Redemption - Jts5676

11th Aug 2009 23:34 - 17 years ago
Description : My first ever track, it's nothing special. I was just testing out mixcraft 4 and seeing what i could do with it. The vocals are very rough and unedited and the instruments are a bit off.

Comments (5)

If you have time take a listen and give jts5676 some feedback.

digitalenigma0
digitalenigma0 13th Aug 2009 11:53 - 17 years ago
sounds like you have talent at music and production man, cant wait to hear some more! drums are pretty good did you program them?
The_Acidizer
The_Acidizer 12th Aug 2009 05:11 - 17 years ago
pretty cool track here, it was an interesting listen. it does need a bit clean up though, it sounds almost like your trying to do too much with this one. be careful with your mix, and make sure you are as precise as possible, as even just a fraction of a second can mess a whole sound up. but this was a good starting point and i wish you luck

p.s. if you find any loops or samples similar to a day to remember or senses fail, definately let me know. i need some too haha
Freekshow
Freekshow 12th Aug 2009 05:04 - 17 years ago
just some suggestions...
first off, the track sounded very awesome. I did like the beginning as it kinda sounded a little like metallica l..l (devil horns hehe) Um, I like the heavy feel overall...not a bad deal at all...
However, I would clean up the vocals just a tad, other than that, that is the only rough spot i see here.
Keep it brutal man...you're doing good things...
rock on
bosonHavoc
bosonHavoc 12th Aug 2009 00:32 - 17 years ago
ya dude.. i wanna hear what you become.. mwhaha

watch the peaks on the mix.. i'm getting some clipping from the drums..
jts5676
jts5676 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
I am VERY new to the music scene but i have great ideas and amazing music plays in my head. I do need some help though. I have some trouble finding good screamo/2-step guitar and drums and then when i do and put them together the beats dont go together and it sounds sloppy. Also, I have no clue how to make my own melody so I don't know where to put vocals. My breakdowns are messy and I'm just not sure exactly what to do. I don't know what beats per minute is, nor 6/8 or 7/8 or any of that. I use Mixcraft4. If you're wondering what instruments I want or what I want to sound like, search A Day to Remember, I Set My Friends on Fire, and Senses Fail. Those are the bands I'm aiming to sound like. Any help is very appreciated. Thanks.
Kazm
Kazm 12th Aug 2009 00:23 - 17 years ago
There's some very good ideas here. I'd love to see them come into fruition. It sounds at the moment exactly like what you said it was, a test. But with tweaking this could make a pretty good track.

Peace.
Kii.

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