La Traicion(this Betrayal) - Throughthevalley

3rd Mar 2011 02:07 - 15 years ago
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Description : had this track sitting around for as long as ive been a member here.this is improvewitherrors instrumental track "dissappointed." I did the vocals in spanish and the translation is as follows.....p.s. sounded decent on my headphones but you know how that goes..anyways thx for the spin and thx to improve with error for this great instrumental.
La Tracion(this betrayal)
those poisoned lips,fill my blood,poisons my heart
those poisoned lips,fill my life,poisons my soul and theres
no rest.
those poisoned lipsx2
(this betrayal)
your lies will embrace again
to your lies i will return
and those lips i will kiss again (this betrayal)X2
those poison lips....those poison lips i will kiss again.

Comments (3)

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JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 10th Mar 2011 20:57 - 15 years ago
The only thing that stops this from being killer is that we can't make out the vocals. I like the effects you have on the vocals, but they need to come more to the forefront.

All The Best

John
throughthevalley
throughthevalley replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
hey thx john for the review i will try to fix this as soon as i get a chance ive been so busy with work i havnt had time.as always thx for checking out my track my friend
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 3rd Mar 2011 14:39 - 15 years ago
Good job coming up with a vocal melody, something I could not do, or at least anything that I liked. The vocals are a little hard to hear though.
throughthevalley
throughthevalley replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thnx to you for uploading a great instrumental ive had put vocals over it a long time ago just was real hesitant on putting it up...i will try to mix it better but everytime i try that it just doesnt sound right.
abnerbesares
abnerbesares 3rd Mar 2011 10:44 - 15 years ago
It's a Petty that the sound is not that good bescause it sounds like a good song, if i could help you out in anyway let me know ok!
si necesitas mi ayuda en algo mi pana aqui estamos para eso cuidate se que tu musica es buena.
throughthevalley
throughthevalley replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
gracias por ofrecer tu ayuda amigo estoy tratando de aprender pero esta muy deficil y gracias por tus palabras de apoyo!!!

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