DJ DragoN Feat.Michael Pendland-Broken Thoughts - DJsDragoN

I love the power of the backing track but the vocals are almost lost in tyhat power. I would bring them a tad more forward and make this great track an awesome track.

All The Best

John

Yeah you have done well to frame the vocals within the music....maybe a small break could improve it, but then again I think you had intended it to have that mysteriously hypnotic feel
well done
Trax

Hey DJ

hey friend, really like this piece, especially the vocals, they remind me of some artist who's name I can not remember just now, but like what you have done with them man, nice solid progressive trance track, good work again DJ....Peace...Estefano...

Dude so this has some cool potential - 1st thought was that there is too much fx on the vocals. With the part that repeats for the first minute or so, what fades in sounding nice, but it would have been nice to have more variation in the repeating part before ... those lovely strings came in. That is nice, but still the bzzzemp bzzemp sound needs some occasional switch ups in it's groove. For example, open the song up in audition or audacity - any wave editor, and like take beat of the 4 beat measures and reverse it. With a couple tweaks like that - as well as perhaps taking some of the reverb off of the vocals - you've got an excellent start and I truly - and this is coming from the guy who wrote the lyrics and the song - I truly feel that you've got the raw elements that perfectly match the sentiment and feelings behind the song.

Try this for awesomeness - the bass thing you have going on - put the FL Love Filter on that - it will be crazy great. Cheers! Thanks for the cool words about Mike's vocals too. He liked hearing that.

Trippy syuff dude. Its got an almost eerie feel to it.