey buddy, thank you for your comment! I very much intended the bass to sound the way it does, and to be at that level. The mixes I had heard so far were lacking in treatment to the bass, and I felt that it was an important part. Also a very high quality stem too, so it lent itself to shaping. I probably took the whole mixing stage a bit too far, but while saying that I know that some others have done way heavier effects than this. I really appreciate the feedback!
Mate thought I had reviewed this one, sorry I missed it, catchy piece matey, liking your vocals Pat, good beat and synths, has a your trade mark sound, which I always enjoy...uniquely Spiv...Very good listen my friend...Thank you for sharing Pat...Peace n Respect friend...Mosaic...
Hello friend! Good to hear from you! Happy that you enjoyed this track. I was very sad and angry when I did these vocals, and it shows through a bit, but I still like how it turned out. Thanks for stopping in!
Interesting to hear! Did you get the stems when they were available? Sounds like someone is redistributing them now, but I have no idea who. Would like to hear what you do with it! Thanks for the comment!
Totally tripped out track Spiv !
Yeah that Mighty Bass is a Sub Punisher for sure.
I dig man, its different, wacky, wild, weird, crazy and well... genius.
Love it!
Hey man, been a while it seems! Hope you are well! Happy that you enjoyed listening to this one. From what I remember it was a great outlet to create... hope I can live up to this in the future. It's so enjoyable to make minimal techno, and I have to force myself to do something different sometimes. Thanks so much for the good comment!
I see i've already reviewed this but i thought i'd check it out again. Your bass work is superb. I don't know how you get it to sound that punchy without drowning the other sounds out. I like the twisted noises going on around the bass, it sounds kind of like a violin on acid or something.
Good work as always spiv.
FR
Hey thanks friend for the comment! I guess I don't recall what exactly made the bass so isolated, but I do know that it was sampled from a one-shot... I'll say just that. Was a fun song to create for sure, so I'm happy that you enjoy listening! Take care!
I think this is the 2nd or 3rd time I've listened to this track and each time I've liked it more as well as hearing different things.
I feel as though the simple demeanor this track has, try's to hide the very clever, complicated and really well executed elements that you have not only put together but mixed so well also.
I really like this track !!!!(in case you wondered)
Hey buddy, this comment means a lot to me! It's always a good feeling when someone can feel where you were coming from when listening! It's an important track for me, and it makes me happy it's been well received. In fact it's the most played techno track on Looperman now! Schweet. I'll be swinging by your page in a moment! Thanks much!
hi Spivkurl,
really nice music... apart of all the ideology content about the suffering which I do not buy at all (everyone suffers). I like the bassline and also how you work with your voice - it is great! There is a slight suggestion from you in the description that it may be not the best of your album tracks. For me it is not the best track from your latest collection for sure! But still it is very nice put together. I like the trance vibes of a looped voice in here with the bassline:). I like simplicity.
Greetings,
A.
Hello, and thank you for your comment! I'm happy that you enjoyed the musical elements in the track! It is not a horribly complex or involved piece, but I succeeded in translating the moment to my ears. Yes you are right, everyone suffers, it is part of the human experience... however, our responsibility to humans is as caretakers of this earth and this reality - to impose suffering on, or to be an enabler of suffering to the members of this existence is to me the peak of weakness and failure. I appreciate your comments!
Hey my friend hows it going? Haven't been on the loop in a while so thought I would check in! The synths in this sound wicked! Vocals work well with this too! Has quite a sense of urgency to it that i like a lot. As usual, well done mate I enjoyed it! :)
Hey buddy, good to see you! Very happy you enjoyed listening to this! Was a fun project at the time, and fixing the problems with the demo version made it worth listening to. Definitely urgent, glad you could hear that! Hope you are well!
Hello, and thank you for your kind comment! This is definitely one of my more successful efforts in regards to emotional effect, atleast to my brain. It's intended as minimal techno, and between the tempo, the way the bass was created, and the sounds used I would say it's pretty much that. I think most people have their own idea of what techno sounds like, and thus from a creative point of view it's pretty open. I appreciate you stopping by, sorry for the late reply!
Sorry I missed this one and the late comment. I must say the bass really has a big part in this track and being a bass player I can certainly dig that. It seems a little more subdued than some of your more recent releases but it's still a cool, interesting track with lots to keep me listening.
It's good you can keep your music fresh and not stagnant, you always seem to change things up but stay within your own realm.
