Phantom - Ft Charvox - Malkontent42

I like this track as is. I enjoyed the listen. I don't claim to know much but when I listened one thing I would experiment with is dropping the drums out a couple of times. I think it was right around 0:48 when the vocals come back might work but for sure I would try experimenting with a short pause at 1:00 for the beat and then bring it back. I think that might make a nice impact. But I don't know anything and could be way off... :)

Bro, you asked for advice yourself.

Look, theres this thing called harmony. Without it, nothing really lands. No matter how dope the vocals or how sweet the melody, your track still wont truly hit people in the feels.

Im just keeping it real, no negativity. I really hope you hear me out. I get it when youre making your own music, every riff or hook you write might sound like straight fire to you. But the truth is, its not there yet.

A lot of people here are super nice and dont want to hurt anyones feelings, so instead of giving real constructive feedback, they just gas you up with praise.

Dont get me wrong Ill give you props too. Youre doing your thing. Youre putting in the work. Thats seriously cool. But if you wanna make truly great music, you first need to study the greats or learn from someone whos been around the block.

Youve got it in you to write a killer track. And honestly, this one? For someone whos still learning? Its actually pretty solid."

Let me know if you'd like a version that sounds more like a voice note from a producer friend.

Hello my friend !! I love this track exactly as it is .....!!! To my ears , this is a top notch work overall !!! Cheerssssssssssssss !!!

I am reading your answers to the previous comments and I recognize a person with love for music creation and beautiful feelings about the way collaborations may happen on LM. You know all that is radiating from your song, it is the way you work and how you believe things would be. And it is a very successful effort, it is a song, well constructed and performed. I would like a minute more too, and that means I just wanted more of this pleasure listening to a beautiful song.
Best regards, Anthony

Def like it tho. Nice work. I meant to lead with that lol

I like the melody. Are you trying something different with this one? Experimenting isnt just a good thing, its key to growth and evolution. Just messing around with whatever comes to mind can tell you alot about what your musical instincts are, and what your strengths are. Or could be. I like Charvox, but I would've went a different route, like maybe some faint ethnic chanting, and maybe add a refrain with another verse/vocal

Hello Malkontent42, very cool track , I like it a lot. Its got that intriguing something that I can't name but its a nice piece of work......great job

i like the melodies in this. the drums compliment it nicely. not the biggest fan of the vocals but i think my tastes are just different . nice work

thats not a bad piece at all, vocals are good bro, another 1 min would be better gives you a 3 min piece but as you say your learning 2 mins is ok lol, be proud bruv its a good work, it may have been put up as a pop accapella, but this piece is more trap sounding than pop to me, but that's not important really, nice upload and welcome to the community