War In The Streetz - Justing101

I was around in the eightees when some brilliant synth music was being produced. so I especially like the feel to this I wasnt sure on the ending to start with as it was so different, but, it gave this tune a nice edge, and a unique quality...really enjoyed this :) smiles

I like just about everything, for my personal tastes, the bass drum was too far forward, but that's a personal thing :-)

Well DOne

John

Nice smooth sound here, dig the guitar work on this and got a very kool melody happening here guy, kinda advanguard but very kool !!

keep doing ya thing!!

Brian ;)

There were parts of this I really liked and parts I was not so fond of. A few of the chord progressions just seemed to dissonant and out of place. It was almost like listening to several different songs in one setting. I think most people (I'm no expert, so this is only my humble opinion) like continuity in their music.

My suggestion would be to end the song at the 4:15 mark and then take the next section and make it an entirely different song. It just doesn't fit the theme you created with the first 4 minutes.

I think you have elements in here that would work well by themselves, but don't work together. In this case, the sum of the parts just doesn't quite equal a whole.

Please don't take this as being overly critical. There is a lot of good stuff in this track. It just needs to be better organized.

Bear