Need Feedback On This Beat - Prodybe1

Here's your feedback. Take it how you want, my guy.

Maybe git rid of that 40 second bridge, or add something to it.

Also, you'll need to change the beat pattern significantly so it doesn't get stale after listening to the same 8 bars. You can get away with the same pattern for 16 bars. After that, the repetitiveness really shows.

This form of beat making I believe is fine if someone is rapping over it. But since there isn't, you have to make it to where people will still keep listening to it instead of moving to the next track. In my opinion, your first 20 seconds is where you have to make an impression, although it may be sooner than that.

The beat itself is fine, but needs a bit more sustenance to it in my opinion. Sound like there's, what like, 5 instruments and a couple FX VOCs? The beat itself feels like it has more potential, but wasn't further experimented. I recommend looking it over again - If you see yourself doing that - and just play around with it more. New ideas for it may just pop in your head out of nowhere and the ideas may be perfect for the track.

Keep up with what you're doing and strive for greatness, dude! You got this!