whoo professional loudness hear not often on looperman^^
love the in ya face snare crashes! nothing to criticize
Check out my new dubstep tune Yenidze!
sorry it took a while to reply. thanks for checkin it out, glad you liked! gotta make those snares heavy with dubstep tunes, only thing really holding your track in place. should hit you in the ears like a hammer hitting a nail haha. get you rockin back n forth real well. should have some new stuff on the go in a day or two. already posted another track since this one though, if you havent given that a listen already.
Cheers again,
TJ
ugh...this is so naught. that bass is some of the dirtiest ive heard. you mixed it up really well. your use of breaks is also great; its like being teased and tickled, then smacked in the...well...i'll let you decide where...
i absolutely adore this sick lil track and cannot wait to hear more of your work.
uber kudos on this one!
sorry it took so long to get back on this one, im glad you liked the final product. i'm really proud of how it turned out. =] hope you'll dig the ones to come just as much.
This is really promising if you really havn't been making music for that long (I read your profile). The track is so simple and un-complicated, works really well. Those dirty dirty synths are used to really good effect. The beat is exactly what it needs to be, no useless frills. The only thing I'm not so sure about is the notes as the track starts. F to G then E sounds a little happy, in a way. I would have done F to F# then E, but perhaps the way you've done it makes it stand out.
it's the truth. im still very amateur with this stuff. not to mention my musical knowledge is almost non existent. i just go by ear and tweak it til it sounds the way i hear it in my head lol. i can't say im on the same page when you tell me about the notes that i should change. I'll look em up and give them a try though.
I'm really glad that people who do understand music are enjoying what i come up with too, it's a good sign haha.
thanks alot,
TJ
wicked bassline.
soon as i heard it after the drop,
i thot of Bar 9's Murda Sound VIP.
i rlly wouldnt mind having
that kinda dubstep patch in my
collection.
great work.
Its minimal, but it rlly works for me.
Wat i think it needs are incidentals.
zaps, rises, sweeps and beeps. any wierd samples
u find that think fit.
its a rusko type technique i guess,
but it really gives ppl something to grab
on to throughout the track. I need more samples
like that haha.
if not, make my own lol.
hey man, thanks for the advice. went back and threw in a few things and made some small changes to fx n beats. hope you'll give it a listen and let me know if that's what you were talkin about.
if you use massive i can send you some of my patches? pretty much all the ones in this tune were from scratch. but the most important stuff for hitting those sounds is in the effects you put it through. check out using a bit crusher or some distortion to get those really broken up basses. theres alot of good freeware out there that does the job.
I think this is your best yet. It isn't clipping. I remember that some of your older tracks clipped. I think you could change the snare to less synthetic sounding snare. Add some pads and some fx. It sounds too minimal.
I made a dubstep song "Don't Get Lost." I also have some dnb tracks that you may like.
thanks for the pointers travis, always appreciate hearin from ya. went back and threw in a some fx where it made sense to me. tried to keep it a bit on the minimal side for the most part. hope you'll dig it.
dam good.
hella better then my frst attempts at dubstep. ive only been producing for like 3 months, so im rlly no masterclass producer.
hell, didnt rlly buy DAW software till like 3 weeks ago haha.
keep banging at it,
a hit's gunna answer eventually.
yh man the drums are sick i like the reverse snares it sounds like you used, i think youv'e nearly got this tune mabye you could add some sub bass behind the beat at points but overall i like it keep it up!
ok I'm going be brave here..mostly because nobody has been brave enough yet to tell me where I'm going wrong with my dubstep track.. over all you've got the general idea when it comes to the sounds your just lack a sub bass sound and that overlap of the lfo's that works so well for the likes of RESO.. the beat works well but you don't mix it up an awful lot there's no stop start there that you would hear with most dubstep tracks.. I would love to give you some great advice but I find it hard getting my head around producing dubstep as well.. maybe we could help one another? but I would check out this http://www.boyinaband.com/tutorials/dubstep-tutorial/ it's quite good if you got reason
Hey man, really appreciate you takin the time to point out what i need to change about this one. I cooked it up in about 3 hours start to finish so there's no real technical stuff thrown into it. You're right about the stop and starts with the drums, that is something i wasn't really taking into account and thinking back that makes a huge difference. This track was more about playing with the synths i have to get the right sound for the bass but giving it another listen this morning i think i was a long way off. The dubstep i like, and want to produce, is stuff like Excision, Datsik, Black Sun Empire (i know they are dnb but have you heard their tune Hyper Sun?? dude check it on youtube its mind blowing) I use FL studio for now, waiting on getting a new laptop in the next month or so to switch programs. but im still not sure if i want to cus FL has pretty much everything i need as far as i can tell. In any case man. I'm definitely down for working with you on getting on top of our game. i'm gonna check out some of your tunes now and hopefully return the same level of criticism.
Much appreciated bro,
TJ
Nice bass line on here. Have you thought about dropping in vocals? I think any kind would work. High female vocals cut, chopped & looped would add some higher notes and more energy. If you don't mind I'd like to try a remix. Let me know you thoughts.
Sounds great the only and only thing i would have done was took the breathing over head .But no dought it's great.im getting into electro,trance.tech, etc.actually im about to post on tonight about 9pm.check me out .comments are greatly appreciated
Thanks alot KDL, appreciate you takin the time! as it's only my third drum n bass track i hope to have some more and improved tracks coming soon.. hope you'll give 'em a listen.
