Tags : | Dance | 4.91 MB

Description : Hey guys,
I've been working on this song for awhile now. I LOVE the lyrics and the main melody, but the rest of the song is just not taking the direction I want it to. I'm stuck and I don't know what to do! "/ It's missing something, has no life. I'm not sure what it's missing and i'm getting so frustrated. I know it needs to mastered and such but that's not the problem. Please tell me what it's missing or what I should change to give it that extra umph! If I can't figure it out maybe i'll just let you guys have the acapella and make something outta it "/ just don't want this song to go to waste, so any ideas, thoughts, comments, are welcome! :D

UPDATE: The acapella is now up for grabs on here, I've given up on this project. I wanna hear what you do with it please! :)

www.myspace.com/stephaniekaymusic

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  1. KrisA
    KrisA on Sun 13th Jan 2013 - 9 years ago

    Check my remix out. hope you like it.

  2. phraes
    phraes on Tue 29th Nov 2011 - 10 years ago

    CHECK OUT THE KEY RANGES OF THE WHOLE SONG..

  3. Music4Life
    Music4Life on Thu 7th Apr 2011 - 11 years ago

    Hey Stephanie!

    I love your voice and the beat. I think you could add a few more beats that would give it more of a club feel. I think some back-up singers in some parts will help the track as well. Try adding some sound FXs in a some areas, it doesn't have to be much. What do you think?

    Keep it up, my friend.

  4. bmw2000uk
    bmw2000uk on Tue 12th Oct 2010 - 11 years ago

    Hmm, good lyrics, i think im goona down the acapella to work with and see if i can do u any justice.

    Nice song...

    Peace...

  5. DJFrosted
    DJFrosted on Thu 24th Dec 2009 - 12 years ago

    very nice :3 i'll see what i can do ;)

  6. KAMPUTERA
    KAMPUTERA on Thu 17th Dec 2009 - 12 years ago

    I did a slight adjustment on your track. It is good. You may need to add some additional instrumental support. The beat is repetitive which could explain the lack of lift. Send me an email address and I can send you the mix. It's got more bass, but there is also some minor vocal audio clips. I'll send what I was able to muster in twenty minutes.

    Cheers :)

  7. TraXnCtrl
    TraXnCtrl on Mon 14th Dec 2009 - 12 years ago

    Hi StephanieKay,

    I like the vocals and melody, but it just needs some bottom end....bass and a kick drum.

    I have used your accapella "top secret" in a track I produced called....you guessed it...."Top Secret". That might give you an idea for some bottom end sounds. I am happy to help with the acapella or the track if you send me a copy.

    This does have potential, so don't be too quick to throw in the towel.
    Trax

  8. bete
    bete on Mon 30th Nov 2009 - 12 years ago

    the thing that is missing is some house snares and some hard low notes of a bass line...it would sound extremely beter than

  9. DontaGraham
    DontaGraham on Fri 27th Nov 2009 - 12 years ago

    You have a wonderful voice but the song is 2 strong. Try a nice mellow song and u will land it. keep it up

  10. keyboard55
    keyboard55 on Thu 26th Nov 2009 - 12 years ago

    is the other way around actually this song needs "bridges" that can connect the choruses , this song idea is just a series of choruses perfect for a catchy dance tune but if you want to build a pop tune you need to put some extra lyrics to connect your choruses.

  11. Bioscape
    Bioscape on Wed 25th Nov 2009 - 12 years ago

    First of all the vocals are great..I think the drums should've come in with your voice, along with a bassline. Your right about it sounding like it has no life, I'm trying to figure out why! haha. I think the main beat has to be changed up when the chorus comes in. I might grab your pella and work on it!

  12. VFOUR
    VFOUR on Tue 17th Nov 2009 - 12 years ago

    Took your vocals and added it to my drum n bass track called 8am:
    https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/46680

    thanks - Paul.

  13. FloridaboyFlava
    FloridaboyFlava on Sat 7th Nov 2009 - 12 years ago

    as U kNOW Ur vOCALS r exPLiCabLe vERY sOFt buT hAS fEEl the bEAT IS AS yOu expLAiND my advice since its dance song and a lil livliness 2 wit some cybals or hit hit . but great job thoughoh and if ur puttin vocals up i would like 2 know were i can find them

  14. TheDonMusic
    TheDonMusic on Fri 6th Nov 2009 - 12 years ago

    I love your voice, but the melody can use a bit of work. I 'd like to take your acapella and see what I can make out of it

  15. ESPofGemNeyZ
    ESPofGemNeyZ on Thu 5th Nov 2009 - 12 years ago

    I would say that u need to arrange the beat a bit better, drop that arppregiated synth now and again, and that would give ur melody more life, plus a good mix would help out with the overall life...... if u cant figure it out, i would def like to give ur acapella a go

    StephanieKay
    Reply by StephanieKay

    yeah I think i'm just gonna be done with this song, and start over new. I think I'll put the acapella up for adoption "/

  16. Apieceoftofu
    Apieceoftofu on Thu 5th Nov 2009 - 12 years ago

    the vocals are nice but i would say get a more driving bass or some synth pads going to fill it out. Also it sounds a bit discordant at points. also up the bass on your kick a bit more! nice track though

  17. CONEYISLANDRECORDS
    CONEYISLANDRECORDS on Thu 5th Nov 2009 - 12 years ago

    Def needs a chorus. Sounds like the track is building and building. I was waiting for the chorus to come in. Needs a chorus for sure and mabey some sort of breakdown.

    StephanieKay
    Reply by StephanieKay

    the chorus is supposed to be the part that goes "oh were going out tonight, you got me feeling right, etc." guess it's not obvious "/ I'm just about ready to throw in the towel on this one

  18. TaraToxic
    TaraToxic on Thu 5th Nov 2009 - 12 years ago

    Good song, pretty vocals :)
    I could maybe suggest adding some kind of strings in the middle of the song, to give it that extra bulkiness to support the vocals, sounds really good though

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