Listen To Breathing In The Light Deep House Song By Juankar | Looperman

Really enjoyed this track.
The melodies feel very harmonic and everything fits together naturally.
Great atmosphere and smooth overall vibe, good work!

This is real ear candy to me. It's truly beautiful. And I actually love the production. It's not over produced which to me is very good. You really don't need lots of flash expensive plug ins. Don't get sucked into the hard core marketing. I use Reaper. I know Frenz does too and he uses a lot of the stock plug ins. When it comes down to it, trust your ears and your gut and your own artistic vision. Cheers bro. Zoot.

Yes I'm sure there is always room for improvement and we should always push ourselves to achieve higher.

I'm mostly self taught and not close to being a professional. My dubstep track I'm a boss dose have some sampling in it but from the reception I got appears to be the best thing I created so far and Having difficulty doing better than that track.

Time isn't on anybody's side either, I'm 48 so shit I might die before I can get into sound design and melody creation myself. Lol

Nice to see that your not scared to public release your music for feedback. I have known people to keep decent and really good music private cause they didn't feel it was good enough.

My dubstep track is located here if you want to listen. I'm sure it has lots of improvement that could be made too but was the best I could do at the time. I'm simply not a professional and doubt I could achieve that anyway not really a goal in my life right now.

https://on.soundcloud.com/BC4DSJXCHYMzOMeYBa

Some samples and loops came from looperman.

Well, thats definitely an interesting way to create your drum pattern. It seems like it would use more RAM then usual, but im a vocalist and no expert. That would be my brother, Pnnywze. He's been producing for a long time. Which reminds me, there are some folks around the community who have decided that they are the resident experts on everything, for some reason. Its far better to listen to what the general consensus on your work is than for someone that has named themselves after a mixing process or function proclaiming your mix is good or bad. This has not happened to us because i think those folks know better, but i do know more than one person here on LM that suddenly doubted their own skill and ability after years of making music. Noone makes a perfect song every time. And NOONE knows it all, the beauty of music is learning new things until the day u leave this Earth, and valuing the way others do things and learning from it, rather than thinking your way is the only way. Music doesnt work that way.
Your drums here are a good example. Not the way i would do it, but sounds good enough for me to try it that way. Music is always like that. We're invested in your musical journey now lol. We'll be following you

Awesome job. Very beautiful song.

Great work blending AI vocals into this. I really liked the mood.
I have also used Suno ins some of my tracks vocal performances and I know how tedious it is to have clean vocals without the AI artifacts.
Exellent work!
-J-

Nice zone out

What software do you use for mixing and mastering?
Your sound is really interesting, Im curious about your workflow. That way I can help you improve your sound a bit more, without you having to get overwhelmed trying to figure everything out on your own.
Saluti, Chris

I revisited your track and it really stands out. Great job definitely worth pushing further.This track has strong hit potential.
The vocal performance is captivating, and the atmosphere is beautifully crafted for the genre. Theres a clear artistic identity here. With a refined mix and a polished master, this could easily stand alongside high-level releases. Great work this definitely deserves further development and exposure. The track has a solid foundation and strong emotional delivery. To elevate it further, the mix could benefit from more clarity and balance especially in the midrange and vocal presence. A tighter low end and more controlled dynamics would help. With proper mastering (EQ, compression, stereo image), it can reach a very professional level.

I love this
Its exactly my kind of music.
And if this is just your beginning, then the skys the limit.

You have a really great feel for this stuff. Hope you live and learn to go on to make some phenomenal music you certainly have a good start.

hello my friend, this is a really nice piece of work, the vocal is stunning the music is beautiful with a great beat, Manuela's advice is spot on, she told me long ago about filling the stage the vocalist has its place and the instruments have theirs too. Its all about the balance of them put together, picture a band in front of you were the instruments sit and how the sound hits the audience, I'm sure you have been to enough concerts try and mix with that in mind you have your main work central and then overlays with right and left movements, stereo separation, cru also gave good advice, switching things down, lots of times it gives you more, although I think this sounds perfect so your not doing bad considering you say your still learning, a great piece you should be extremely proud of, it lacks nothing to my big ears

Alright, so here is some basic stuff for you! Reductive eq. Do not push up, but actually down. If you want those snares to snap, reduce the 200 band down to get that. Lower the master volume when you put compression on it, you get a better dynamic value, as opposed to pushing the compression so much that you join the loudness wars. And annoy ears all around the world :-)

Great Tune Mate, Listen to Manuela. She is a pro. I think we need a little widening of the mix in the stereo field and a bit of compression on the main mix. I like the phased synth pads underneath. This has some great potential. Keep at this mix.

Hi Juankar,

I'm so glad to hear that you joined this community because of the fantastic Odarka - a musician I greatly admire, but even more so, a wonderful person. And now that you're here, you're already a valued member of this small group.

As others have mentioned before, this song is very well arranged and thought out - it really lacks nothing. You wrote that you're still having some difficulties with mixing and mastering and want to learn more. But you've already done a great job with this track.

I can't give you any general advice, because every song and every instrument needs to be considered individually. But just like with composing, you'll develop your own style in the technical aspects over time.

Years ago, a brilliant sound engineer - who was also my musical mentor during my vocal training - gave me some advice that I've never forgotten. He said, "Mixing is the stage. You have to use it to its fullest." Just as every musician has their place on a real stage, every instrument has its place on the soundstage. Each one must be audible and locatable for the listener. It's crucial to decide which instrument should dominate at any given moment.

Be careful with effects - they can easily cause everything to become too muddy and the sound muddy. Left and right create the width of the soundstage; reverb and echo create the depth. In this sense, music is three-dimensional.

If mixing determines the placement of instruments in the listening space, then mastering is like stage lighting. It's even referred to as a sound image. And again: be careful with mastering effects - less is often more.

Another helpful tip: mix and master in several sessions. Give your ears a break. And when you think you're finally finished, put the song aside and don't listen to it for a few days. You'll often notice things afterward that you missed during the process.

If you have any specific questions, please feel free to contact us. We're happy to help if we can. There are some very competent technicians in this community one of them is TheFrenz. I think he can give you a lot of valuable advice.

Best regards, Manuela

This is truly an amazing piece of work. This brilliant song is clearly made for a wide audience, so well crafted and beautifully performed. It is nothing less of a hit.
Best wishes, Anthony.

Oh wow! this takes the word ethereal to another level, such professionalism and sound quality is off the charts. Beautiful! vocals and music are a match made in heaven. Remarkable work indeed & much Enjoyed! Bravo!!!

Angel

Your project is very interesting. I don't know the different (programs?) you used, but the result is very good.

this is sexy loving it

Really enjoyable listen. Great job on the mix.
I like it! Cheers!

Nice track, a great listen, loving it. I have so much to learn :)

Its a brilliant tune I really loved listening to it. Its well put together so thanks for making it.

Nice work mister.
Great beat and the vocal is perfect on it.
Its 6 in the morning here and i didd enjoy listen to your track with my first coffee.

Very sweet work overall - lovely vocals - catchy music !!! Cheerssssssssssssssssss !!!

This is a cool track you have knocked up i enjoyed my listen :)

i freakin feel you on this song yo thank you i needed this this afternoon best cheers let me know if you want me to remix i would love to work with you

As Gizmo said, A beautiful track - lovely title, great vocal and rhytmn

Beautiful track. Congrats!