Description : Here's the latest - a busy, little track featuring a hiphop loop by Dusthill ("dh beat only" - I sliced it up a little) and dub loop by Peaktweaker. Thanks to both of these artists for sharing their talents!
I am not sure about the soaring synth at 3:20 - I was going for something cathartic, but feel that I kind of stumbled through it and it just sounds busy. I want this to be the part (3:20) where you just let go and feel happy -- ? Anyway, your suggestions are most helpful. Thanks for listening!
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Great tune! You have a great clear voice- reminds me of cross between Amy Lee and Imogen Heap :D.
As many of the people have said here, all that's really needed to be done is the instruments need a little turning up in some areas.
Personally said however, if you put more power into your voice at the end of track (though not suddenly), it'd be an even better finish.
But this song is easily going into my favourites, brilliant job!
Your lyrics are just fantastic, Im not sure if you have a pella up on this song or if you plan too...but if you do i would definately be making my version of the song. :D
Overall an excellent job. Keep up the great work! -Gabe
You have such a beautiful voice and the song itself is quite good. I would try remixing it, like eshar said some levels need to be adjusted. The vocals sound nice and out front, I think the music could be pumped up a bit.
You have a nicely spread out track as far as the panning is concerned, big in the stereo field, it gives room for the vocals so don't be afraid to turn the instrument levels up. I saw your post in the forums and figured I would give you my honest opinion. Good luck!
Nice job Angela. You have a lovely voice and much talent. The part where you sing the Tuning out the world line sends a shiver down my spine,in a nice way that is ;-)
hello angela, i don't hear this as busy at all - it's pathologically insular - 'course that's an external take on things - the 3.20 events really work - like a sleepwalker waking in a crowded subway station - it's alarming but not jarring, flows with the submerged vibe of the track. much respect
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As many of the people have said here, all that's really needed to be done is the instruments need a little turning up in some areas.
Personally said however, if you put more power into your voice at the end of track (though not suddenly), it'd be an even better finish.
But this song is easily going into my favourites, brilliant job!
The advice aside, this is amazing!
Your lyrics are just fantastic, Im not sure if you have a pella up on this song or if you plan too...but if you do i would definately be making my version of the song. :D
Overall an excellent job. Keep up the great work! -Gabe
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You have a nicely spread out track as far as the panning is concerned, big in the stereo field, it gives room for the vocals so don't be afraid to turn the instrument levels up. I saw your post in the forums and figured I would give you my honest opinion. Good luck!
Wayne