Hey friend, no need to apologize regarding timing of a review. Not like I'm in a hurry to replace the song or anything. After releasing the album I'm mostly in sound design and instrument building mode now, so don't have much for new songs yet. Subdued, yes I would agree... it was a very sad and angry time, and I allowed myself to just do a pure expression sort of work. I think it was helpful for me. I've had my stagnant moments as well, but it's worth fighting against it on a daily basis. Thank you very much for the listen and comment!
Abstract and disturbing... I am feeling empathy for natures finest creatures. Weird, it's all weird, but I think that is your goal and it hits the back of the net. (That's a touchdown in your sporting parlance across the pond.)
Hey friend, thank you so much for your enhanced words! I'm happy that you enjoyed listening to this one. It took me quite a while to listen to the final master without an emotional outburst, so I guess that is probably a good sign. I don't really do much that is not weird, but I'm sure you've learned that by now. To be compared with Dali is a new one, and I'm honored. I appreciate you stopping in to listen and comment!
Minimalistic goodness. As the master demonstrates likes so. Very nice deep bass, complete basshead myself. Crazy effects and synths used in this, keep working. peace
Hey, thank you GC! I can't say for sure, but I've been thinking that this is one of the most authentic and successful tracks I've done. It was almost pure instinct, which is hard to capture sometimes. Bass was so simple that it surprises me every time. I still think of you as NeoBane, so it's an adjustment having the Chopin moniker show up. Hope you are well!
"Honestly suspected that I chased you away or something"
No, you certainly didn't. If I haven't commented on a track of yours for a while, it's probably because I haven't liked a track of yours for a while. I generally only comment on stuff I either like or that I think has potential and for which I also feel I can help suggest improvements. So, no comments for stuff that annoys me or stuff I think is OK but not worth me spending my time analysing in detail.
We have quite different tastes though they certainly cross over at various points. You have some weirder stuff that really isn't my thing but I don't bother telling you that each time I hear one of those sorts of tracks.
The piercing notes might sound better on a good stereo setup. I don't know and was listening to this on cheap earbud headphones. But maybe it just is too piercing and the better sound quality won't remove that.
Not sure what a late night is - depends what hours you keep. But definitely after you've been up more than about 18 hours.
Hope you get some good feedback on your latest album. I have so many to release! Must get round to that.
SN, I appreciate your honest reactions to things deeply, so thank you for your further response. In my time on Looperman, I have gravitated towards giving my opinion on tracks or styles that I'm not really into. This has many benefits, including but not limited too; me hearing types of music that I wouldn't normally (hence having more varied influences as compared to previously), effecting artists which I wouldn't otherwise with my artistic preferences, and contributing more fully in the community which embraces all sorts of ideals. You are right, we do have very different tastes, but we are both artists in the strictest sense of the word. If you don't feel like giving criticism on a track you don't enjoy, that's no problem by me. I understand your interpretation of the high frequency parts of this track, and don't mind the opinion. I guess that I appreciate that even I hear something new every time I hear the song, even though I made it. Haven't achieved that much before. It is a track which is more intended to be heard on a setup with good low end or a sub, You seem to gravitate more to mid range frequencies, while I am repelled by them. I am rarely up for 18 hours any more. I keep a moderate healthy schedule, up around sun rise and in bed when I'm getting tired. I've had my sleep deprived life for long enough, and now I like to live the way the plants do. Get my light therapy by default upstairs when smoking my morning love cigarette. I honestly have only gotten a small amount of response to the new album, and I think that is partly due to the late summer (northern hemisphere) release of it. Atleast around here, people have been acting like it's the end of the world and it's the only time they'll have to do anything useful ever again... hence not inside listening to free music. Also, it seems to be my most depressing album ever, so I don't blame anyone. Thank you again for the response! I always value your opinions and contribution!
Hey friend, thank you for the supportive comment! I consider it a win if you're listening to techno and you dance til you forget what you're listening to! So that makes me happy! I appreciate you stopping by!
Hey Spiv nice work here. I haven't heard the original version but this is great! Nice fusion of genres to give this a really unique sound. Congrats! Dan
Thank you Dan! I am thankful for your kind words! Glad you could hear and enjoy the fusion in this song. Hope you are well. I will be by your page in a moment!
So this is what you call techno, now I understand using the spectrum as
bouncing board with Echo on synths and voices, keeping that metal or
industrial edge on those instruments that don't play a dominate roll...
