My Girl - SHPInc

**** if it were me I wouldn't cut the strings out

Really like the vibe of this track, has alot of emotional energy
Feels a little rough on the edges though, its kind of like right when I start to get into it it changes jurassticly
The strings are really beautiful and the piano is well crafted great job on that!
As far as the beat though, I feel its a little too hard and subtracts more than it adds, I think pushing the treble back and pulling a little more of the bass would make it feel more.. natural? .. maybe.
But for rap/hip hop you definitely want that kick to be felt in your soul.

Also If it were me I wouldn't cut them out when the piano plays, cus they really add alot of value to this track, but using them in the background with longer note values would still let the piano maintain the spotlight without dropping that deep value you presented
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I hope my review is helpful and I'm grateful that you presented this for the community to listen to
The quality of the track is great and I can tell alot of work went into it
But there's no such thing as enough
And I hope you will continue to work on this piece, cus as is
Its still a diamond in the rough, at least to me it feels this way

Good luck and much respect
-fayz