Untitled Still - Juan1

Hi there, im into this kinda stuff. Id like to offer some advice though.
First, the sampled drums and synth bass might be sufficent for you to lay your guitar ideas over. But to make that track sound heavy you need a better drum samples, Play around with ezdrummer, or just rip kicks and snares from tracks.
The bass too you can get 'sort of' realistic soundfonts and vsts maybe give them ago, or try and get a better synth patch that compliments the low end more.
the rhythm guitars need abit of eq'in they sound really muffled in the 300-400 range maybe use a cut off further up the ladder maybe 4k plus? try and scoop out the mids too. thats how i get huge ryhthm parts. I dont know if you double tracked them panned them left right? if you did put a delay just a few m/s on one part. rammstein like to play two rhythm parts one an octave high deeper in the mix, experiment there too. My takeaways here now, but i liked your composition, your lead is tight.

Well executed track and tight playing. You should see if there is a decent metal vocalist on looperman willing to collaborate on this to finish it - cheers jfw.