YOUR SWEET TEARS - Silvestre

Wicked track Silvestre. So many great melodies in here. The piano and strings add so much texture to the song. Really love the bass tone. Nice work man. Faved.

Potential is the key word that is describing your sound for me. The guitar parts are awesome in their own right. The structuring is fine. Everything fits together and flows quite nicely. The drums are definitely there. It certainly comes across that your passion is Rock music. Where the wheels start to come off at all four corners is in the mixing. From what I've listened to this is improving as we speak.

The best way I can describe what I'm trying to say is by using what's already out there. When you listen to David Gilmour Playing with Pink Floyd his guitar is mixed in quite equally with the rest of the group. When he plays as a solo artist his guitar is right up front there in the mix and everything else is slightly behind. I think its a compromise he had to make for Floyd. Best example of this is listening to Comfortably Numb from the Pulse live performance then DG Live in Dansk playing the same song. Exactly the same guitar part.. just mixed differently.

What is going on when I listen to this track is that some of the guitar is weighted quite nicely in with all the other instruments and in other parts everything else is fighting for space with the guitar. It works both ways but not in the same track.

I feel so brutal putting this in a review. In all fairness there are some people that dislike the way that I mix my songs. My CPU is ready to explode it's working so hard when I render the songs as mp3's. I tend to use a lot of reverb effects and pan some tracks slightly off centre to make them sit right. Using the delay of when the sounds hit a solid object as an instrument in it's own right. I'm also quite extreme with bass. I get a bit Spinal Tap and turn it all up to 11. At the end of the day when you find your sound it's a magic moment and you can pretty much apply that to all of your work so that it defines you. Just by hearing the first few bars people will be able to say "that's Silvestre!"

I hope that this feedback doesn't offend you in any way, as that is not my intention. You've got a great talent. Don't stop making music.

Kindest Regards
Fixxxer

I like it bro....All Imma say is the guitar part could be mixed better but other then that, I like it. Keep it up. I know some Rock singers in Florida who will jump on this. I would love to get the loops of this track do a hip hop r&b version. Let me know.

Absolutely excellent piece of work. Love it. Incredible guitar work.

Faved and Downloaded

John

Nice track, this is a very good instrumental. Love the stereo effect on the guitar has a very surround sound feel to it. Great job on this, nice use of different sound. Keep it up man.

This is rather good, some really, really nice parts. The first piano and guitar blew me away.
Now, for some critique: This sounds like you had a lot of ideas and laid the out in a line – I wish you'd saved some of them for another tune. The themes are really good but they deserve to get their own song, if you see what I mean.

I really think you're a talent and I hope you don't get this wrong. I do think this is something good that has the potential of greatness.
Take care
/pmk

Buen tema de rock. Bien utilizados todos los instrumentos. Realmente me ha gustado el tema y la concepción que tienes del desarrollo de la música.