Description : This is one my favorite poems I did last year I need a good beat John F. Lleonart lend a hand. Tell me what you think. Beware ( The Mind of a Writer CD coming soon. )

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  1. Nequissimus
    Nequissimus on Thu 3rd Mar 2011 - 13 years ago

    Nice poem, man.

    The beat fits the mood of your words and the effects on your voice are good. Even though they are too prominent in some parts. But that's still ok ;)

    TheWritersPoet41
    Reply by TheWritersPoet41

    I really appreciated the feed back glad you enjoyed it

  2. Spivkurl
    Spivkurl on Thu 2nd Dec 2010 - 13 years ago

    Really good poetry man! Nice production too! I like the effects you used on the vocals! Those beats suit this poem very nicely! Well done man!

    TheWritersPoet41
    Reply by TheWritersPoet41

    Thanks for your review it was nicely done by one of my closest friends.

  3. EBRAD
    EBRAD on Tue 31st Aug 2010 - 13 years ago

    As a poet, I appreciate your expression. As a producer, there's one problem that can't be ignored. There are no words spoken until :35 into a 4:44 long track. :35 is enough time for listeners to get annoyed and switch to another track. It's also enough time for a listener to leave you alone altogether. You wouldn't stand on stage silent for :35. Don't let a track play for that long before letting loose. Other than that, I enjoyed it. However, I appreciate the art and understand the effort put forth. The average listener doesn't care about any of that. They want satisfaction.

    TheWritersPoet41
    Reply by TheWritersPoet41

    hey thanks for the feed i really appreciate it a lot but i didn't compose the track but I will kept that in mine to the fellow who did it

  4. Writenow921
    Writenow921 on Sun 18th Jul 2010 - 13 years ago

    Man I am really feelin this track. "I pray that our GOd lightins the sky" Feelin' that line right there. And hte beat matches the toneof the piece perfetly. I've lsitened to some of your other stuff too dude. Your a great writer. Ir would be realy cool to collaborate with you, so if you have any projects your working on hit meup id like to see if i could lend my vocals

    TheWritersPoet41
    Reply by TheWritersPoet41

    Thanks for the feed back this guy from Cali to this together I just put the pella I love this one tho

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