Poor Man And The Bandit - Byizy

12th Feb 2010 21:18 - 16 years ago
Description : A really quickly thrown together track, i used only poor mansloop1 and bandit 4loop3 and 4loop5 and a few other loops i made on FL, i know its pretty linear, i was wondering if anybody could help with ideas on how to beef it up some more

Comments (2)

If you have time take a listen and give byizy some feedback.

theassociation
theassociation 25th Feb 2010 10:06 - 16 years ago
i think its pretty good, i think it needs a break in there, maybe one of the chorus bits drop the melody and accent the ryhym, its a good song tho.....
KidKhaos
KidKhaos 13th Feb 2010 18:00 - 16 years ago
Smooth it out a little. Composition and transitions are a little to rough. Add a crash when your dropping in and out of certain parts of the song. Its a little weird for me but, I like where your going with it. Think smoother. Keep it up!!!
byizy
byizy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you, i do enjoy it when people just tell me "nice track", but i definately enjoy it more when others pick at my songs to try and help me get better, for a beginner i really need and want any and all crticism, so i can take a nother look at my pieces and pick them apart myself also.Thanks again XD

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