Smile - Jalyn

13th Dec 2009 02:18 - 16 years ago
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Description : idk. i like the lead!!! =]

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WhiteSands
WhiteSands 3rd Feb 2010 03:16 - 16 years ago
id put this one under newage for the genre. Its real uplifting. nice job :)
Steevo
Steevo 13th Dec 2009 11:44 - 16 years ago
Liked the ideas in this, the screaming synth was good, and please take this constuctivly,to my untrained ear I thought there was too much going on in the track, and that made it sound very muddy.
Less is sometimes more. Introducing a instrument/vst should maybe mean you ought to take something out to make room, other wise you risk not being able to make out what is happening in the overall sound.

Hope to hear some more from you.
KnownAsn1
KnownAsn1 13th Dec 2009 02:31 - 16 years ago
A very good song I believe. I was able to listen to it all of the way through without having my mind wander. Was very interesting and captivating. definitely my type of music! Hope to hear more :D
Jalyn
Jalyn replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank You!!! =]

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