Hi Franklin89 and welcome to looperman:)
Just listened to both your tracks - pretty minimal both of them but I can see where you are coming from in your music direction.
I just think in both tracks you need just a little bit more variation I say this cos its something I have done many times myself, but ive heard enough to make me come back and check out what else you create.
Enjoy the site.
Regards
Krook
Hey Krook, thanks for the review. But I'm new with creating music on fruity loops. Maybe you can help me to give me some good info about making a track. :)
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Just listened to both your tracks - pretty minimal both of them but I can see where you are coming from in your music direction.
I just think in both tracks you need just a little bit more variation I say this cos its something I have done many times myself, but ive heard enough to make me come back and check out what else you create.
Enjoy the site.
Regards
Krook