The start was rather long considering where you went with this.

not too bad but still needs a bit of tweaking to be a banger.

yeah nice very nice the start was cool i like the use of the piano it has a good melodic flow but i would say that your drum loops are slightly low in the track but i love the concept of this and overall well done very classy indeed i must say fav'd keep them coming bro

Haha, this put a smile on my face, well done, it's a very nice track, the only thing I would suggest is that you take off the reverb on the other drums you added, but my drums sound nice, keep it up, it's almost a funky house Drum & Bass step.
Musically it's all there, the arrangement is ok, maybe the transitions in some parts are a little off but don't worry, for a 13 year old you've got plenty of time to work on your arrangements.
I like how you sped up the track into the Drum & Bass state as well, you've got nice ideas in this track, and the bassline is good too.
Just try to make sure you have at least 1 kick and snare that has no reverb and punches through the track.
One last thing, I admire and respect you for letting me know you used my loop, I don't mind if you don't say you used it unless oyu say "Oh, I made all of it myself" Lol.
Keep up the good work and if you want to collab sometime you let me know little guy and we'll see what we can come up with.

Soligen