4:05 - LittleRailTrouble

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The random:
The way ya had the intro on this I had no idea which direction you were gonna take it. I also dig the strange numeric title (did the same thing on one of my first few songs as a way to abbreviate sayin- "A $20 for a 40 ounce" = 8-20-48-40, dropped down to 8:20)

The good:
I really love the bassline on this along with the way you cut the beat in and out (a mixing style/technique that I love doing too). And the hydraulic effect you've got here and there was pretty sweet as well.

The bad & suggestions:
Dunno really what the ##### ##### & blast have to do with the song (though they were cool for the different intro). If it were my mix I'd think about swappin 'em out for a CD loading or putting the needle on the record sound bytes (to go better with the hydraulic lift SFX you have on the track (might wanna ditch the broken glass SFX, because it began to have a 'canned sound' quality to it- ie, you could tell it was a loop). I'd also consider fading out the end (possibly touching back on what you did at the intro) and also work on extending the mix out about a minute or so more. Beyond that decently done. Lates!