Toxic - Dj4Real

Hyper track here guy! can do alot with this!!

Bm;)

I like this, pretty good music for a sunday morning! The effects you are using on the drums are cool. I like the fireworks or whatever sound that is too. Nice one, faved!

this is awesome man , you got like some borgore style bass going on (sounds like a voice) sick nice one man

Alright Toxic. I had a listen to the tune and I don't wanna come across as being harsh but please bear with me, I wanna see you improve. First off, this is listed as Drum and Bass but it doesn't seem so drum and bassy to me. One thing, your kick drum is sitting behind the rest of your elements. Try boosting your eq on those around 100hz to bring it out some or duck the rest around your kick drum hits. Remember its not always about adding to eq, reducing is equally important. A quick way to do this is to sidechain. Keep your snares poppy and snappy and have them on the 5th and the 13th step of your bar loop and play with your kicks around that pattern. Hats are essential so experiment with them and allow them to add to your groove. Your pads are sounding good and those bleeping noises would be much better sounding as reece. One of my biggest issues with tunes is structure. If you plan a structure and stick to it, then your tracks are much easier to sequence. With structure comes familiarity but will also open you up to play with some suspense for your listeners. Keep it interesting. I couldn't really hear a bass line at all and thats ESSENTIAL with DnB. Overall, I think you are off to a good start, but keep playing with it and you will find yourself just banging them out left and right. DO NOT GET DISCOURAGED!!

Respect,

joncarr