All Of You - Alessandro5c

Hey dude! as Baobou can be a problem of volume or saturation on your composition!
Michael

The only thing is that the vocals are to heavy then the song would sound better

I think the song has potential, but (I hope you don't mind me being honest) it's not yet finished to my ears.

1) One thing I note is that the vocals are distorting. Not sure if that's compression or something else, but I think you can dial that back and have more of your real voice come out

2) You have your vocals and keyboard and no other instruments which is cool, not so many people dare do that, but then you need to put a lot of dynamic and the arc of the song in the keys and your voice.

Right now it sounds the same at the start as at the beginning, and I think you can make it richer, by for instance how loud you play/sing, by maybe adding a bit more rhythm i the chords, etc.

Think about it. I think you and your song deserve it. Good luck man!