Tags : | Rap | 3.13 MB | Featured

Description : Well posted the unfinished version a couple days ago, this is the complete version. I composed the beat and put the lyrics together after a series of bad days and mishaps. Both the beat and the recording were made with the FL9 program. Wrote the 2nd verse this morning and recorded this afternoon, feed back on it is very much appreciated...Thank you

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  1. JohnBoutilier
    JohnBoutilier on Sat 16th Apr 2011 - 11 years ago

    I came into listening to this expecting quality and I wasn't disappointed. Another great track, my friend, and a definite fav.


    Reply by GEOram

    thank you, one of my early tracks but this one is where i feel i just ripped it to shreds and let the emotions control the pen..

  2. JamesDavies
    JamesDavies on Fri 14th Jan 2011 - 12 years ago

    Do you do albums? The piano here is quite R n' B. It's one of my favourite types of piano.

    Reply by GEOram

    Appreciate the feed back on this one....Not exact albums yet but i'm still a work in progress....Yeah piano's and violins and cellos really get me inspired for some reason..

  3. Tiltedbeats
    Tiltedbeats on Wed 11th Aug 2010 - 12 years ago


    skillz present right here man

    nothing but respect ;)


    Reply by GEOram

    thanks man, it really mean a lot to me!

    i'm about to drop some new stuff with a new flow and different delivery, stay tuned you wont be disappointed...We'll get our collab going soon enough.....

  4. StrikingDaggers
    StrikingDaggers on Sun 25th Jul 2010 - 12 years ago

    I saw this after I had already left a review on the uncompleted version. The 2nd verse is dope man. The whole track is really dope man. It's a Fav. Nice work.

    Reply by GEOram

    Thanks appreciate your review..I'm currently in the "lab" working on another track similar to this one, just pure emotion, know what i mean. I'll post it up soon enough.

  5. SpellJammer
    SpellJammer on Sun 25th Jul 2010 - 12 years ago

    Feeling this one bro. Tight lyrics, awesome track.

    Reply by GEOram

    Appreciate it bro, the track was a natural emotional flow, so it was just feelings coming through to the mic.....

    RoCkYPRODUCTION on Wed 7th Jul 2010 - 12 years ago

    flow is in place dude...nice one....
    i liked the piano mucho

    nice done a straight 10 dude


    Reply by GEOram

    Appreciate you listening to it and the feedback thanks.. Stay tuned I'll put another track up this week..

  7. CrashTheSystem
    CrashTheSystem on Sun 27th Jun 2010 - 12 years ago

    I am not a huge rap fan, i usually find a good one here and there. This is definately one of the good ones. Absolutely love it.

    Reply by GEOram

    I appreciate your words, really does mean a lot to me. I try to make my verses mean something to me and then hopefully others can relate to it along the way.

  8. donmega
    donmega on Sun 20th Jun 2010 - 12 years ago

    ok fam u got a nice track going

    Reply by GEOram

    Appreciate it, thanks for the feedback..

  9. HustlerbyNature
    HustlerbyNature on Fri 18th Jun 2010 - 12 years ago

    sick flow sick beat definitely feelin it homie.. keep doin ya thang!!

    Reply by GEOram

    Appreciate your words,thanks for the review...Every comment like this pushes me to excel at it even more..

  10. BendeR007
    BendeR007 on Sat 12th Jun 2010 - 12 years ago

    Good work, it's sound good
    But I think it''ll be sounds excellent with some girl vocal on the chorus.
    Good luck mus bro! ;)

    Reply by GEOram

    Appreciate the feedback i know it would sound better i was just havent found any girl that wants to collab....

  11. BendeR007
    BendeR007 on Sat 12th Jun 2010 - 12 years ago

    Some days with the music are especialy hard..
    Trying take me out the way and stop fire in heart..
    But again and again I take myself in the hands,
    Feeling help of my closers and support of friends..

    Reply by GEOram

    yeah real good with it.. i like that

  12. KrookedEntertainment
    KrookedEntertainment on Fri 4th Jun 2010 - 12 years ago

    really what is life without the music? this shht is nice homie i like and the piano is hot good work

    Reply by GEOram

    Appreciate it, i put in alot of effort into this music so i try to deliver nothing but my best on it. stay tuned i got more to come.

  13. typeMARS
    typeMARS on Sun 23rd May 2010 - 12 years ago

    wow total FL elements! :D

    i'm really not a fan of hip hop, but... good beats you got there. also, great lyrics!


    Reply by GEOram

    Appreciate the words, man put alot of effort into it so it really means alot to me thanks again.

  14. StrikingDaggers
    StrikingDaggers on Mon 17th May 2010 - 12 years ago

    It's a really cool track. The beats pretty tight and the lyrics are good too. The production sounds pretty good as well. Nice work.

    Reply by GEOram

    Much appreciated, thanks for the compliment can u believe it was all done on FL9, crazy what u can do with technology now a days. Thanks for the words again....

    CONEYISLANDRECORDS on Sun 16th May 2010 - 12 years ago

    I dig it man. Like I said before I like your flows. Glad I came to check out your stuff! A collab is def in order!

    Reply by GEOram

    Appreciate your time on this, and really looking forward to getting that collab with you...thanks again

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