Good Mix...By the way...For me good Music is just that, good Music...
Thank you very much for taking a listen and leaving a comment! Obviously some people are questioning whether this is really techno, but I have no other idea of what it would be. It's got the right sort of tempo, it's not half-time, prominent kick and bass... minimal techno. The use of delays and things is integral to this track, it repetitive but always changing in subtleties. Thanks for your support! I agree good music is good music, there is something to be enjoyed in all genres.
I can never resist playing your tracks when they appear on LM. Always interesting and a bit "off the wall" (in a good way). Very clever stuff indeed. Great track and excellent production.
Hi Spivkurl,
it is just to say again that I enjoyed your last album but cannot find your profile via forum threads searching page :(
anyway again great work and I would say that it could be
a doorway to something new for me. I will let you know.
All the best to you:)
A.
Hello my friend, and thank you for your kind words! Strange that my profile was not in the search... If this represents a doorway for you, then I am eager for what is to come from you artistically! Hope you are well, and thank you again!
on Proximal Vicinity Spivkurl Mix 13B Master B by Spivkurl
Maybe I'll change my mind and try to 'mix' this competition song.
Thanks for your version and greetings,
Alex
on Liberate Vocal Mix by Spivkurl
Mate thought I had reviewed this one, sorry I missed it, catchy piece matey, liking your vocals Pat, good beat and synths, has a your trade mark sound, which I always enjoy...uniquely Spiv...Very good listen my friend...Thank you for sharing Pat...Peace n Respect friend...Mosaic...
on Nightr8 by Spivkurl
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
Yeah that Mighty Bass is a Sub Punisher for sure.
I dig man, its different, wacky, wild, weird, crazy and well... genius.
Love it!
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
Good work as always spiv.
FR
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
I feel as though the simple demeanor this track has, try's to hide the very clever, complicated and really well executed elements that you have not only put together but mixed so well also.
I really like this track !!!!(in case you wondered)
Simon
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
-R.P.S
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
a very hypnotic track you have made .
it's real PSY-FI music ....
good job !
greetzz
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
really nice music... apart of all the ideology content about the suffering which I do not buy at all (everyone suffers). I like the bassline and also how you work with your voice - it is great! There is a slight suggestion from you in the description that it may be not the best of your album tracks. For me it is not the best track from your latest collection for sure! But still it is very nice put together. I like the trance vibes of a looped voice in here with the bassline:). I like simplicity.
Greetings,
A.
on Technical Time Ft FarM by Spivkurl
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
Cool track. Like it realy much. It has all of this great sounds i love and a cool beat and a nice "underground" sound.
are you sure it is techno? ok, it dosend matter at all but :)
stay tuned
joe
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
It's good you can keep your music fresh and not stagnant, you always seem to change things up but stay within your own realm.
Great as always!
Wayne
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
The Salvador Dali of Looperman.
Regards,
Paul.
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
Gramo/Neo
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
"Honestly suspected that I chased you away or something"
No, you certainly didn't. If I haven't commented on a track of yours for a while, it's probably because I haven't liked a track of yours for a while. I generally only comment on stuff I either like or that I think has potential and for which I also feel I can help suggest improvements. So, no comments for stuff that annoys me or stuff I think is OK but not worth me spending my time analysing in detail.
We have quite different tastes though they certainly cross over at various points. You have some weirder stuff that really isn't my thing but I don't bother telling you that each time I hear one of those sorts of tracks.
The piercing notes might sound better on a good stereo setup. I don't know and was listening to this on cheap earbud headphones. But maybe it just is too piercing and the better sound quality won't remove that.
Not sure what a late night is - depends what hours you keep. But definitely after you've been up more than about 18 hours.
Hope you get some good feedback on your latest album. I have so many to release! Must get round to that.
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
on Seplicate V2 by Spivkurl
on Seplicate V2 by Spivkurl
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
bouncing board with Echo on synths and voices, keeping that metal or
industrial edge on those instruments that don't play a dominate roll...
Good Mix...By the way...For me good Music is just that, good Music...
Peace...TG.
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
Richie
on Looking For You by Spivkurl
on Technical Time Ft FarM by Spivkurl
it is just to say again that I enjoyed your last album but cannot find your profile via forum threads searching page :(
anyway again great work and I would say that it could be
a doorway to something new for me. I will let you know.
All the best to you:)
A.