I LEAVE - Lofthouse

Nice work.....i like this song

This ones pretty sweet. Fat fat synth bass you got there. The changes are crazy nice and all the vocals are placed perfectly. Cool track yo!

wassup wit it i like da instruments in da song and how it was mixed. Da vocals fit good wit da song. it should be 8 bars for da chorus 8-12-16 for da verse and wit verses you should have 3. 4 if dares another person on da track den you can rap a verse day can rap a verse and repeat it. you can also switch it up when dares more den one person rapping. da verses in your song were short to me. in my songs i put a break in between da third verse. i have 16 bar verses so at 8 bars i put da break in. someone told me you should have a fade out and not have a fade in when you do a song. these are tips from my experience on making beats and watching tutorials. dares different ways to do things all types of techniques.

Nice, good work!