Just Kiss Me - RyanSeverns

12th Jan 2011 02:42 - 15 years ago
Description : I wrote this track starting with a rhythm idea I beat out on a countertop at work one day and a melody I started humming soon after. The name & lyrical concept came to me instantly, being about a man's desire to kiss a girl he is very much into, while at the same time not wanting to move too quickly to say the big three words, "I love you." ... This should make you wanna move. Also, check out the remix done by my friend & Looperman member, JoyfulWAVE

Comments (2)

If you have time take a listen and give RyanSeverns some feedback.

JWilson
JWilson 12th Jan 2011 17:22 - 15 years ago
This sounds really cool. Sounds like a quality pop tune. I like the chorus a lot. The sequenced hook is really good. Great song you have here.
RyanSeverns
RyanSeverns replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you so much, JWilson! I had a lot of fun recording this one; glad you enjoy it!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 12th Jan 2011 05:44 - 15 years ago
Mr. Severns, welcome to the Loop. Very nice work on this one. It is definitely current.

I will be honest, I'm not a fan of the effect on your vox on the verse, but man, when you kick in the real Mr. Severns at the chorus, your voice is exceptional.

This track is almost perfect, except for that small vox issue (sorry, it almost sounds muffled.....).

I could hear this one being played on the radio....one would think there are several artists who would jump all over this one.

All in all, I would say this is an excellent effort, well written, great instrumentation, a really nice track. Respect.

Bear
RyanSeverns
RyanSeverns replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks so much for your review, Bear :) I appreciate the feedback & advice concerning the vox on the verses. It is definitely one of my areas I am working on improving & updating my hardware eventually! Thanks again!

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