WHY ARE U MOVING - Unrealx

For your first attempt, its not bad. I will assume you have been making other music. First of all, about Johnnygadgets comment, trance music does not have to sync all the time. In fact, it often does not. However, at some point the song does have to sync back up with the beat, as to be mixable for a DJ, and also for the listener to get back on track. Other than that, I would think that if you wanted to put some more chordic sounds or pads under to fill the spaces, that might be good as well. Otherwise, its a good track, just keep working on it. Don't get discouraged. It will really develop, as long as you don't get sidetracked literally into another song.

Really like the feel of this!! Seems like a cross between electro and trance, if that makes sense! Its really good though!! I downloaded your other tune, the one with the mad sort of vocal you spliced together, I like your style man, keep it up!!

Ok so im new to doing music (started a month ago) but this puts my 1st trance song to shame!

I think this song is amazing! I want to hear more...

Ok not a trance fan or a dance fan but I try to listen when I can even just for an honest review almost every trance type track I hear has subtle (mistakes?) glitches in the mix where as like a change doesnt sync up where it should or it seems a little off or something or it doesnt flow right or what ever
either way not too much is dead nuts on. this one how ever really feels good! If this is your first attempt then keep doing what your doing,
because with stuff like this I could easily become a trance fan !!!!! thumbs.
GMF,
Johnny Gadget