Jealousy (Pockets On Cheese) - NORTHCOASTMUSIC

WOOO! Niceee! track and awesome!! flow...Yes sir! Jealousy! is the most unattractive human condition but most of all destructice but loving this whole track. Powerful!

"I rep more D than 12 Eminems" - J.Dilla

Great track man! Faved. I really like the flows man. On point for sure. My kinda shht. Id love to remix this. If you are interested let me know. Check out some of my other remixs. I think I could easily rip this up.

If you are interested in me remixing this for ya send the acapella to: #####
Ill send back some heat for ya.

Every one is a critic, just do you dont follow, good track man, i feel like the flow is good but i'm used to Syncing Royce Da 5'9 and Eminem to Detroit..So i guess in a way that was what i kind of expected to hear when i read "Detroit on the Rise"..But those are big shoes to fill...... in my humble opinion they got Detroit on the map and everyone kind of needs to step there game up to reach the level they've attained..I'm not saying mimic them just bring out that nasty delivery with wicked punchlines..and give people something to think about while they are listening to the track..and i listen to tracks not hear them, meaning i listen to the content of every verse and word....either way man good track!

You got some nice rhymes...I'd like to work with you.

Good work!!!

-=-Haro-=-

I agree with Mrbillionx, also you said in the description "detroit on the rise", but detroit done rose up already? It would be better if it was more original, your good but not original, and originality is most importaant these day's

Yeah yeah yeah yeah..... sounds much like every every other rap tune these days.

Lots of talking but no one is saying anything worth hearing.

FEEL ME!!

YEAH MAN IM FEELIN THIS MUCH LOVE HOMIE MY WIFY FROM THE D THATS WHATS UP.

u got flows fam
u beasted the track, sounds real imma bop this 2night