Birthday In 3 Days Very Excited - Luvroxu

Happy birthday for yesterday.
This is a great track.
Well done.

happy up and coming young man, dont forget to bring us a birthday treat to share your day. your doing real well, Cru's reply is good advice, the hardest part IS production, it is the one thing that gives any track the scent of professionalism

Hey Luvroxu, congrats on the birthday!! I love seeing your talent and you posting loads of stuff, that's great. You have a sound but you're not repeating yourself, and that's even better. I hope you found a community here that helps and stimulates you, because having fun with this is so important!
Regarding the track, I agree with Steve that there's an audible distortion you can probably get rid of; you possibly maxed out something. Try to fix that and it will be even better, because this is a fun track.
Keep creating, I can hear the joy and excitement and the talent!

Happy Birthday. When I was your age I was just as excited as you to make music, and so great job on you for putting it out there for us to listen to, as I love the arpeggios and the 808 bass, really good choices musically. I want you to go back and lower the main bus gain and then re-master with a compressor/limiter so that the drums don't clip as much and sound distorted. The hardest part of music production is the actual production part. That is the key to sounding professional. What you eventually want is to find space dynamically for all these cool instruments you chose to shine in the mix. There are some free tools that can help you sound even better than what you have done. And there is so much info on the production side to absorb. But I really like how you approached this and made it work, so great job. So you know I only critique like this for the artists who I hear have great potential to grow and do good things ;-)
Cru