A Long Walk Home - EveryWakingMoment09

this is a good job you have done .
cool stuff but rough .
i am not going to sing it but as the case it is
a catchy idea for vocal.
i am tortured with that loud drum beat .
oh..

Hi. Pretty interesting track you have here. It sounds very much like a proper song (ballad maybe) but, obviously, missing the vocals.

Is it supposed to have them on? Does it now?

I like the drums most of all. They could probably do with more variation, though there are some decent fills.

Shaker at end of bar is good but maybe plays too often. Maybe vary that shaker pattern as it sounds copied and pasted and unchanging.

Lead guitar I like but it has a bit of clipping on it quite often so is going a bit loud and distorted.

Good slowdown ending.

I guess you're aware there's an extra low volume beat right at the end, as the guitar fades out? Is that maybe the drum beat recorded onto the guitar part as it spills out from your headphones?

Good work and I'd like to hear the full song.

Pretty sweet for a rough draft. I look forward to the completed piece.

John

Pretty catchy tune buddy. keep it up.