Description : Hey guys,
I've been working on this song for awhile now. I LOVE the lyrics and the main melody, but the rest of the song is just not taking the direction I want it to. I'm stuck and I don't know what to do! "/ It's missing something, has no life. I'm not sure what it's missing and i'm getting so frustrated. I know it needs to mastered and such but that's not the problem. Please tell me what it's missing or what I should change to give it that extra umph! If I can't figure it out maybe i'll just let you guys have the acapella and make something outta it "/ just don't want this song to go to waste, so any ideas, thoughts, comments, are welcome! :D
UPDATE: The acapella is now up for grabs on here, I've given up on this project. I wanna hear what you do with it please! :)
Description : Dance and Drum and Bass?!?!?
A track with three tempos
Description : Looking for a singer! I can hear a deadmau5 "raise your weapon" vocal style sounding really cool on it.
Description : Let the track tellin you... :)
Description : Its been a little while since I've uploaded a dance track...
Description : Club House Dance Music
Description : **** UPDATED ****
After reading some comment, i've experienced some improvement to the track, trying keeping the original idea in my mind. So, after two months, these are the changes: better balancing of sounds, more fatty kicks, less redundancy of the reverberations, uplifted formant bass. Featuring Stepa K.
Description : Raw Club House Dance Music
Description : Powerful techno track.
Original!
128 BPM
Enjoy! ;)
Description : I need a singer to do justice to this track!
Dance-pop and with the right voice, radio ready!
Contact me for wavs
Description : Raw Club House Dance Music
Description : Original track (138 BPM) featuring the amazing Jenna Evans.
Pretty happy with it and really, I just love this one!!
This is actually an extended version, the original start about 5min in.
looperman.com/tracks/detail/198248
Enjoy!
Description : It's summertime guys! Made this track in the thoughts of the summertime with a funky, nu-disco like chill groove. The outcome of this whole track is really nice. Just recently finished a remixing competition and the results can be seen here : https://www.looperman.com/forum/thread/184956/saturday-night-remix-competition Enjoy guys!
Description : Avicii inspired Dance Song
Description : My second Big Room, i'm really enjoying this of making hard party music. Every feedback is appreciated :3
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Description : I want to take you back to the 90s for 4 minutes!
Check my remix out. hope you like it.
CHECK OUT THE KEY RANGES OF THE WHOLE SONG..
Hey Stephanie!
I love your voice and the beat. I think you could add a few more beats that would give it more of a club feel. I think some back-up singers in some parts will help the track as well. Try adding some sound FXs in a some areas, it doesn't have to be much. What do you think?
Keep it up, my friend.
Hmm, good lyrics, i think im goona down the acapella to work with and see if i can do u any justice.
Nice song...
Peace...
very nice :3 i'll see what i can do ;)
I did a slight adjustment on your track. It is good. You may need to add some additional instrumental support. The beat is repetitive which could explain the lack of lift. Send me an email address and I can send you the mix. It's got more bass, but there is also some minor vocal audio clips. I'll send what I was able to muster in twenty minutes.
Cheers :)
Hi StephanieKay,
I like the vocals and melody, but it just needs some bottom end....bass and a kick drum.
I have used your accapella "top secret" in a track I produced called....you guessed it...."Top Secret". That might give you an idea for some bottom end sounds. I am happy to help with the acapella or the track if you send me a copy.
This does have potential, so don't be too quick to throw in the towel.
Trax
the thing that is missing is some house snares and some hard low notes of a bass line...it would sound extremely beter than
You have a wonderful voice but the song is 2 strong. Try a nice mellow song and u will land it. keep it up
is the other way around actually this song needs "bridges" that can connect the choruses , this song idea is just a series of choruses perfect for a catchy dance tune but if you want to build a pop tune you need to put some extra lyrics to connect your choruses.
First of all the vocals are great..I think the drums should've come in with your voice, along with a bassline. Your right about it sounding like it has no life, I'm trying to figure out why! haha. I think the main beat has to be changed up when the chorus comes in. I might grab your pella and work on it!
Took your vocals and added it to my drum n bass track called 8am:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/46680
thanks - Paul.
as U kNOW Ur vOCALS r exPLiCabLe vERY sOFt buT hAS fEEl the bEAT IS AS yOu expLAiND my advice since its dance song and a lil livliness 2 wit some cybals or hit hit . but great job thoughoh and if ur puttin vocals up i would like 2 know were i can find them
I love your voice, but the melody can use a bit of work. I 'd like to take your acapella and see what I can make out of it
I would say that u need to arrange the beat a bit better, drop that arppregiated synth now and again, and that would give ur melody more life, plus a good mix would help out with the overall life...... if u cant figure it out, i would def like to give ur acapella a go
the vocals are nice but i would say get a more driving bass or some synth pads going to fill it out. Also it sounds a bit discordant at points. also up the bass on your kick a bit more! nice track though
Def needs a chorus. Sounds like the track is building and building. I was waiting for the chorus to come in. Needs a chorus for sure and mabey some sort of breakdown.
Good song, pretty vocals :)
I could maybe suggest adding some kind of strings in the middle of the song, to give it that extra bulkiness to support the vocals, sounds really good though