Dubstep Practice 2 - Falter

Hey man, really appreciate you takin the time to point out what i need to change about this one. I cooked it up in about 3 hours start to finish so there's no real technical stuff thrown into it. You're right about the stop and starts with the drums, that is something i wasn't really taking into account and thinking back that makes a huge difference. This track was more about playing with the synths i have to get the right sound for the bass but giving it another listen this morning i think i was a long way off. The dubstep i like, and want to produce, is stuff like Excision, Datsik, Black Sun Empire (i know they are dnb but have you heard their tune Hyper Sun?? dude check it on youtube its mind blowing) I use FL studio for now, waiting on getting a new laptop in the next month or so to switch programs. but im still not sure if i want to cus FL has pretty much everything i need as far as i can tell. In any case man. I'm definitely down for working with you on getting on top of our game. i'm gonna check out some of your tunes now and hopefully return the same level of criticism.
Much appreciated bro,
TJ