Take care.
Falter
Nice try but the melody of the reece line needs improvement. You say you like, You happen to like some of the same dnb artists/groups that I do. I usually make neurofunk tracks and to get the bassline correctly you have to resample and reprocess or something like that and pitch bend your export sequence to ge even more twisted neuro goodness.
all good tips as always man.. i'm just waiting til i get a new laptop cus the one i have now cant handle half the processing i need it to so im having to settle with half-way beats n reeces for the moment. should be getting a new set up in the next week or two tho. any recommendations on type of laptop or software/hardware to look into?? would really appreciate some help in that area cus im stressin over it at the moment haha.
thanks again man. and my email is skate_n_bass@yahoo.com hit me up if you get a chance!
later.
hey bro, much appreciated on the pointers. i do need to re-master this one a bit. always get to see the flaws in a track after i load it up on here. like i said, im still learning where everything needs to be placed in the mix as far as DnB goes.
usually i listen to a lot of tech-step, dark neuro, that kinda stuff. Spor, Calyx, Noisia, Evol Intent, etc. and you? my email is skate_n_bass@yahoo.com hit me up on there if you like.
take it easy.
Hi Falter,
Getting around to give reviews back to my recent rock tune you reviewed.
This is quite a bit different sounding track. Hardcore as you call it. Has some nice features in it I like....like the synth parts.
Always goood to hear what someone has going on inside their mind. ;-).
Good job.
Later,
Randy
occasionally and especially at 1.50 u have some Key issues, other than that bruv, i liked listening to this... Just sort out the off Key issues, It shudnt be hard
thanks for checkin out some tunes. this was one of my first tunes i made from loops on looperman and arranged them in a sequencer. i know what you mean, its pretty sloppy. but i didnt really know what i was doing at the time bruv haha.
cheers anyway, give some of my newer stuff a glance if u got time.
peace man.
Hi Falter, I like the essence of this track a lot, strong groove and great synth lead sound.I would like to hear this with a cleaner drum track and a pumping low kick/bass.Thats just my opinion.I place a fair amount of focus on sound quality & production...too much sometimes !!! lol.Anyway, well done.peace & goodwill,Geo.
on Flow by Falter
on Growl (Harder) by Falter
got my head groving.
and ur right lol. "once you lose that spark n flow u had when u first mix it its hard to pick up again"
amen to that brother.
on Defective by Falter
on Flow by Falter
love the in ya face snare crashes! nothing to criticize
Check out my new dubstep tune Yenidze!
Cheers again,
TJ
on Flow by Falter
i absolutely adore this sick lil track and cannot wait to hear more of your work.
uber kudos on this one!
on Flow by Falter
I'm really glad that people who do understand music are enjoying what i come up with too, it's a good sign haha.
thanks alot,
TJ
on Flow by Falter
great work!
on Flow by Falter
i like this track...
wicked bassline.
soon as i heard it after the drop,
i thot of Bar 9's Murda Sound VIP.
i rlly wouldnt mind having
that kinda dubstep patch in my
collection.
great work.
Its minimal, but it rlly works for me.
Wat i think it needs are incidentals.
zaps, rises, sweeps and beeps. any wierd samples
u find that think fit.
its a rusko type technique i guess,
but it really gives ppl something to grab
on to throughout the track. I need more samples
like that haha.
if not, make my own lol.
if you use massive i can send you some of my patches? pretty much all the ones in this tune were from scratch. but the most important stuff for hitting those sounds is in the effects you put it through. check out using a bit crusher or some distortion to get those really broken up basses. theres alot of good freeware out there that does the job.
on Flow by Falter
I made a dubstep song "Don't Get Lost." I also have some dnb tracks that you may like.
on Defective by Falter
hella better then my frst attempts at dubstep. ive only been producing for like 3 months, so im rlly no masterclass producer.
hell, didnt rlly buy DAW software till like 3 weeks ago haha.
keep banging at it,
a hit's gunna answer eventually.
on Dubstep Practice 2 by Falter
on Dubstep Practice 2 by Falter
Much appreciated bro,
TJ
on Depth Charge by Falter
on Shake the House by Falter
on Cold Sweat by Falter
on Depth Charge by Falter
Take care.
Falter
on Depth Charge by Falter
thanks again man. and my email is skate_n_bass@yahoo.com hit me up if you get a chance!
later.
on Depth Charge by Falter
Got some nice ideas in here! Personally i think you need to get a much bigger kick and snare in there! Maybe some realy heavy sub!
Also a bit more eq on the first intro sound and on the reece that you drop in! Maybe cut the bit where you take the reece really low!
What sort of dnb do you listen to normally?
usually i listen to a lot of tech-step, dark neuro, that kinda stuff. Spor, Calyx, Noisia, Evol Intent, etc. and you? my email is skate_n_bass@yahoo.com hit me up on there if you like.
take it easy.
on Cold Sweat by Falter
Getting around to give reviews back to my recent rock tune you reviewed.
This is quite a bit different sounding track. Hardcore as you call it. Has some nice features in it I like....like the synth parts.
Always goood to hear what someone has going on inside their mind. ;-).
Good job.
Later,
Randy
on Ripple by Falter
on Cold Sweat by Falter
on Waxing Synthetic by Falter
on Ripple by Falter
on Northern Lights (Daybreak Edit) by Falter
cheers anyway, give some of my newer stuff a glance if u got time.
peace man.
on Cold Sweat by Falter